Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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Well, that was unexpected.
damn... the lewd was strong in this chapter
Guessing that should be "will"
Also... i need more!!!
Awsome chapter can't wait for the next one
...
in the begining
in the end
i enjoy this type of writing, a story with the right amount of plot
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Your profile pic says it all dude.
Well... THAT happened.........
Absolutely love the series. It's amazing. Love the Celestia wing pomf scene. Laughed for 10 minutes. Keep up the amazing work.
Haven't finished the chapter yet, but this is not ok.
I don't care if it didn't actually happen or twilight didn't actually mean it, you should never do this.
(EDIT)
After reading the whole chapter, it was good, that "joke" soured my mood, but other than that, it was good.
Today's chapter was brought to you by the word "Unf"
Because hot damn
Well, I certainly did not expect that kind of ending for this chapter... *sips tea and munches on biscuits*
I juts have one teeeeny weeny little problem...
The hymen doesn't really work like that. It doesn't act as a barrier that says 'Oh Hey! Guess what? I'm a virgin!' like how cheerleaders burst through the thing during the big football games. Think of it like.. a Balloon Arch! If you're not careful you'll end up tearing it. Believe it or not, a lot of women who have had sex still have intact hymens. And besides if the hymen really WAS a barrier, then all females who have passed puberty would be bloated masses of flesh. Because the barrier would prevent their periods from leaking out of them and thus cause a build up of blood that will pool up inside them....
Plus, would Ponies even NEED hymans tho?
This just opened up a whole can of worms to think about...
This chapter was brought to you by the word *pomf*
OK... that is something that always bugged me when I watched the show.
Now if Cloud Kicker actually heard that, she would probably say something about there never being "too much time with Cloud Kicker"
Not for long
He is the very definition of a noble knight in shining armor HOW DO YOU HE THINK DID THIS (and sorry Shiny you never stood a chance)
Daaaaaaayum *claps* bravo.
Also #DatAss...pect
i'm on the fence about Realm, i tend to cheer for younger dudes going for older ladies but this little dude is be going for waifu. i don't know what to do
great chapter full lolz by the way
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How about feeling proud for the little champ going for the highest peak? I mean, he was without a doubt the most enthusiastic admirer of Twilight in the story so far.
Well he might be her only admirer at the moment, but hey, he's got guts to do what he did. Not bad for a twelve year old painter who had been stuck for a thousand years in a painting.
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that seen with the book had me laughing like a mad man too.
OK and wow the sex tag is defiantly earned for this story in this chapter.
over looking the last 1/2 of this chapter the back story is vary interesting and fills a few things in.
I thought of something that would be hilarious. Realm meeting Cloud Kicker.
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That would be both interesting and scary at the same time... Only Discord or pure coencidence would that happen
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I'm sorry, but if that one joke can ruin your mood, then you mustn't watch standup comics all that often, if not at all. Bo Burnham makes that joke look tame in comparison to what he jokes about.
Soooo this is not in the ledger-verse then, considering Rainbows preferences there.
Psst. That's not quite how hymens work.
Otherwise, great chapter.
Not really big on the herd thing. I'm out.
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Yeah, for once I'd like to see the herd thing suggested and shot down. Just because it's there doesn't mean you have to make use of it, and just because one person is in love with another doesn't mean they have to reciprocate. But I guess I'll keep going.
sigh and I was really enjoying this ;-; sorry, I'm not much of a herd fan: I'm not against it or anything, I just personally don't enjoy herd stories so I'm out :l
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I thought the same thing when I got to that part in the chapter. It kinda ruined that moment for me. Although everything else has been great so far, and unlike other people I don't have anything against the herd thing.
Oh boy, if that was Celestia's reaction to Realm being a perv with Twilight, I shudder to think how her actual parents would've reacted.
THANK YOU! So many fics written that have the Mane Six being in their mid teens...
Yeah, no. Rainbow Dash is IN CHARGE of the weather team, not a position given to some young filly. And Rarity is an established business owner.
My headcanon for their ages at the beginning of Season 1:
Rainbow Dash - 23
Twilight Sparkle - 24
Pinkie Pie - 24
Fluttershy - 25
Applejack - 25
Rarity - 26
Spike - 16
All 3 CMC - 8
Big Mac - 30
Granny Smith - older than dirt
You have a fro in there, in the middle of the paragraph
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This was the last time i read the story, enjoyed it so much thought I might go back to it to get some more joy out of it. Hope too see this updated again soon dissapointed to see that it was on hiatus but hopefull for an update soon.
Ok so how do they know of the Gay Pride flag? Lol
Bon bon is breaking lol
And now Aspect is breaking lol
You know.....they should make a drinking game out of when a pony is broken....bonus points if said pony needs to be reset lol
Wow. Gotta day did not enjoy this chapter at all. It was, from my view, way to rushed from interested to sex and read like a huge male power fantasy.
Lil bit late I realize but here’s hoping the rest gets back to what made this a fun read from the beginning.
Sounds like a skill issue
:trollface:
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Meh, it simply switched over to porn tracks. ;] It happens, sometimes.
It's a little game I play - "Spot the track switch". Basically, you take a story and track what's plausible. The end goal is to spot the point where an event is so outrageously out-of-character/storyline that it exists solely as the path towards the sex scene (either immediately, or down the line). It's usually a scene that you just can't imagine going that way unless characterisation took a short vacation.
And you'd probably find enough people to call any of the [M] stories on here "a power fantasy" (maleness very much optional, heh) - and quite a number are that, in fact - so I'm not sure that's a very useful accusation. :D
But yes, I found it about as jarring as you'd expressed. I was enjoying how it all seemed actually kinda plausible, and this scene threw that out the window. But eh... enjoying it for what it is - a power fantasy, or just "making the protagonist happy from all directions" I suppose.