I'm awake, and I don't feel like I should be. That's not going to stop me from finding out why I'm here, why I'm awake, or why these strange creatures seem to fear me so much. I'm one of them after all, why should they fear a fellow equine?
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Hmm..., Does this means Luna can communicate with the Dark Realm and her Nightmare originates from there?
You want option one?
Rarity, what did you do.
Also, I hope Twilight manages to extract at least some information from Nightmare Moon, rather than just have her go 'I know something you don't know neener neener neener'.
Oh no. History.
Not how I expected that to go down but fascinating nonetheless.
I think Luna was possesed too 1000 year ago.
I hope Twilight/Goddess stay loyal to Celestia in future.
Welcome, one and all to the action. With some true confrontation and Nightmare Moon finally visiting our scene the issues only add up and quite quickly too! Wonder how our newest problem is going to react to our Goddesses memory loss.
Great chapter! Can not wait for the next!
Huh..... Interesting. Very very interesting! I'd not considered that perhaps the Dead Goddess was originally only here to reclaim something she'd lost. If that is the case, that's a very interesting turn of events indeed.
Also very interesting that Nightmare Moon knows of the Dead Goddess when apparently Celestia did not.
Oh the little things that are hinted at in this chapter, I love it.
I wonder if Nightmare Moon is going to end up as an ally against Nel-Baloth?
Also really hoping Rarity's idea of protecting Sweetie Belle wasn't to snap her neck and hide her body until her Goddess could revive her...
Thanks for the awesome chapter!
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I like the topic of history.
Can’t wait for more!
hyped to see what happens next
Great chap. Looking forward to next time.
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I thought it was pie that RD didn't like?
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But the thing is, that can still happen literally anywhere else. Basically, there's been 0 interaction between the eldritch entities and the ponies. I'm not counting Celestia talking to the eldritch in her mirror because it was rendered completely irrelevant by her subsequently getting possessed and from what I understand her mind destroyed. If there was interaction between them, meaningful interaction and it actually seemed like something was going to result from that then I'd say yeah, the fact that it's ponies does affect it. But as it stands, it could be Dumbledore in Celestia's place and Harry in Twilight's and it wouldn't make a lick of a difference to the plot.
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If it was a Potter story, MLP fans would be less likely to read. I, for one, bother reading it because Ponies. I find it difficult to read anything else the way I do pony things. It’s just better that way. Don’t care why. I’m glad I got to read this; it’s well written, and has Ponies.
Having given it some thought I think my biggest issue is that I'm the wrong genre for this kind of story. I'm Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagan trying to read Shadow over Innsmouth. All these impossible to overcome supergods and auto insanity nothing can stop it scenarios just don't mesh well with me and grate.
That being said I'm already this far, no point in quitting now.
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That seems to be the issue a lot of people who've either complained or dropped the story entirely have. I did write the story with cosmic horror in mind, and helplessness in the fact of something unfathomably more powerful is an inseparable part of that. It's definitely not a story that will appeal to someone who sees this type of horror and can only roll their eyes, I get that, and that's part of the reason I'm taking the sequel (and yes there is a sequel) in a different direction. I want to focus on the story (specifically the lore behind the story) and while I do plan to keep some elements of horror, it'll be more of an adventure/drama/horror sort of thing going forward.
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Aw, nuts. Now I know there's a sequel. Thats a spoiler for me. That means (probably) that the cosmic horror doesn't win in the end. Hrmph. I'll just have to keep reading to find out.
And yes, I am the target audience you've been writing for.