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This story is a sequel to Discordant
Almost ten years have passed since Scootaloo helped free Discord. She’s learned to live with the consequences, but it’s never easy. After being fired from the local weather control team, she receives a letter from Princess Celestia, offering her a job as an assistant flight instructor for gifted pegasi. With no better options, she reluctantly accepts. But why her, what game is Celestia playing, and what exactly is going on in Canterlot?
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Interested, carry on.
Interesting approach. I am wondering how the parents will react to having a reformed terrorist around their children all day.
Ah, 'What could go wrong?' Famous last words.... Cant Wait
Nice start to the story and great explaintion on Scootaloo's "punishment" during the whole ordeal. It was also nice to learn and know that Rainbow Dash forgave Scootaloo for her part in the previous storyline and that they're now Sisters by adoption.
Interesting job offer Celestia has for Scootaloo, does this make the story into a comedy, because to quote an infamoust primetime show... "I smell a sitcom."
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one as I cannot wait to see what happens next and whether or not Scootaloo's friends forgive her as well ?
Favoriting this so I can get emailed about updates. UPDAAAAAATES!!!
Looks interesting, I wonder where it will go.
SEQUEL TO DISCORDANT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT BELIEVE THERE IS A SEQUEL! INSTA TRACKED!
encrypted-tbn3.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTsp-PuEtDAJfv8fz5jTGMP2uC_71xXsh6CPwcb5KfMoESdmfA2nQ here is a funny ass picture enjoy you deserve it.
encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTZiSY4zxSBKpHWiqF_kyM41ZK_FNOosfZNiS5s2bWi53LpAdGt here is one more for shits and giggles
I LOVE this premise!
This can literally go ANYWHERE!
Yay! Off to a great start!
Now I want to know what the other punishments were. But I'm glad that you made the punishments fairly minor. I think that works about right.
Really, what could go wrong?
EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yea! A sequel! Great job so far! Lovin' it!
I like this so far.
I can't wait to read more.
So, Rainbow Dash forgave Scootaloo, the two became sisters, her punishment was community service. I wonder what will happen next. I might recommend this one like how I recommended "Discordant."
*Sees sequel*
OH MY GAWD
*Reads it*
OH MY GAWD!!!
This story is awesome in it's own right so far. It can stand on it's own without the help of Discordant! Continue good sir!
"What could go wrong?"
F*yay*K, you never say that! EVER!
Oh, well. Hey, maybe this will turn into some thing about her cutie mark not meaning what every
onepony thought it meant.Ominous ending is ominous.
Also, insert obligatory fangasming over Discordant sequel here
So, I guess it finally happened. I made my own OC. Couldn't exactly fill the school with the mane 6 and background ponies
For anyone who wants a reference, I made a picture using General Zoi's Pony Creator.
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Edited as the previous image had expired.
Nice, I give you my thumbs of approval, if I could post thumbs without a jpg. So how long until the action? Haha jk nice work! if you need any ideas give me a PM!
Oh shit, just saw this. Fucking sequel.
Ok so I'm pretty sure getting banished to the moon is a longer sentence than being forced to do community service for a few years. Also, Chrysalis did know all the details, so you should change that part say "all five" or something like that, because you know.... Chrysalis doesn't fit the description of the four who were somewhat in the dark and received relatively light sentences
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Oops, nice catch.
I wonder what has become of Scootaloos friendship with Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle?
Looked at description in featured bar... then realized that it just got damn spoiled Discordant for me.... but like most stories, I hold off reading them forever.
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Oops, sorry bout that
I'll go put the sequel thing in the description first.
I'm in for the long run, no going back now... Already love it! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
I-I-i AM IN LOVE!!
Nice story, want to read more but two things. One, I believe it is spelled 'saddle' in "Most of them wore some kind of fashionable clothing or sadle, and Scootaloo felt under dressed"
and is there no fitting replacement for head to toe?
Other than that I couldn't see any other mistakes and I can't wait for the next chapter installment.
-Ambassador of the Changelings,
Dopple Ganger
Interesting first day for Scootaloo, but then again almost all first days on the job tend to be difficult.
Nice update and great start to the new characters introduced in this chapter. I can't wait to read more of them.
Plus, I think that maybe Scootaloo thinking of her whole cutie mark talent in a negative fashion instead of a postive one, right ?
Still please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline.
Thistleroot seems like a cool fellow.
And Coach Thunderhead... He's only slightly frightening...
Are Thistleroot and Scootaloo going to end up coltfriend and fillyfriend?
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Wouldn't surprise me.
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Haven't decided yet. I'm really not a romance writer, so even if they did, it wouldn't be a major part of the story. I have some ideas having to do with their friendship and Scootaloo's thoughts about her cutie mark and whatnot.
No Discord, heh ? Who's the antagonist then ??
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Angel Bunny.
1163878 HOLY MAMA'S MOZARELA !!! No but in all “seriousnez“, is there gonna be a real antagonist, or just an annoyance ?
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There will be an antagonist or antagonists of sorts, but it won't be an immortal magical being, and it'll be less fate of the entire world.
First. I hate myself now.
A sequel to Discordant? Why was I not informed!!!
I think starting this before you properly closed out the first one is a mistake. You should have gone back, fleshed out those last couple of chapters and sewed up those dangling plot-points first. Going from one unsatisfying plot closure to the next isn't going to help.
Uh oh. Cults are never a good sign. First it's the chanting and incense, and next thing you know they're trying to take over Equestria and destroy all cutieness anywhere.
Nice chapter!
I also have to dig in and point out something. Betrayal isn't a talent or skill--- it's a VICE. And it certainly isn't what makes her unique or special. The only reason she should have such a mark is if someone, probably Discord, somehow tainted the cutie mark magic.
Dang, just like Dash for Scootaloo to leap into danger like this.
Still I found it interesting that Apple Bloom isn't talking to Scootaloo anymore, I guess she got the Apple Family stubborness.
Once again nice update and great sense of danger for Scootaloo to be involved in and it was just after her first week as a Teacher assistant.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like tis one.
Oh so now we get conflict. Hope Scoots isn't dumb enough to join, she already did the whole betraying everypony thing.
Also nice that Rainbow gave her a happy childhood.
Will the original Crusaders be appearing at any point? It'd be great if they all make up, considering it was kind of Sweetie's fault Scootaloo went off her rocker.
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Didn't Spike say AppleBloom had had a grudge for two years? Sounds like something else happened in the ten year time jump.
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Well, clearly, you have been, otherwise you couldn't get to the story.
shot in the dark:
this is a cult dedicated to the downfall of Celestia, possibly trying to raise discord or one of the other villains. They also worship scootaloo for freeing discord, and turning Celestia to stone for a brief period of time.
how much of that made me seem like a complete dumbass?
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Still, Apple Bloom got the Apple family stubborness in her, if she isn't talking talking to Scootaloo after all this time.