Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
Page generated in 0.061 seconds
Total duration
797 users online
739,290 hits today, 2,673,812 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Seaponies are cool
i try to like twilight's character, but in nearly every story she acts like a complete sociopath, so its hard to empathize with anything about her...
and dont even get me started on rarity, jesus christ, every story depicts her as a huge dick.
Vocabulary should totally be "lexicon" here.
yes they are
...Why did Pinkie and Fluttershy run after Aspect said he wasn't a pony? They freaking saw him as a human in Canterlot.
Celestia: Nopony hitting on my father without my permission!
Aspect: Thank you dear.
Celestia: Now I order you to 'polish' him 'thoroughly' so he will shine like a bronze sculpture by the end of the day.
Lotus & Aloe: THANK YOU SO MUCH YOUR HIGHNESS!!!
Aspect: (already winked out of the place)
Why did you stop responding to everyone's comments?
8171366
Busy writing future chapters, obviously.
8171429
The other guy was right, though. A couple of them already saw Aspect's human form, why in the world would they run just from hearing he isn't a pony? Pinkie and Fluttershy saw him in the first chapter, and honestly it isn't in character for Rainbow or even Applejack to run at something so mundane as words.
EDIT: Okay, you've added some things. However, saying Fluttershy is just "always scared" doesn't really explain why she'd run away from this at all. The Pinkie bit I could maybe get.
It makes no sense.
8171495
When does the Pink One ever make sense?
Besides, ponies are herd animals. If the majority of them are in a mood of fear, it spreads quickly.
8171505
Like I said, "because Pinkie" works for her in this regard.
But Fluttershy? Rainbow? Applejack? I don't see it.
You know something's off when I'm complaining that Fluttershy shouldn't be scared in any given situation.
8171243 Fluttershy is just naturally skittish. Everyone else freaking out probably freaked HER out. And Pinkie... She's Pinkie.
Said the talking purple unicorn to the ancient immortal human from another world
I just hope this doesn't end up with Aspect getting together with Twilight, HumanX Twilight is getting really cliche....
8171529 For me, the most believable reason would be that Fluttershy flew out because she worried about Rainbow Dash. And Pinkie loves overreacting.
a vary interesting chapter and it brings back memory's as I watched G1 when I was in school and I remember the seapony's.
in this clip in the bubbly is the original AJ and Megan.
8172512
Considering the tags for the story...
My guess is Rainbow. :/
8178998
I did the same thing to sparky brony one time when we ware working on a chapter.
sorry.
Call upon the Seaponies they'll save you for sure. Sorry chapter is good and liked Lyra figuring out the human aspect. And the rhyming part was cool as well.
I didn't know ponyville spa offered happy endings
*pored
*atlas
. → ,
*its
I still orship the fact that you can write for Zecora so well plus adding in the MC as well like that. Honestly I'm kinda jealous, since I've kinda been putting off doing anything in my stories with Zecora cuz i suck at rhyming, like a hoover vacuum levels of suck.
Did it actually say that they were in the spa I had to do a double take to realise who it was talking about.
8930657
there's a rhyme dictionary website just look it up in google, i used it whenever i needed to rhyme something for school
Sounds about right
It's adorable
Yet