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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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This story is a sequel to Plush


"You know I'd do anything for you,/Stay the night but keep it undercover./I just wanna use your love tonight./I don't wanna lose your love tonight," -The Outfield, ‘Your Love’

A few days after admitting their feelings for each other, Spike and Sweetie Belle have started dating one another. Because both have yet to be in a relationship with anypony, they are inexperienced in the subject. Will things be alright or will their relationship be over as soon as it began?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

2874201 Yeah, I'll be the first to admit that. Not exactly happy how this one turned out.

The story was (Flicking hand left & right) good. :pinkiehappy:
YOU MIGHT WIN SOMETHING!!! (sarcastic) :rainbowwild:

Not your best story ever but, still good.

3027600 Believe me, I'll be the first to admit it's not my best work.

Lol I have been looking for a decent story so knoe I am interested

a bit lacking in the plot department, there wasnt really much of a conflict, at first it didnt seem like sweetie belle had a problem with being in raritys bath, it just seemed like spike was worried sweetie belle had a problem with it

well not bad of a work but I have seen some of your best works so I give this a 4/5

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