Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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"You don't understand; I need that Pie!"
SO CUTE!
That was a great chapter, please say there will be more of Filly Tia and Lulu in future chapters.
So far bob has to be my favourite Character.
I truly wish I could like this story more than once.
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Good catch.
“Oh, the mare I mistook for Celestia’s daughter?” Lulu asked.
“That was… an interesting day,” Tia murmured.
Possibly a reference to this Gem maybe?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/243263/a-joke-too-far
Another enjoyable chapter. Good job.
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It made me laugh so hard when i encountered It!
Don't you mean who?
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I am blaming Aus for all these typos, just so you know.
Great, now I'm going to have to wait a whole week for the next one. I'm sad now.
...So tell me again, WHY doesn't this story have a Comedy tag? Sure, it's certainly more serious many ways than Shifting Melodies was, but at the same time, you and Aus' have a certain style when writing together such that everything not-as-serious is often quite hilarious.
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But that Bob one was hilarious!
Man, when I read this story it's hard to not smile.
Beginning to lose interest in this story, and beginning to wonder why you didn't just use an oc pony from the beginning. You might as well have, since he is virtually always in his disguised form. Seriously though this doesn't seem like a HiE story.
So when will he stop using the disguise, and stay as a human?
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That is the exact reference actually.
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True, he doesn't take human form all that often. There's a reason for that though. And I even have a plan to bring some back into the spotlight later.
As is, it'll be some time, but there will be Humans in Equestria in the future.
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Right. Heard that before.
Sorry, but if he is going to be a pony virtually 99% of the time I am just going to stop reading. If I wanted to read about an oc pony I wouldn't have looked for HiE stories.
i just love lyras persanallity in this story funny yet not cringy just right
There is telephone in this Equestria?
Nice and funny chapter. Good job.
So... When are the CMC going to show up with those two like that?
The princess personality's in this story are just perfect! I love it!
Shadow: The cute was so much that it ran me over with a steamroller. DED.
Miss Lyra is now my favourite character in this story.
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Before I read the next chapter. Tia and Lulu with the CMC. mares and foals to the shelters, stallions to the battlements!!
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its a code red. i repeat its a code red!!!. all man head to the bunkers its dooms day in the form of three fillys and 2 filly princess.
may god have mercy on our souls
Wonder if she's tried Moon Pies....
The cake is a lie.
Oh NO its in my head now!!!!!!!!
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I heard this song at twice the speed growing up and when Luna started singing it I saw her bouncing around on his back in perfect rhythm.
Jesus Christ but this story lays on the "awkward virgin trying to sound sexy but having no idea how" thing heavily.
Cuteness.....Overload......HHHGGGNNNNN!!!!! Too...…..Much...…...Filly...……...Adorableness...…….Need...…...Insulin………
Seriously, you need to dial back a bit on the cute or you're going to kill your readers before they can get to the end. Love your work, and I'll see you next chapter,
Shadow Quill, Messenger of the Moon.
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Omg someone make art of that please!