I'm awake, and I don't feel like I should be. That's not going to stop me from finding out why I'm here, why I'm awake, or why these strange creatures seem to fear me so much. I'm one of them after all, why should they fear a fellow equine?
Page generated in 0.023 seconds
Total duration
818 users online
465,243 hits today, 2,020,241 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
looking forward to the elements reaction.
Don’t worry everypony. Wether this ends in therapy or graves im reasonably sure you can get a bulk discount.
9446713
I don't think that's what they mean when they say 'group therapy'.
This summer sun is going to be messy for sure.
9446727
Probably not. Could probably get the Apple clan in under some kind of family plan though.
24.media.tumblr.com/03ccb8f95ed36869602f832ad9da37bd/tumblr_mqy3f3TVbA1qgc0rpo3_500.gif
HERE WE GO.
Hoh boy things about to get super surreal
Pulling an all-nighter to read this entire thing was well worth it.
Oh dear, is Celestia going to die? Or will she become a host to Nel-Baloth and transform into Daybreaker? Hmmm.... it is interesting that the Mane Six ate together.... perhaps the Elements of Harmony in this are more powerful than they are in canon? Hmmm...
9446962
.... an all nighter? *looks at word count* At present, it shouldn't take more than an hour, two tops with distractions included to read the entire thing.
9447560
I'd say about two and a half, maybe three hours at my personal reading speed. Remember, not everyone reads at the same pace. And besides, I'm sure they didn't mean a literal all-nighter. Probably just going past when they usually go to bed, then again, I could be wrong.
9447566
9447560
The both of you are correct.
You know, it occurs to me how bad Moondancer must be feeling now that not just Twilight, but the other three also never came to her party. I feel like this needs to be addressed.
9447718
Sure, if I can find an organic way to introduce her into the plot, I'll go for it. Just be aware that with how things are right now, plot-wise, events might not go so well for her, but we'll see what happens I suppose.
I like the story so far, but I feel like explaining so much about the unimaginable eldritch horrors; who can make you go insane just from looking at them, takes away from some of the charm.
9448043
I hear ya, but I have to give readers, something to go on. I can't just have nothing explained for the entire story. This story itself is inspired by those of Lovecraft's works, and even he didn't keep his readers totally in the dark. There is much lore to be had in Lovecraft, and I aim to do no different in that regard. That said, there's still plenty of mystery left to solve here even with what I've revealed, so here's hoping you and the rest of my readers will stick along for the ride.
Chapter was deleted or what?
9497917
Taken down temporarily for revision, made a blog about it.
I get the real feeling Skal is there to defend, not take over...
Loving this still!!
I really liked this chapter, but was wondering
Isn't or is gonna?
9513059
'Is gonna', sorry, can't catch all the typos in one go.
Nightmare Moon...
Eh it's still an unimaginably well written and unique story and premise, but the exposition dumps are getting so tiresome and intrusive that I think my eyes are starting to glaze over. I finally start thinking it's going to actually continue but then someone else starts vomiting exposition and all I can do is roll my eyes and skim ahead.
Seriously this is an amazing story and I don't really regret reading up to this point, but I'm not sure I can continue. The pacing is just... bad. It finally starts going forward only to immediately grind to a complete halt once again.
Again with jumping right to the insanity. No 'well that's messed up, kinda giving me a headache I'll go somewhere else' no 'Holy fuck I gotta get out of here!' just go straight to straightjacket filling. Do not pass go, do not collect 200 dollars.
She's killing ponies and subverting their free will. Is she not a necromantic serial killer?
If I didn't know any better I'd think you were setting up a sequel where they go on a treasure hunt to track down the lost throne through the eldritch hellscape.
the7Saviors treatment of you so far:
i.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/mobile/000/028/207/Screen_Shot_2019-01-17_at_4.22.43_PM.jpg