Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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huh.
Oh that was great! Go Twiggles go! Go Realm Go!
This is fun. More Please!
lol dat ending doe
Those two....
Fantastic ship XD
Draw me like one of your prench mares
I fucking lost it hahahahahah
hot, sweet, sexy, humor, and waffy. this chapter has ALL the good stuff!! and it just keeps getting BETTER
Yay Realmlight
Nightmare should just play matchmaker between them, keep on slipping dreams between these two. Very nice dreams
So if Realm and Light got together...would that make Rainbow Dash her mother in law? And The princesses, her grandmothers?
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This is why Immortal/Mortal relationships are stupidly confusing. You have friends who are now the mother/daughter of each other, parents who are children in comparison to the actual children .-. I have a feeling if Realm and Twi got married, along with Aspect and Rainbow/BonBon, Aspects family tree would look like a five year olds drawings.
lucky bucking colt
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If Realm and Twilight got hitched, and Aspect and Rainbow did too, then yes, Rainbow would be Twilight's mother-in-law. The Princess on the other hand, would be her sister-in-law because Realm is Celestia and Luna's adopted younger brother.
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Ah right, I got the princesses mixed up. Though now that I think about it, if we add Cadence and Shining into the mix then things get even more silly.
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You should see my family tree on my mom's side Two generations of brothers marring sisters (from other families, to clarify), then my mom's first husband and my uncle's second wife being siblings... Yah, the tree's pretty much strait at some points there
this is the reason i like this fic, like balanced aspect, its well balanced between clop and great story
We'll see about that in a year time.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYlJH81dSiw
ok first wow
second did i say wow.
this is a vary good chapter vary down to earth.
the idea Twilight cam up with for allowing the panting to move around i can see so many things this can be used for.
Don't worry so much about it
Obviously
You don't wanna know
And she, would bang you
I believe her, there is NO WAY she could control herself long enough to actually need a "cake vault"
Only one
Dang it
I agree whole heartedly
Yeah... that'd be weird right
I'm just a waiting for celestia and luna to accapella duet that song from the land before time about dad's. "Dad's can be a problem! Dad's can be a pain."
But Aspect has put his life into his balancing of the things like Realm did his art. How wouldn't it be a legit alicorn form? Maybe his human form is ascended or something?
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Yes. Little green is what I called him. Nothing else.
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No the princesses would be her sister-in-laws.
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Nope. Not his idea first. Moguera, the author of the Savage Skies series has already finished all ten books in the series for almost two years now. Personally, I love the fact that he's using the Three Pillars in his own unique way for this story. But I just think he should point other people in the direction of the place he got the names from because it's a great series, and the naming of those martial arts styles is unique to his stories and credit should be given out where it's due.
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Or...... GAHHH WHY IS THIS SO CONFUSING!
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Just because something happened in canon doesn't mean it will happen that way in a fan fiction based on said canon.
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Well, it'll be great if that really happen. 'course she could then wait till Relm old enough to date. (since alicorn is ageless) Plus, I can see a couple scenario where it would led to similar event in the canon.
You might see som grandchildren from Luna first... if she ever gets the courage to ask Big Mac
Please show us the "Girls night out"
So one of my biggest problems with this story are the inconsistencies.
This chapter you have Hurricane talking about how she would punch Aspect in the face if he tried anything with her but when Realm was introduced you wrote that his perversted personality was fostered by Hurricane in a backwards attempt to seduce Aspect because she had a crush on him.
When Blueblood was first introduced you wrote in chapter 7 that his family was actually descended from Celestia and one of her guards, Noble Blood, who she turned to for comfort after Nightmare Moon was banished, then you turn around and say that she's an awkward virgin.
When Bonnie and Aspect first had sex you wrote that Balanced offered to use a contraceptive spell but she said she didn't trust them, but then you turn around and say she used a potion and shared it with Rainbow.
Early in the story you had Aspect get hired on with the weather team, which only comes up like two times before you completely stop mentioning it and don't even make a note of him actually quitting, even though when he muses on his schedule it's clear that he's definitely no longer working with them, and when Rainbow is getting bullied about her herd relationship it's evident that he isn't around to notice.
The first couple chapters Aspect is completely blase about showing off his human form to Pinkie, Twilight, and Fluttershy and never once asks them to hide it from his friends but somehow that becomes a big secret from Rainbow Dash later in the story in order to cause a few seconds worth of relationship drama. I honestly can't believe none of them would have shared that bit of news with their friends, especially since they were ALL invited to visit Canterlot in the first chapter so even though they were too busy to make it that should mean that the ones who did should have tacit approval to share it with the others.
When you wrote the part with the Ball at Aspect's mansion Rarity made him a suit, but the the later chapter where Rarity made outfits for the gala Aspect talked like he'd never worn a suit before. Additionally the Gala itself comes up in between Rarity making his outfit and the event itself, but when it does Aspect talks about it like he doesn't know what it is and isn't even going until he's convinced by... Someone. One of his daughters, I think.
Aspect's power level in general tend to fluctuate wildly based on plot, with him suddenly either completely forgetting or being incapable of using various spells or powers whenever canon plot points come around so that the story can stay nice and stuck going over the stations of canon. For example, early chapters he was capable of using a silencing spell and specifically mentioned he forgot to use it when Lyra heard him and Bonnie having sex, then he never actually uses it and gets heard several times.
These are just the ones I remember off the top of my head, but I know there are more I'm forgetting because I know I've frequently been reading and come across something that frustrates me because it directly contradicts something you've written earlier. Things like this, your overreliance on maintaining the stations of canon despite wildly different circumstances, and various inconsistencies in how you characterize everyone (some characters flip personalities so often it's almost sad), really drag down the quality of an otherwise good story. I still enjoy it and will continue reading, but at this point I really had to mention the inconsistencies at the very least because it seems like a chronic problem.
Edit: also, the whole Realm/Twilight romance is totally creepy. He's fucking 12, no matter how mature he's supposed to be. The fact that she even slightly reciprocates his interest is unsettling, and there's really no reason for you to have made him so young if you planned that pairing from the beginning. There's a reason for age of consent being as high as it is, and it should really be higher. One of the last parts of the brain to be fully developed is the part responsible for long term planning and considering consequences; someone that young is not capable of informed consent for a relationship and honestly if anything makes me stop reading this story it'll be because you take this creepy "romance" too far. Sex with kids isn't romance, it's molestation. Plenty of studies show that sexual activity too young really fucks with people's heads.
Huh. I just do that because I have to deal with the other people in my head...
Oh, Twilight, you really have no idea, do you?