Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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There is still some hope if even Velvet is saying she can wait a few years for Grandfoals.
OH, please let Chris breed Rainbow in his Human form, then there would be Anthro Ponies in Equestria for sure if that happened. Also got to say that new Cover Art you have it AWESOME, you look good as an Alicorn Stallion sitting there between your two daughters.
Huh, when'd you get a cover art? I don't think I noticed it before this chapter
..... Glida's visit is going to be fun.....
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because it's new
I refuse to abandon this ship , it's too adorable
It's one of his many flaws
Oh Aspect... you know it will
I WILL GO DOWN WITH THIS SHIP, IF I HAVE TO ....... i feel like i am being a little overdramatic about this..... oh well
Meh
So he can do that
Why do i accept that as a good enough reason
CMC
Told ya
Yes it does
He has seen things
There is no helping him, he will carry this trauma for the rest of his life
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That might be a while, Discord appeared in the premiere of season 2, while Gilda appeared in season 1. If Thadius is doing this chronologically we're gonna have to wait until season 5 when Pinkie and RD go to Griffinstone
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Nah, they'd be satyrs. Winged ones for good measure. Cuter than anthros, and less uncanny valley territory for the ponies.
Rainbow is super jealous of Bonnie now, I can feel it. But she'll wait, because they are actually reasonably responsible adults. Rare thing on smut stories. But this one does have a respectable plot, so understandable.
Twily is sooner or later going the cradle robber route. If she waits for him to be 18 or just magics it, that's still in the air.
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.... Huh, I had forgotten that fact, I had thought that the Nightmare night episode was season 1
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I'd think that mix would be more likely to make a centaur
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Nah, I'm guessing they will be Anthro Ponies if Rainbow gets knocked up while Balance is in his human form, also the idea of satyrs is a HUGE turn off for me since I've read a lot of stuff about them being like mystical rapists in many other stories, now the Centaur idea is good so I could think that would be better of the two idea's, but I still like Anthro's myself with Centaur's in second place for what the baby would be like if Rainbow got pregnant with a foal/baby while Balance is in Human form.
Good chapter, but.......please have mercy on Realm or something. You can just hear him die a little bit every time he interacts with Twilight or Aspect this chapter. At this rate its going to feel like some sort of 'noble self-sacrifice almost NTR' bs.
OK I could care less about the chapter atm and have to say Congrats on the great cover art and If you made it yourself it looks great if not Please pass that on to the original artist
Welcome back to Realm stans his dad.
At this point, I won't be surprise if Rainbow has already written erotic tales about her friends.
Good job Realm! You make a great first impression to The Mom. Now we only need to hear Big Bro's opinion and it's all set.
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Shining might agree with it just for how crazy it would be that two Unicorns ending up with 2 ALicorns.
the power of velvet
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Not gonna lie, not a fan of the twilight/ aspect possible ship. IMHO this fic seems to be turning into a bit of a generic herd fic :/. Hope this isnt the case.
I'm done.
I'm fuckin done.
Aspect has turned into such a fucking Gary stu that he isn't interesting or entertaining anymore.
He does despicable shit (such as cheating on his marefriends, or taking advantage of someone who is emotionally distraught.) and nobody in the story cares.
Those who do care give him the lightest slap on the wrist possible (a fucking prank? Really?) and are still reprimanded for it.
This doesn't even bring into account how the author viewed the complaints of readers as,"Realm isn't okay with it so it's wrong" instead of," Aspect is going to potentially emotionally damage not only Realm but Twilight" and decided to write Realm into a position where he essentially pushes Twilight to get with Aspect.
Of course, we can't ignore the fact that Aspect tries to defend himself to Realm with blatant lies. (i.e. I didn't push her at all into the situation.)
He doesn't even seem sorry for what he did. Twilight says she's upset, and he nonchalantly tells her to just think about it and talk to him later.
The story isn't even funny anymore. The jokes are either so obvious or overused that they've already lost all humor that they had, or they can't even constitute as jokes. Someone can predict Pinkie's randomness lol!!!!!! Haven't heard that one 1,000 times before.
It's actually draining to read this story now. I feel like I'm in a worse mood after reading the story than I was before I read it.
I'm just done.
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It does feel like it's losing what made the story charming in the first place. Still, I'll stick around to see if the author is paying attention to his own story.
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mm, I'm out too
I have a few things to say.
First off, to quote Scarheart, this story has indeed lost a lot of its original charm.
The sex is far too over done to the point of being actually a bit sickening, with no real buildup or reason behind it.
Aspect, as a character no longer feels, likable, and no longer the person I wanted to see succeed when this story started.
The other characters no longer feel believable nor relatable.
