Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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Hmm... I have a strange feeling that Aspect may have a pregnancy fetish. Might have something to do with his literal hundreds of foals/grandfoals... and constant dirty talk of knocking his mares up. Dunno.
Luna: I assume my father was the only one in this relationship who doesn't wear his gender attire~
Aila: Make sure your coltfriend does not forget his lesson afterward, daughter.
Quip level: Savage as fuck
thank god. When he left twilight a mopey mess, i was sooo angry at him. Making the poor thing feel guilty about not giving the guy who walks in on her sex. Ugh.
Glad Middy is sorting that out. Though indignation aside, my own inner peeping tom enjoyed catching twilight in the act. I wonder what spell she was using and if she'd ever share it with the rest of the herd.
I am glad of the scene with Midnight at the end. I was not comfortable with how strong Aspect was coming on; I was starting to think that he wouldn't accept no, as every time Twilight said "No", Aspect asked "Are you sure?". I counted three refusals and four expressions of uncertainty. Compare that to the scene with Rainbow Dash, where he gave every indication of his willingness to walk away if she didn't just say "Yes", but "Hell, yes!"
It just... he did not come across as being respectful of her wishes and needs, so much as browbeating her into having sex with him.
Honestly, I hope he doesn't get Twilight. He is getting everything he wants constantly in his love life, like Dash caving, getting Bon Bon pregnant, and now getting engaged (soon), it has to end somewhere without him seeming too OP. He's already bordering Gary Stu as it is, if not outright being one. Other than DIscord, everything keeps going his way.
I now want to see Twily wanting to find out if she likes mares, having Aspect assume a female form... And proceeding to Dom him HARD. And then having his wifes catch them while Aspect begs to be bred. It wound be epic.
Kinda hope nothing else happens here with Aspect and Twilight. That whole dynamic was kinda ruined and sullied for me after the bit with Realm. Either something happens with Realm or Twilight go off with someone not Aspect and Realm related, other wise it just presses the wrong buttons for me and screams that a nasty fight is about to happen.
8781398
Maybe he subconsciously felt insecure in his soon-to-end bachelorhood since he has to get married soon? And I think he is pretty tactless in a relationship department if his daughters were any indicators.
*snerk*
Midnight, he is over 3000 years old and has fought the monsters of old and other Aspects... that is to say he has taken hits from creatures that can turn stone into dust... don't expect blunt force trauma to work
And to think, he's still only in "medium mode"
Ohhh, these two interacting is gonna be amazing
Aww that's cute, she thinks it will take that long for the next disatser to hit town
Holy shit.
Can we stop with this obnoxious noble bashing already?
It's bad enough that it's the most overused cliche in the entire fanfiction fandom but at least when most authors do it, it's one and done. Forgetting about them as if they never existed.
But here you just kept using them over and over again before they even showed up repeatedly telling us how these faceless people are so terrible to the point of it being annoying that you keep reminding us about it. Then when you finally have Aspect confront them they're literally generic cardboard cutouts that might as well just have had the words "hate me" taped to them and existed just so you can have Aspect act all superior.
And despite that hurdle finally being passed you still harp on about them with the additional "Fancy Pants is the only good one" cliche.
Just stop already. Either actually do something with. Or just drop it already.
I’m getting bored of the clop. It’s getting samey with him changing form and going “breed breed breed breed breed breed”, so I find myself skipping it. I also don’t care for the angle with Twilight and I’m far from the only one it seems. Enjoying things otherwise.
8781637
BOY...
Have You ever played Crusader Kings II?
The angle this story takes at looking at nobles makes it very relatable. Just faceless assholes ready to fuck-up your day whenever You are not ready.
8782186
Yeah... unfortunately I am starting to feel the same way
8781351
Yeah, that's a good point. He's being inconsistent. At first, he's all about consent and 'its all about what you want,' but keeps pushing when told 'no' or 'I'm not ready.' And it isn't the first time. He was told by all three of his mares they didn't want foals yet. Multiple times. Seems like every single time they have sex. Bon Bon was an honest mistake. But he is using Bon Bon as an excuse to justify pushing it on the others: 'I got one pregnant, why not try and get them all while ignoring their wishes?' And he is cheap when he does; when they are not fully in their right minds, only ever does when they are in the mindset where they would be receptive. Not to mention, like he's the one to talk about psychology around sex, since these are his first relationships in how many years? He put his views forward, that his views are the right ones, and not respecting what Twilight might believe, like her views are wrong.
8781474
I'll concede the tactlessness of his relationships is a factor in this. But the sub-conscious? The way he's acting, it would seem like he would like to add Twilight to the wedding, not be nervous about losing his bachelorhood.
8782186
Agreed. Its almost like the authors are trying to force clop into the story. We don't need it every bloody chapter. Get on with the plot already! The story one, not the one Aspect seems to not get his eyes off and dick out of.
