Read and find out it sounds like the old cartoons were they would say tune in next time on the next *insert show title here*

That's what I'm going for! Haha!

What's Spike got against Celestia?

Nrmally I prefer romance stories. But is always good to give into the darkness every now and then. And I have to say, this is a pretty good one. It is so good to finally find a "Dark" story that doesn't involve a Psycho sadic bitch Pinkie, or an overpowered Discord or Chrysails who are rape/mindbreaking every character on the show.

Hope to read more soon.

Spike's antagonistic sentiments towards Celestia will be explained in the next chapter. Remember how Spike ended up in Canterlot in the first place. :0

I'm sorry, but again I'm slightly confused by the timeline of this story. Um, was the conquer ponyville before this?

No, this scene is before the conquering of Ponyville.

Intriguing...

So what's cooking up there in that darkness-soiled brain of yours, Spike?

And just what are you planning to do with an entire country to battle against?

This oughta be good.

dark spike that could be a new MLP character right...

Thank you for the comments. Well, I am pretty excited about the process of Rainbow Dash's conquering. Yes, Dark Spike would definitely make for quite an efficient antagonist. That is the story I believe I can deliver. Oh, it will be a fun ride. Conquest starts with Luna.

very ooc for spike but still somewhat interesting. meh
do continue

Careful about changing tenses; you're switching back and forth between past and present. It's difficult I know, but it'll make things much easier to follow for your readers.

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So Spike's master plan is to build a sex kingdom for himself?