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Scootaloo was an orphan until she accepted a changelings offer to become a family. Now that all the craziness with the changelings is over it should be smooth sailing as Scootaloo and her family try to live their life but nothing's ever that easy.
(Sequel to Lightning Strikes)

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Sequel to awesome fic? Sequel to awesome fic. :twilightsmile:

Now we get to see Scoots and her two mommies! :scootangel:

Woo! Sequel time! I'm so excited! :yay:

But then this happened.....
Well, Scootaloo when two people love each other
when two people love each other
two people love
people
:facehoof:

Law

I like it, it was very punctual as well. Keep up the outstanding work.

yay ive been waiting for this :yay: i wonder how this story will continue :scootangel:

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Twilight said "She sure can sneak up on people." in the Royal Wedding episodes when she was talking about Cadance. So it's valid.

989227 :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:.....touché.....

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Scootaloo did not ask her mom to change her appearance. Either way, its a good story!

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Scootaloo suggested that shiv have a pony form to go with her name. She was referring to how lightning made a new form to go with the name like having a matching tie and suit ya know.

Also what was the story before this one called?:derpytongue2:

Yay sequel! Lets see what zany adventures they can get into! :pinkiehappy:
(apparently 'yay' isn't a real word according to my spell-check...:rainbowhuh:)

989345 The first one is called Lightning Strikes

989347 Yay's a real word in my book.

989376 Ty im gonna read it later. :pinkiehappy:

2 awesome sequels to 2 awesome post wedding fanfiction in 1 week nice

NICE! Sequel to awesome fic indeed!

Oh, poor Scoots. She was an orphan. For a short time she had a mom. Now she has 2 moms, and they're both changelings. The bullies at school are gonna have field day! :rainbowlaugh:

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Until her two Changeling moms bust out the leg blades and chitinous exoskeletons. Then the bullies will pee themselves unapologetically and run away in testicle (or ovary)-shriveling terror.

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I don't think I've ever heard of that kind of terror.

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I've used the testicle version to describe a combination of humiliation and defeat. Basically I used it because it SOUNDS ultimate and total. The very gender-specific organs of power (in a cultural context) are shriveling in terror or defeat, as though draining the owner of their might. I included ovaries because there are a LOT of mares in Equestria, and some of them can be bullies.

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Well either way I'm gonna put that phrase in my repeater and use it when appropriate.

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Awesome! I got someone to repeat a weird phrase I made up :yay::coolphoto:

Nice to see continuation of great story :)

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And it will continue. Just at a slow pace I think. College is starting in a few days and I gotta focus on that. But I'll still find time to crank out a chapter when I can.

Sweet, very sweet.
I was also expecting more of a reaction. I'll just assume they're both going to freakout in private and then go back to being fine with it.

D'awww. Family togetherness. And the CMC being awesome.

Frankly, I want to see Sweetie make a lemon explode in the show. I already saw the comic (so I get the reference.)

sooo cute. i wonder what sivers job going to be

Waiting for more :D

The plot thickens and things get more interesting. Also, good to know they can have children.

Those last few words should be all we need to know what happens.

Meh, they'll fix it somehow. The elements are on the changelings' side, and everypony know the elements run that town.

interesting. witing for more :yay:

NOOOOoo that guy is such a biggot. poor lightning.:fluttershysad:

I know the story needs a villain, by why do people always use Filthy Rich when they need a rich jackass to harass the main characters of the story? The one time he was really given lines in the show he was portrayed as being the exact opposite.

That aside, yet another great chapter for a great story. Shit's about to get real I think. Now I really, REALLY want to know what happens next.

1130977 ikr and even at the end of the episode he tried to get Diamond Tiara to stop acting like a brat

I guess now is a good time to call up on a favor from Celestia, after all Lightning has done for Ponyville and in the battle. I would guess the princesses have a little more pull than Filthy?
And making Filthy Rich an asshole towards the maincharacter HAVE been overused (like Aziraphael pointed out), but in this case.... I think he's just xenophobic bigot, which makes it ok in my books to use him in that fashion.

well as long as the mayor isnt part of the group they wont have to worry about this to much

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Things aren't as black and white as Filthy being a villain. Just let me work my magic, you'll see what happens
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Hit the nail on the head with the xenophobe thing.

1131967 I suppose I've just become too jaded to FR's portrayal in fanfiction. 90% of the stories he shows up in end up with him being a douchebag with the only reason given being, "LOL, because I said so!". I should have known you would be better than that.....

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Meh, no worries. :pinkiehappy:

A good Lawyer? She's a national hero, she could call in the Princesses themselves if she wanted to.

Hmmm, are changelings even subject to Equestrian law? I'm sure they follow it to stay on everypony's good side but, could Lightning just ignore the legal summons as being a changeling?
Oh Filthy, why you gotta be like that? I'm sure the changelings could do wonders for your business. Need some "advertising" boom 20 identical mares.:rainbowwild:

1131380 1132297 Not to mention the CMC (who in their right minds wants to piss off the most destructive fillies in towndl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Applebloom.png ?) and the Mane 6, national heroes in their own right, which include (at the very least, watered-down versions of the following): A living WMD (dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png ), a friend to all animals/borderline beast summoner (dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png ), a geomancer (:duck:), a localized reality-warper (:pinkiehappy:), a rodeo champ (:ajsmug:), and the most magical living unicorn/PRINCESS CELESTIA'S PERSONAL STUDENT and her DRAGON (:twilightsmile: and :moustache:)

I think Filthy Rich and his group maybe out-gunned here.

Oh damn. It just got real. Fight for your family, Lightning.

What Lightning needs to do is tell Scootaloo. Scootaloo will then tell Applebloom, who will tell Granny Smith, who will have a few words with Filthy. Problem solved.

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Problem with that is Filthy Rich and Granny Smith are in a business relationship. He doesn't need the the product the Apple family makes because he has a department store, that's what I think he owns anyway. On the other hand the Apples need the money they get from Filthy. They can't go against him because losing him as a business partner would put a dent in their profits and possibly cause the Apples to lose the farm.

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Filthy's using a legal route. None of the others can get involved because this isn't just a personal problem anymore now that the court system's involved. As bad as it sounds Filthy's completely within his rights to challenge Lightning on her legal custody of Scootaloo because of the method Lightning used to get said custody. And even though Lightning's kind of a hero the Princesses can't get involved because they're the rulers of a nation and can't show favoritism to subject with this type of problem. If Lightning got royal help then others would want it too. It's all politics.

1197544 That still leaves the CMC. After all, children are one of the most destructive forces in any world...

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This is true but would destruction really help here? If the CMC were to take any retaliatory action it could do more harm then good.

Now we know how Berry afford all that alcohol!

oh sweet clestia. that is sooo funny.:rainbowlaugh:

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