1036550 Hey. If you wanna go ahead and critique my writings, go for it. I tend to have a tough shell about it, even if I do try to defend what I write. We all make mistakes and I cannot change some of it, but I do what I can. I appreciate the offer nonetheless, even if you don't go through with it. It's mighty generous of you.

In any case, I do thank you for being so earnest in your opinions of my work. It's always nice to have someone put their thoughts into what they have to say about other works and I for one think it's great. Keep it classy, friend.

1032850 Don't even mention it; your story was more than interesting fro anyone to read really. Keep putting a lot of thought and care into your plot and characters, and I guarantee people will love this story. I like the connection you've made between Luna and Spike through a mutual acquaintance (Twilight) in a way that makes sense, but isn't overly exaggerated. I can't wait to see how you develop their relationship.
If you ever need a full blown critique, let me know. I try to be as fair as possible.

Howdy. Sorry I couldn't reply earlier - was way too tired, and wanted to make it nicer than "Hey, thanks."

Wanted to drop a comment saying that I appreciate you favoriting my stories and hope you stick around until the end. It's always nice to be appreciated. Even in small ways.

1022542 Not a problem at all! Great start to the story! I hope to see more chapters come out (I won't ask for any speed, but haste would be appreciated ).

hey! thanks for checking out my SpikeScratch story. you rock!