Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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Will we ever learn who is celestas and Luna’s father is
Getting closer... only the Migration, Hurricane Fluttershy, Ponyville Confidential, and the Desert Competition await... soon. The wedding of a lifetime~!
So looking forward to reading what happens. Keep up the wonderful work and thank you for it. Enjoying every chapter!
Kinda want to see a mini chapter about the adventures and hijinks that the foals of the house get into. Between the 4 in the house and the fact its ponyville, something funny is bound to come out of that.
Much, much better. Finally got a lot of those issues brought up from the last chapter dealt with. Finally.
This chapter fixed quite a few issues regarding Aspect's interactions with Twilight. And to be honest, I'm pretty sure that this was your plan all along; having Aspect make those mistakes -and acknowledging that they were, in fact, mistakes- highlights his inexperience with such matters, reminding us that despite his recent successes in regards to romance, he's still fairly new to it.
In essence, it reinforces that despite having many attributes normally associated with the term... he's not even close to being a Gary Stu.
I lean new word everyday.
Jeez, I'm 24 chapters behind. Seriously need to binge before you update again.
i love that they have a name for the crazy shit that goes on in ponvile
HAH, hell yeah, Luna!
What are you talking about Aspect, you're still going around uncurbed
And YOU are making them more powerful
She's feeding on him too much
Ahh, Twilight Sparkle breakdowns, where would we be without them
In many, many, many ways... but it can also destroy the world soooo....
*eyetwitch* HAVE YOU NEVER HEARD OF THE BUTTERFLY EFFECT MISS BOOKWORM
I am Lyra in this scene
I do
.... Chryssie ?
But oh so rewarding
For a second there I thought this was a Monster Hunter World reference, but then I remember that Bon Bon is a monster hunter.
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Probably not. He'd be dead of old age, the fountain was what made everyone live so long.
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I said will we learn about/who he is/was not will we meet him
awwww nightmare duse care! how sweeeet
and nice chapter keep them upp!
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Yeah, but anyone who was alive to know who he was is probably dead.
And Chryssy once again proves Ponies, and humans turned ponies, are fucking morons as they can't fucking spot her when she'd right in front of them in a disguise that is essentially her in pony form.
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Don't think it's Chryssy. If it was Balanced would have felt her. Maybe it's just a normal Changeling but I agree, something is certainly afoot.
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Oi, I always proofread my comments, thank you very much. I just dunno how humans can deal with such small buttons to type with. Full keyboard is the Timelord way.
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Even if that was the case I feel like there would be better ways to accomplish that other than making the reader increasingly uncomfortable.
Ugh, so much to comment on!
like this, oh my
To the tuesdayitis crack, to the Jimmy Neutron cookie reference I did NOT expect, to adorable family funtimes, and then some. Like Luna getting in on Twilestia funtimes...
Good chapter!
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One major factor in all of this is the fact that the story is being released one chapter at a time. If all of the relevant chapters were released simultaneously -or if someone were to only start reading those chapters now-, the scene(s) in question would be far less... uncomfortable, simply due to the fact that we wouldn't have been left to stew on things for a week. If we'd gotten the explanation right away rather than having to wait for chapter 48's release, it would've alleviated most of the discomfort before it really had time to take hold.
Or, to put it another way:
It's the same phenomenon that makes cliffhangers so effective when used properly, allowing the anticipation and curiosity to build up in order to get people hyped for the next episode. Only in this case it wasn't anticipation that was being built up, so it backfired.
Calling it now. Emeraldas is Chrysalis!
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You ain't the brightest tool in the shed, are you? If there is an element of this story that I find grating, and it continues, I can decide that it will not be fixed and withdraw my support.
This story is not entitled to my favorite or upvote.
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I'd love to know why some people even feel this is a positive conclusion to the whole situation. If anything the way she responded (afraid she offended him) to the way he acted is a textbook example of an abusive relationship.
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You really need to get some hobbies if you have nothing better to do then to come and stir up debate in the comment sections of a story you're NOT EVEN READING anymore.
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Same, but what I'm really waiting for is the "Keep Calm And Flutter On" chapter, surely that will go over well with aspect.
I love this line.
Am I the only one picturing filly nightmare with Sweetie Belle's voice?
Midnight! Language!
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How did this get some many dislikes? Who wouldn't want to see Aspect's reaction to Celestia trying to reform Discord?