Matthew has a dilemma: either find a way home or find a way to save this world. Maybe a certain pony can help him. (Takes place the day after the movie. Prone to edits, so expect them. Also, please don't be too harsh this is my first attempt.)
Any resemblances between the characters/story here and other pieces of work are completely coincidental. Link to picture-https://dsp2003.deviantart.com/art/MLPFiM-Doing-Loving-Things-to-Tempest-Shadow-709246841
Nice. Keep it up. 👍
Please keep this story going.
my only criticism in that you need to space out the sentences and paragraphs because at the moment it feels like I am looking at a wall of text
this led me to loose my place several times
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Forgive me if I'm wrong, but is this better?
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much better thanks
I'm reading this chapter right now, so I don't know if you fixed this on the following chapters, but don't need to click "ENTER" every time you finish a line, it breaks the text and makes it really hard to read
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Sorry, I'm still working out how to properly space stories. For some reason everybody seems to have issues with reading it.
Started reading the first chapter, immediately started having a stroke. The formatting makes it painful to read...