I'm awake, and I don't feel like I should be. That's not going to stop me from finding out why I'm here, why I'm awake, or why these strange creatures seem to fear me so much. I'm one of them after all, why should they fear a fellow equine?
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What did happen
Good story but if you continue to cliffhanger us I'm gonna sulk like no one has sulked before
Did she just vomit up the remains of Spike, or Applejack, or Fluttershy, ... or all three? Because that's kind of the bad feeling I'm getting here.
Did she spit out the real Goddess? Now she's Twilight with semi-Black Goddess powers? Hm. We shall see!
yes... my Goddess
Interesting, wonder what (if any) connection this has with Lovecraftian mythos....?
I know she most likely did something horrible , but I just feel sorry for her , as she is as much of a victim of the cosmic horror story she is causing as everyone else...
Only started reading this today, but it's pretty compelling, and I'm interested to see what happens next!
My bets on internal organs.
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Eh.
Dat works to
Well then. This story is thought provoking.
This is really good please continue
This shit is top notch
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Tell me about it
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I second that
I have to say, it's always interesting to read stories like this. Though also thought provoking. Now before you read the rest of my post, please don't take this the wrong way and understand that I'm just giving my own thoughts on this to you with no intention of criticism or rudeness about the story itself.
The whole idea of something other worldly and causing a disturbance in the world has always been sort of wrong to me. My personal day dreams and thought up worlds involve the ideology that nothing is out of the worlds control. "Control" in the sense that it will absolutely never happen- never, where something completely out of your control, or something out of your worlds control, affects your life. This in the sense that, if you are being robbed then okay, you are being robbed. But, it will never happen where you cannot at least make an attempt to stop it. Whether you are tied up and struggling against ropes, or get the chance to attack the robber, it will never happen where some foreign (other worldly) power simply prevents you from doing anything at all, no matter how much you struggle and cry against it. It simply wouldn't be fair. Not fair in the sense that its unfair your family dies, but that its unfair that such an impossible existence is what caused them to die in the first place.
I guess it's because while the story is entertaining, it would simply be horrible and wouldn't belong in a real world. The source of my interest in the story lies in the unknown that is causing everything, but if it never comes to light of what is causing all this then this story will simply lie in my mind as a story that isn't real.
I'm going to stop reading this story for now, but if I ever see that it is completed then I'll be sure to read it fully through. Because it just makes me too disappointed right now to continually imagine a world, where some impossible goddess (not in the way that its a fiction and shouldn't be canon, but impossible as in even in another fiction world- this should not exist as a fact) disrupts the life that we know should have passed and hurts everyone as a result, every time this updates. After all, your story could take a long time to finish and I don't think I could handle having this pondering thought process in my head for too long a time without becoming depressed or annoyed.
That said, you're writing a great story so far. In the future, as you write this story, I wish you good luck
EDIT: Also wow I did not realize my post ended up this long. Sorry lol
My guess? Twilight threw her guts up. Literally. As in, internal organs vomited out because the "Goddess of Death" doesn't need them. Either that, or maybe the remains of somebody else? She supposedly has the power to more or less create new life in a way (or reuse it, I think is the implication with Onyx Pie), so maybe she can also heal? We saw her kinda do it to Rarity. Maybe she did more than just snap the necks of our lovely Original Creepy Trio.
What did happen!?
And yes I only now remembered to actually read this fic
Nah she just threw up all those apple dishes.
Yeah fair
This is starting to become a very unfortunate habit with you.
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Why did I read this when I was shoving a biscuit in my mouth