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A romance story with Twilight and Trixie, based in a world where Twilight and Trixie are a couple, and get together in secret to go on dates.
I see the concept and realize that this would be incredible.
I liked it so much, I was going to watch the author.
Then I realized that the author was Yukito. Someone I already watched.
YUKITO, WHY YOU SO GOOD?!!
You make my story look like crap!
So I'm gonna stop watching you and then watch you again! How's that sound?
I'm assuming you mean the famous Pinkie based one that begins with a C.
I like to imagine that, when Pinkie gets stressed out, she writes horror/gore stories to calm herself down, as opposed to going insane and having another tea party with inanimate objects again.
What makes this work, for me, is the scene where Trixie is explaining the origin of her Cutie Mark and totally abandons her third-person references, arguably her least-appealing characteristic. ("Bob Dole," said ancient human Bob Dole, "disagrees.")
And these are two ponies I wanted to see shipped: Trixie's always tried to maintain a distance from the rest of the world, and Twilight always seems to think that nopony will ever want her because she's such a bookworm / egghead / recluse / whatever.
This was awesome, I am defidently looking forward to reading more of this story :) update soon please 
Also I noticed you had some sentences that had some errors in it, if you want I read fanfics almost religiously, I could pre read and point out these errors if you wanted
Btw. Twixie = awesome
A good, fun story.
I thought Trixie's backstory was a tad cliche, but that just may be due to me seeing so many similar backstories for her, that I've become desensitized. I also find it surprising Twilight didn't comment on the Sonic Rainboom.
Oh well. Either way, very good. A nice late night read for me before I go to sleep!
And I don't think you need the sex tag. Everything you have is implied for the most part.
So adorable! Such a sweet little story, I can hardly wait for the sequel.
I'm going to pretend that said sequel is a definite thing, and not just a 'maybe', for the sake of my sanity.
As I read it, Boast Busters never happened in this world, and Twixie has never met the rest of the mane 6? In which case, Twilight's fear of telling them who she's dating seems a little over-wrought... only it's Twilight Sparkle so over-wrought and over-thought are not surprising at all 
Oh no, Boast Busters did happen. But Twilight never really had anything against Trixie in my mind, and I like to think they could easily get along if they just talked to each other for a bit (which is basically what happened. They met by chance and talked a bit, and found they had a lot in common)
Out of curiosity, what made you think Boast Busters didn't happen?
Thanks for clearing that up!
I read too much into "they met by chance at a sci-fi convention in Manehatten". I took that to mean "for the first time", particularly as you never make a direct reference to the events of Boast Busters. I now understand that they met again, after the events of that episode, hence Twi's uncertainty about [re]introducing Trixie to her friends. I was torn between the two interpretations as I read, and the wrong one won.
Hold on... *checks view mature box is unchecked* Wow... it's amazing what you can slip under the teen category 
I thought content like this:
Trixie was busy working her tongue over Twilight’s body, and all Twilight could do was fall to her haunches as she lost herself to Trixie’s teasing.
Was WAAAAAY out of bounds for a Teen fic. You learn something new everyday it seems. I'm not going to read anymore (sorry) it's too much 
if you catch my drift.
Ah, this was another great chapter cant wait for more! And my I cant wait to see what happens when Twi and Shining meet up. I feel will be super cool or super awkward.
While I'm at it...
The original plan was for her to be kinda like Twilight in Lesson Zero, where he sanity slowly slips away and she completely overreacts to the situation. But then I thought that the Princess of Love probably wouldn't jump to conclusions like that, and would be able to tell by being close to Shining Armour who he truly loved. So I'm still kinda thinking about what direction Cadance should take for now.
What do you guys think? Would it be OOC of Cadance to be suspicious and over protective of Shining Armour, or do you see her as a more trusting pony?
Oh come on! You have have have to have all four of them, Cadence, Shining, Twilight, and Trixie in the same room together or something on this cruise! The suspense of seeing that moment of recognition and realisation is killing me here! 
If you can't tell from that, I like your work so far
>>1317959 Well, we have all seen how trusting and calm Cadence was during her wedding. So I guess she can stay calm during this, but this was before Cadence was married to Shining. Cadence might not seem like the jealous type, but she can be overprotective. That overprotective side would eventually cause her to overreact to the smallest of misunderstanding.
Really love this story; it shows the actual relationship as opposed to most that only show up to the point that they confess and get together. I look forward to alot from this fic; Twilight's friends reactions, more of Trixie's history, the reveal to Shining and Cadence about Twilight and Trixie. Just so much awesome that I wish I could favorite this story more than once. : )
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