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Thanks for the tip. I knew something didn't feel quite right, but you've been able to point it out nicely. I'll be sure to edit appropriately. Everything will be past tense.

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I feel Spike going "OOC" would be appropriate for this story. Thanks for the comment.

Man, that was fucking awesome. OOC Spike is awesome and it is what got me to read in the first place. Now if only he could be like this in the real show.

I was liking it until this chapter, when it came to dealing with the two princess, I was expecting spike to use a more vocal form of manipulation, a play on words to indirectly ot even directly weaken her resolve by attacking things like ; How the ponies will never had never accepted her. How her own sister instead of taking the time to help her over come the darkness, choose to lock her away for a thousand years and so on. He really just openly insulted her, angered her where it wasn't necessary, when simple manipulation and word play would have be more affective and damn sure more fun. Than when her resolve was at its weakness, spike goes into his offer, but right not her anger and resolve towards the dragon should really make this plan fail.

Well, manipulation was on the agenda for the next chapter. His proposition was to be followed by total and complete manipulation (especially by words). Everything you mentioned was to be included, though at first Spike's plan was to utterly shock Princess Luna. His insults were meant to anger her - to alarm her and intensify sentiments of hatred and rage - because he knew emnity could be easily manuevered. From himself to somepony else in particular (Princess Celestia).

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I'm looking foward to see that happen.

well shit just hit the fan

I liked how he fucked with her before he made his proposition.

please more

Totally
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Update plz

This story is genius. I love how Spike is conquering everyone, especially his hold on Rainbow Dash. I wish this story had more chapters.

This doesn't seem like anything like the summary, can't even follow it cause I don't know what's going on.

its dead