8782357
This. All of this is spot on.
When I first started reading this story, everything just clicked nicely. It was a plot line I had wanted to see explored for a long time, but lately its all gone to hell in a hog-cart. The story part of the actual story appears to have ground to a halt in favor of the "sexy times" that everyone seems to be skipping anyway.
I want to continue reading this, but I just don't know if that's going to be possible. I'll give it another chapter or two before I make a decision.
8782537
If that's the case, this story is doomed to go from great to mediocrity. Even if it does pick up, they'll have lost the interest of many of their readers. And it was so good, too.
8782541
Yeah, the way things are here, convincing Realm to back down is hypocritical since he started doing this with Twilight. I mean, seriously? Walking in on her when its obviously something private? That would be something Realm would do, and Aspect tell him not to.
Its like they've made their own OC OOC.
8781483
I know right? Is he trying to get sued by Blizzard?
8782585
I personally attribute it to him being the aspect of balance. Aspects, no matter what, seem to be slightly controlled by their point of existence and slowly get corrupted over time without outside interference. Aspect of dreams creating nightmares, Fire trying to cover the world,and being a demon to boot, ice being cool headed and listening to reason when confronted, magic branching into every magic school and going power mad, Chaos going from mischief to havoc, yet still holding back and helping his enemies, giving advice. Aspect is Balance. One a base level it could mean he wishes for a member from every pony race in his herd. Got two winged, a feathered Pegasus and a nonfeathered thestral. Got an earth pony as well, so he's just missing a unicorn. And both his flings, Lyra and Twi are unicorns. There's also the fact that it's been getting steadily more peaceful as the dark aspects are reformed. Light and dark are thrown out of whack so someone has to fix the scales, and as it's been blatantly pointed out, he has to hold the power of the corrupted aspects and get rid of their influence. Influence that meanwhile is trying to alter him. He has a strong moral compass, but with how most of them wanted to either dominate or destroy life, mostly the former, some stuff may have stuck. It may also just be that he's addicted to sex after a few thousand years of not experiencing it. His mind is coping with what little help it can get. Then again, I'm not the author so all of that might just be little more than theoretical at best.
You and Aus seriously need to scale the fuck back on Aspect and the whole sex/foal drive. It keeps coming up, gets far too heavy in weight, and honestly him pushing is getting downright creepy. i get that it is a heavily focused Slice of Life story, but the plots running just keep getting eclipsed. It's getting to be too much, the two of you simply seem unable to realize or determine where too much is. Well, you passed it up quite a few chapters back, but now it's time to say something.
Curb it back, heavily. You're just shooting yourselves now. If you two want sex so much, take it to RPs. Sick and fucking tired of reading the same shit same pony(ies) every chapter now.
8782975
Agreed. For me the story rapidly went from one I looked forward to every week to one that I forget the existence of until a new chapter emerges. It was great for a while but now I don't know why I keep reading it other than habit and there isn't a whole lot of other stories in my lists getting updated.
DON'T have Rainbow fall pregnant.
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That's really all I have to add.
8782186
I agree with you here. We know that Aspect love his mares and they love him dearly. But I don't think I need the remainder for that in almost every chapters. You can leave those activities in the background most of the time, you know. For I believe there are a lot of storylines that can be put into each chapter without those clop parts. For example, I recalled Aspect promise to give Dash some lessons on her pegasus magic, right? And probably, he might take some time to properly tutor Twilight with her Sorcery skill. I bet it would ease the tension between her and him greatly.
It's funny, I remember being excited when this story came out because of who the author was. Say what you will about the displaced trope, but the Alchemy/Understanding series was a gleaming gem in a sea of shite; an absolute joy to read. I started this story and instantly fell in love, I had been all but dying to read a story about a "keeper of the balance".
I can't claim to have read any of Aus' work, but from what I've read and heard, he too is an amazing author. So, these two writing elites have joined forces to bring us "Foster Father for the Princess" which, logically, should be the greatest thing since underwear. I should be enjoying this. This should be one of the greatest stories on Fimfiction. But rather than being drawn into the story, I find myself more confused and frustrated the more I read and I don't understand why.
I can't help but think this is how it would feel if JRR Tolkien and C.S. Lewis got together after making Lord of the Rings and Narnia (respectively) and authored the Twilight series. Something just so out of left field, so unexpected that you're left scraping your jaw off the floor.
I like this story, I like the premise and I like the characters. I don't care that Aspect is kind of overpowered, I don't mind clop and I don't even mind the whole pregnancy fetish.
What I do have a problem with is that Aspect went from being uncertain about having sex to becoming a borderline sexual predator. The fact that he tells Twilight she just has to say no yet continuously pushes despite how often she refuses is really creepy and gets uncomfortable fast.
