When Spike begins drinking more heavily, he finds himself more and more depressed, that depression leads to a friendship turning into something more
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Break up the paragraphs more. It's a little hard to read.
Well that was cute
I like your style! Keep up the good work. I'm tracking you like a motherfucker.
who's sparkler? OH is that supposed to be rarity?
Not bad, although could use some more spacing so we don't have Wall-O-Text.
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I think there's a word filter of G4 > G1 ponies applied to FIMFiction due to it being the First of April.
Yeah, stinks for anyone who's getting a fic up today, I guess.
um it was something i mean yay sparity ending but in the middel their kinda started thinking i was getting trolled so um
yea
on a less seemingly rambling note wall of text effect ya could use some spacing between paragarphs make it easier to read by tons not sure why everyone seems to be doing that the last week or so but i digress
Thinking of making an extended squeal, or even an extended edition of this, Thoughts?
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FOrever!!!
Just read it and all for an extended version AND a Sequel!!!!
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Check my blog, it's in progress, the extended edition at least
"Spike me boiyo come on up t' the bar."
This... oh my Luna, this
. I heartily laughed good sir.
The rest of the story was alright, but terribly rushed and the formatting was horrendous.
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Yeah, i think i get the formatting by now, i am writing an extended version now but it won't be done for a few more days due to some family problems. And don't worry, the bartender is still the Irish stereotype we all know and love
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Hurray for Irish stereotypes!
Sounds like something to look forward to. Hope the family stuff gets resolved. That's never any fun
Yay for Irish Pony!