I'm awake, and I don't feel like I should be. That's not going to stop me from finding out why I'm here, why I'm awake, or why these strange creatures seem to fear me so much. I'm one of them after all, why should they fear a fellow equine?
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Well @$#%
well fuck
okay finally some Eldritch semblance of seance is being made here, though I feel that it was ultimately unnecessary now the question that remains is does Celestia still know?
Talk about a hard reset.
Causality is for the weak.
Going into the start of this story with probably the most fitting music track. The Shadow Plague from Plague Inc.
Well , that... "Fix" the situation , I suppose.
I just hope that Celestia won't be the enemy , because that would be a cruel development to watch , for multiple reasons...
Also , I fully expect somepony at some point to mispronounce Her name as Skull Gazer , because that wouldn't be too far from what she does anyway
So that was what happened a couple chapters back then. That would explain what exactly Twilight puked out after she waked up. (real gore stuff there)
Now I am very concern what would happen to Luna if Nightmare Moon does return on schedule.
Rebellion? Nah, hopefully not. That would just go wrong.
Great work can’t wait for the next chapter
Huh, interesting
AJ is clearly onto something, but how much she's aware of remains to be seen. Also, that reset was jarring at first, but after all was said and done there was really no other way for "Spike" to go about it. I can't wait to see how Twilight reacts when she wakes up, and how much she remembers.
You're overhyping your ocs bud. They're all infinity times everything forever ultra amazing super fantastic better than everything ever times chocolate apparently.
In other words 'they're bigger badder and better than anything canon can handle' not only grates after the first few times, but kind of makes having a story pointless if there's no threat to your ocs and nothing anyone opposing them can really do.
Also, I'm sorry, but 'it's super biiiiig and impoooooossible, and you cannot comprehend it without going insane' isn't scary without a deep atmosphere drawing you in. Otherwise you're just holding up a sign that reads 'be scared now'.
She literally snapped your neck and brought you back as a servant. The fact that you don't want to throttle her should concern you just a little. Consent. It's the difference between a villainous action and a benign one.
Pssssst hey, hey Pinkie, Pinkie hey, hey Pinkie, hey.
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You're literally reading a story based on eldritch horror which last time I checked it literally gets it's story from being like this. Do you just not like H.P Lovecraft? Cause it really seems like this isn't the story you should be reading.
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I can't believe you left this comment up. Dead account?
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Sorry for the Necro but this is literally Lovecraft stuff. It's full of "it's so horrible I can't even describe it, anyways let me spend two pages describing it!" It's clearly not meant for you because these oc eldritch beings are pretty much described the same as some official monsters from H.P. Lovecraft.
You won't enjoy this obviously.