As Spike matures, so do his feeling for Rarity, and his drinking problem as well. After a few nights at the local pub Spike finally tries his luck with Rarity, kind of.
This is just an extended version of my previous writing,expect more
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Amazing! But when it says the pub owner changes the sign, it says sighn
other then that, this was amazing!
Dear Celestia continue this!
You'll make Rarity cry if you don't! 
An extended ver yes please but u may wana toss rarity up on ur charcter tags she is pretty importent to the story after all
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Thanks i feel kinda stupid for not doing that in the first place
457569 will jsut do what everyone does when mistakes are made and blame the CMC
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Actually I was considering putting Sweetie Belle as another main character.
457866 well if she doesn't show up any more then Rarity's mention their i wouldn't you really wana keep the characters in the overview/summery to the main characters the ones that show up considerably through out the story and have a large influence over it frankly if Soarin, Twilight, and the Doctor don't have more lines and impact depending on the size you intend to make this you may consider removing them from your list as to not have readers looking for storys that have them as main characters and finding this where its really just about Spike and Rarity's relationship and their background charcters if they have large influences in the relationship between the two and the movement of the story though they should stay listed
But from experience i'v gone looking for storys about Spike and he has 2 lines but people felt the need to toss him down as a charcter once i came across one where he has 2 lines in a 10 chapter story but he was listed wanted to smack the author over the head..... with a club
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Don't worry, Soarin and The Doctor have plenty more lines and a huge impact, but the Sweetie Belle thing may have more coming to it.
458628 good stuff i always enjoy the doctor as a charcter at least when hes "the doctor" and not some random colt those ones tend to make me sad i mean come on let down people let down
458637 Now that I have my internet back, expect the next chapter either tonight or tommorow
570620 endless happy faces
GASP! This is going to be awkward
Oh i hope she did not misread him. How could she he said "you going to give me a chance?"
571008 But a chance with whom?
Damn Owl needs to be cooked over a green fire of vengeance!
Why does this emoticon have no top hat? seems I'm gonna need more green fire of vengeance
ive only read the top part and i know where this is going, trust me spike youre in for a hole new level of pain
680377 once i get my laptop fixed and off of my ipod i can upload more
I have a feeling im going to be rolling over laughing by the time i get to the latest chapter
It's been a long time , but don't worry, I haven't forgotten, the new chapter will be up later tonight or early tomorrow morning
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Yes it updated!
844498 I know, it's been a while, and this Is kind of short, but writing on the iPod takes longer
Daleks beware, the Doctor is in the house!
whoa whoa whoa....I want in on this pool!!!!
846212 I call $20 on it being sweetie bell
cant wait for the next chapter
sigh really rarity, just really?
sooooo short :(
974632 I know, I was in a rush to get it in before I depart for the US today
We really don't have much to work with to comment on.
I've been reading this since chapter 2 and I can't believe I'm barely going to favorite this story. All the more for me to say, as long as you don't cancel or put this story on hiatus I won't give up reading this story. Please don't let this be one of the things that keep you from doing what you have to do away from the Internet do what you have to do some of us have been in your situation you'll pull through.
Good Luck!
-Ace
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I know , its sad that I have such little time, but I promise that chapter 8 won't be as disappointing.
1127212 I'm sorry, i haven't had time lately, that and all the bad stuff going on, (drama)
not bad ace
pure going
your going.
Over it may be, but I'm still happy!
ASECONDONEYEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Check out my next fic, and watch for the sequel , it'll be about three down the road. And next is a shipping that has never before been conceived. The first chapter will be up tonight.
I want that Sequel. I love me some Spike and Rarity
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If its one about spike and rarity dealing with married life an or kids, I'm all for it. Outside of that, I'm not a large fan of most shippings in thezse series because majority of them make no sense.
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It is, and the best part is going to be where theyre living and the complications.
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The badlands?
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I would tell you if it wouldn't wreck the storyline
This was a good story but i can't help but say that it could be better if you slow it down and change the format of the story, other than that, I really enjoyed it.
1456205 I plan to do that with the sequel
1457106 YAY
A lot of "telling" rather than "showing", and you just sort of threw the drinking in there without supporting it enough.
Congrats on Spike and Sweetie, but i feel like Rarity has some explaining to do.
jolly good show mate!
OH SHEEIIT