I'm awake, and I don't feel like I should be. That's not going to stop me from finding out why I'm here, why I'm awake, or why these strange creatures seem to fear me so much. I'm one of them after all, why should they fear a fellow equine?
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Bet Dash wishes she was just part shoggoth.
Great job can’t wait
I wonder exactly HOW Rainbow Dash came to be in such a state. Is it something she inherited "naturally" from a parent or ancestor somewhere down her family line? Or was she possessed and forcefully changed? Or was it something else.
And now we know who gave Celestia that warning too, and probably who threw Twilight and Skal-Gaazath off-kilter as well.
I am wondering if their cutie marks still connect them from when Rainbow Dash did her Sonic Rainboom, or if he AU of this world has changed that. Soo many questions!
Thank you for the wonderful chapter and keep up the good work!
There are many things I don't understand at the moment and the longest night has just started.
Pfffffthahahahahaha
seems another eldrich dog tried to take from our twilight and she was having non of it. this just keeps getting more and more interesting
Player 2 joins the fight! Now we have two potential eldritch gods and Celestia to boot and honestly everything is slowly getting more maddening... this begs one question: how in the high temple of Tartarus is Nightmare Moon going to factor into this?
I like this story, I'm confused as all hell. I think It's going to be all okay though.
Also, fuck you Nel-Baloth, stop trying to ruin our Twilights plans, even if she doesn't know what her plans are.
Even if Nelly here is actually trying to help turn everything back to 'how it should be' I want Twilight to win.
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Nel-Baloth's chosen vessel? I mean, kinda fits.
I liked this a lot at first but now it feels too heaped on. like we are no longer figuring out the puzzle along with twilight, now it feels like everything is being explained in detail to the reader, and I really disliked the whole (bringing in beings that know exactly what is going on) and them explaining things to the protagonist and in turn the readers
it just doesn't feel like a mystery anymore and that's what initially drew me to the story, one of the most frightening things about the elder gods and horror, in general is you have no real idea what is going on, but now that is gone, and all we have left is ...whatever it is now
Edit: yeah I tried but I can't muster the enthusiasm I once had, I'm gonna have to put this one on hold until I can find it in me to continue
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Couldn’t of said it better. The whole “Rainbow Dash is also an Eldritch abomination as well” kinda rubbed me the wrong way too a little. Maybe it’s just the execution of it though. Still seems like a fun story though, even though the suspense is kind of dead now that things seem to be just being shoe-horned in. Still reading, still earned a thumbs up so far, but it definitely lost its luster a little.
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Sorry you (and apparently several others) feel that way, but I can't keep the suspense going on forever, at least not in the way I did before, the story would never go anywhere and I'm not a clever enough writer to write hundreds of thousands of words of pure mystery and intrigue. In fact, when it comes right down to it, this kind of suspense, while I do enjoy it immensely, is something I struggle with. I won't make excuses, but my real passion as a writer is creating lore, which seems to be in direct opposition to the mystery and suspense I was going for in the beginning.
In the end, it seems I can't reconcile the opposing components without sacrificing that 'something' the readers originally enjoyed about the story—or maybe it's just badly written, I don't know, that's for the readers to decide—but at the same time, I know there's some who don't mind the direction I've taken, so rather than try to please everyone, I've decided to do what I probably should've done in the first place and going with what I feel most comfortable with. Some might like it, others won't, but it is what it is, and I'm not looking back.
But hey, thanks for reading on anyway, even if you're not as much of a fan as you were before. It still means a lot.
Honestly I feel like Nightmare Moon is going to show up, realize there is something incredibly off, and then end up joining with Celestia to figure something out. Or just gets casually KO'd by the Mane 6 as a bit of an afterthought.
What's this? Morality? Open and honest communication? Ladies and gentlemen there's still hope for this nutty deity yet!