And the treatment of Realm, do I really need to say anything? he has been continuously handed a shit sandwich over, and over, and over, and I for one am sick of it.
And probably the worst part, is the "comeuppance" that Aspect received was little more than a slap on the wrist for what he did, what's even worse, is that you had the absolute PERFECT punishment siting right there, after all what could be worse than if Twilight's own mother found out? AND he had to work with her for the time being? that would have made this so much better.
Against my better judgement, I still have hope for this story, I want to see it get better, I want to enjoy this again, but if things keep going the way they are, I'm most likely going to have to join the others in leaving this story behind.
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you can say a lot of things about the fic, generic isn't one of them
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"despicable shit" you say, maybe from your own viewpoint, and you have all the right in the world to think that way and stop reading, BUT! that's only your viewpoint, sorry but i don't see the horrible stuff some people here think about aspect.
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repercussions? for what? having a different view on sexuality?
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so he is your normal sexual predator who doesn't force himself on others?
i'm sorry that you are depressed but not all things IRL can be directed to fiction, moreover a fiction that is based on the simple idea of out of balance male to female ratio, the whole land of equestria is different society compared to our own where not only same-sex couples are ok, so are herds. we can't apply our logic to a place with different social structure, they don't view sex as we do, hell even celestia calmed down and didn't kill Aspect the moment realm told her Aspect spent the night with twilight.
i don't think Aspect should be a saint, hell... you expect him to be the perfect being, he isn't... does he like mares? yes, does he have more than one? yes, did he plan much of it? not so much.
hell, did he forced himself on her? no, he stopped it before it went to far, but he did have sexual activity with her without stepping over a line he made to himself, with 3 more mares there why don't you speak about bon bon, rainbow or midnight? was aspect the only one in the room at that time?
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so lets hear it, what is your point of the argument? that aspect took advantage of twilight?
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let go back a bit with the story
Realm comes from a different time with different set of values compared to modern times.
we can see Aspect isn't the only one who growls
at this point Realm tells her that he is ok with it, forget your own personal view, think realm that has a different set of values.
oh look who dropped by, Twi... to his bed
and yes, we have this
so Aspect tells her he doesn't want to make a move, she kisses him... and things grow from that point, also include 3 other mares who don't see a problem with this... and yet Aspect is evil here.
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I can do it
the first part with Twilight and Realm is just so good it really shows just how much Realm cares.
i love the hole chapter exultant writing.
At first it was a good story,
then it became a good story with some clop in it.
Now it seems the story is only there to be a filler between the clop.
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im agreeing with your points about the last chapter i just dont see how so many people are misinterpreting her actions she kissed him first TWICE and he still asked if thats what she wanted to do and how can they keep bringing up cheating with his marefriends they were in the same room and bon bon even gave her consent with a nod if i remember correctly raInbow already has erotic thoughts of her friends and midnight is just horny all the time apparently the only thing they have right is that being realm sux
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he needs to be altruistic then and twi should have thought about realm also... but she didn't.
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single real life example, i don't say it's wrong or right but you can't project a life situation to a fictional once with a whole different set of rules and society. Twi considered to be with realm, thats called pedophilia if you try to take it into a real life situation.
in the end, two adults had a sexual encounter that they agreed on...
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I genuinely like the story mixing gen 1 and gen 4 it's ingenious with all the lore and all the world building and all the character development to just devolve into mindless clop it's sad. Don't get me wrong between adults sex will happen but it needs to be more organic not forced, please you have a great story the character development the Mythos but the clop should be a afterthought.
And I will take this as a stopping point. I'll hold out for hope that this becomes Shifting Melodies 2.0 and not where it seems to be heading.
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fic aside, Ken Ashcorp's music is great... we need a kenny in equestira fic
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That would be fantastic.
#GiveRealmABreak
Liking aspect less and less with each chapter. As for realm and the age thing, ithe would be way easier to accept the argument of him being too young if he and Artemis weren't the most mature male characters we've seen in the story in more than passing.
Now i remember why i found this story interesting and annoying at the same time.
Fucks sake man, please label the clop so we can skip it entirely, they break the pacing of the story.
I was liking the story wayyyyy more before all the clop scenes. Like come now there's been more sex than story. It's like his whole day is (maybe) work a couple hours then fuck then rest of the day away.
Way to go Aspect. Just tempt Fate again.
Tempting Fate this time, not just once or twice , but thrice . Yeah this can't end well....
The only problem I have here, is that she's going to potentially scar him (or so I expect) for something that she disagrees with. >_<
Like, what business is it of yours, eh?
Well, no scarring, thank fuck. But still, my point stands.
Realm +Twilight
I ship it