I don't like that clop is shoehorned into nearly every chapter lately. There is nothing wrong with clop but you are repeating yourselves. You can't just repeat the same scenarios with the same characters over and over again and expect it to remain interesting. If you are gonna do clop it has to be new and it has to be interesting, nobody cares about stuff that has already been done.
I'm not gonna give up on this story because the actual story is fun and interesting but don't expect people to just stop complaining about these issues.
8783038
That's where I'm at right now. Checked my updates, saw nothing, said "fuck it', and read the 6 chapters needed to get caught up again.
I don't really mind the sex thing, but having something in every chapter is too much. Add on the bit where he goes from "I respect your wishes and will wait until you're ready" to "foals foals foals, gimme foals now", and he comes across as an impatient, disrespectful ass. The Bon Bon "accident" thing I can understand, but Rainbow? Chill the fuck out dude. And then turning it into a game? It's a good thing this was the last chapter, because I think I'm done with this story for a bit.
do any of you know some quick, efficient, and mostly painless methods of suicide that are easy to perform thanks
OK, time to put in my 2 cents... Is Balanced Aspect afflicted with some kind of lusty asshole curse?
Because the guy seems to have gone from a kind and caring lover to a pseudo-rapey almost stalker.
I get role-play in the bedroom, but this now constant "I'm gonna turn you into nothing more than an animal for breeding" fetish has gone beyond creepy.
Then we have the more recent situation with Twilight. Aspect's "I won't force you into anything" and "It's all about what you want." Which he follows up with a significant degree of verbal coercion. He won't "force" Twilight into anything, but he will try to verbally bully her into it all under the guise of trying to help/teach her.
And the quantity of clop has gotten excessive. This story used to be wonderful episodic slice of life tales with the occasional bit of bedroom romance added in. Now it feels more like the Aspect porn channel with story bits as commercials just to break up the monotony between his fornicating.
I'm on a lot of the same page here. The full frontal lewdity has kinda lost its impact what with being so constant. If it means trimming each chapter to under 10k words consistently, that'll just mean the story is more narrative and less filler.
And we are indeed interested in how family life is going for Aspect. Between his adopted family, his created children, and his rapidly expanding pool of in-laws, there's zero shortage of stuff we'd keep coming back for, again and again.
Sure, give us clop every couple or few chapters, but it's every time now, and it's being lessened for its prevalence.
Also hi Belial. And hi Alucard.
8784944
Yes, and in the song ‘Stronger Than You.’ Thank you for confirming.
Just happened to remember that their latest blog entry (dated January 23rd) mentions that they have already "written up to the start of season three". Until the author responds with a new comment or blog post I'm going to go with the assumption that the story won't be altered from the current path it's going down.
8790656
There is most definitely a win scenario but it will require substantial effort. Basically they need to rework the chapters starting from the point the story began its death spiral. There is simply no other way to approach the problem at this point. There have been far too many chapters since the problems began for them to merely correct the problem with new ones that any attempts to fix it any other way will feel completely out of place.
Asking for donations may be part of the problem here. Once you bring money into a situation people start behaving in a completely different manner. If you have no intention of listening or responding to your community you're better off not asking for money.
8785613
Yeah, I've been losing interest in this story, myself, because of this.
He goes from thousands of years of celibacy, duty, and service to the world, to a pervy, stalky creeper?
My reaction to seeing new chapters in my feed is increasingly moving from "oh hey a decent story has updated" to "meh."
8790656
Hm. Well, I suppose balance would from the Equestrian standpoint be Harmony. So, theoretically corrupted balance would be corruption itself. Instead of working together for the betterment of all, he's starting to become more manipulative. Suppose there are other ideas, and I could certainly go on and elaborate but I'm currently eating and learning about ancient Egypt and artefacts so I'm not exactly focused enough for it.
8792255
If it's your boss, then yeah, you're right. But these are tips and donations kind of like a street musician. They can have skill and you just drop change in their cups, bucket, etc. but the random passerby isn't the boss. That's the way I see donations at any rate. That is completely different than a boss and employee situation. Which is why I said,
Calm down, Belial.
Well technically Middy did please Twi like no other. Just not in the way Aspect had in mind. Right? Bc I don't know about anypony else but I'm pretty sure there was no other around at that moment.
Hey, you got some story in my mindless clop /s
8784413
I can agree with you on all that, but the fact he's practically grooming Twilight is disgusting. The amount of clop has gotten to the point where I just skip it even though it often tickles a few of my kinks. I came to this story for a plot with occasional clop, not clop with occasional story.
10935242
It's a bit all over the place, yes... He's clearly manipulating her, a little, but then... she's an adult, and has been for a while.
I do agree that it's kinda turned into half-and-half, though. It was better at the beginning.
Huh, maybe it had something to do with how it's been essentially abandoned? Sometimes stories just... run away.