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Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )

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After a chance encounter in Baltimare, Rainbow Dash and Trixie spend a little time together working on a way to redeem Trixie's Great and Powerful stagename, during which the two discover new feelings for one another, thus setting them both off on their new adventures of romance together.

Cover art by the wonderfully talented Navi.

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Comments ( 538 )

This is different. I'd like to see where this goes...

Nice work so far, you have my intrest.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I think this pairing is better called Dixie instead of Trixdash. Maybe Daxie. :twilightsmile:

Yeesh, so many early downvotes with no reasons given. Do that many people really hate Trixie?
It's well written and an interesting story. Let's see where it goes. :coolphoto:

Not sure why dislikes.

I think it's cute. Rainbow doesn't seem jerky enough though.

2647152 You could also call it TrAsh!

/rimshot! :D


... Nothing?

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Pretty sure there's a small group of people with nothing better to do than just hang out around the front page and auto-downvote everything they see with certain tags or something in the description they don't care for or whatever loose criteria they use.

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How about using Trixie's last name? Then it could be something like LulaDash, LulaBow, or Sonic RainMoon.

And on the topic of the actual story, I think it's a nice start. Much as I like a good Twixie story, it's interesting to see Trixie paired with someone else, and having that first spark be triggered by their mutual issues with bullies/hecklers gives Dash a good reason to not just keep on flying past. It'll still be fun to see them butting heads as the story progresses.

Out of curiosity, are you familiar with Trinary's stories where RD was Celestia's student instead of Twilight? Trixie's plan for reclaiming her popularity just reminded me a lot of how Dash and Trixie became friends in that series.

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Ooh, snap! But, uh... Trixie and Dashie are not amused... :rainbowhuh::trixieshiftright:

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I guess people don't want Trixie taking Dash away from AJ or Fluttershy? And yeah, I've toned down her jerkiness a bit here. About down to what it was in S1, I hope.

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I think I know the one you're talking about, but I can't say I remember much about that story save for it being basically Griffon the Brush Off with Trixie in Gilda's place.

The two most arrogant ponies falling for each other? Can't help but watch this trainwreck of epicness roll along :twilightsheepish:

This ship seems interesting. Certainly nothing I've seen before. I shall read this! (eventually)

Oh yeah, this ought to be a lot of fun. I see fireworks in the future, both magical and otherwise.

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I guess people don't want Trixie taking Dash away from AJ or Fluttershy?

I think I have seen one Fluttershy X Trixie story.

Never seen AJ x Trixie ever. I did see Big Mac x Trixie once.

Trixie isn't shipped with a wide variety of ponies, oddly enough.

2647608 Other highlights include Trixie teaching Dinky Doo how to tap into the Dark Side (well, okay, more Slightly Dimmed), the original Sonic Rainboom serving as the catalyst for Trixie getting her own cutie mark, and Trixie choosing friendship over pride.

Just finished reading this, and I loved it :pinkiehappy:! Can't wait to see where this goes!

It's not often you see Trixie shipped with not-Twilight.

Yukito, how do you always end up writing ships that I really like? Do you just do it? Do you just have a similar mindset when it comes to shipping? Are you a time traveler who in the future specifically asks me what ships I would like to see? Are you an invisible squid who monitors my thoughts? Are you Santa?

Now, later Twilight shows up to complete the threesome right? :rainbowwild:

Ye gods, I'm horrible. :rainbowlaugh:

Shipfics are best fics. :rainbowkiss:

I'm compelled. Truly and totally compelled to see where this goes. I normally avoid incomplete fics unless they have more than thirty chapters, which says a mouthful about this. Expertly painted pictures. Terrific pacing. wonderful chemistry. I'm looking forward for more, and more.

Craine... :moustache:

yay i love rare pairings like this. can't wait to see more.:rainbowlaugh:

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I've seen Trixie being shipped with Spike once or twice.

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Is this a story where Trixie and Dash compete with each over who has the largest ego, then, over time, their arguments culminate in implied sex?

Cause, really, that's the only way I see this going, sticking with their canon interpretations.

2648507 No no no not twilight the alicorn but rainbows other mare friend Applejack and after a bit of akwardness brash shoting and arguing leads to a 3 some of dashie trix and aj and the skilled use of ropes by 2 mares on dash..... (now i have a nosebleed)

2647706 I seen trixie and Fiddlesticks (one of AJs kin) and i think there was a clop of trixie and lighting dust.

What i realy want to see is dash trixie and Aj 3 some. best unicorn earthpony and pegesas all in the same bed HOT

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Really? Trixie and Lightning Dust?

Two of my fave characters together? You wouldn't happen to have a link handy would you?

2647499 Why am i not surprsed the decpetacon made the worst joke.... I mean realy shockwave and soundwave would and could do better as a stand up pair then that joke.

Hmmm? A shipping between one of my favourite ponies :trixieshiftright: and one of my least favourite ponies :rainbowwild: , could be interesting.

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|<o>| "Why did the chicken cross the road? Because it was an illogical flesh creature."

2649422 No sorry and i cant remeber if it was a pic or story ether best i can tell you is use the brouer and set it for them.

2649559 hostly that was funny... (note i a brony gijoe and transfromers g1 fan so my idea of funny can be off)

Finally, some Trixie/Dash! I've been wondering how a ship like this would go for a while, so I'm glad someone's tackling it. Its quite enjoyable so far, and I'm interested to see where this goes. :pinkiehappy:

This I am liking a lot! it feels fresh. and believable! please keep it up!

Okay, this is rather interesting. You've got them both down pat, and seeing Dash with someone who's got an ego about her size should be... interesting. Also, I wanna hug Trixie.

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I've toned down her jerkiness a bit here. About down to what it was in S1, I hope

:rainbowderp: Rainbow Dash was more a jerk in season 1 than right now.

I would call this pairing "Trash" except it's actually really awesome. See what I did there?:twilightsheepish:
'cuz, Trixie... and Dash... and when you put em together it's.... trash.... Ahem.

Yeah, but it was actually really good. More please. :pinkiehappy:

...whilst she forced Spike to give her a massage.

To hell with TrixiDash! That right there must be a fanfic.

Well well well a new Trixie story from the great Yukito. Featuring not Twilight but Rainbow Dash, I am impressed, intrigued and excited by this concept. Off to a great start and this looks like it could be a decent length by the end, can't wait for the ride!

I'm really likeing the story, the characters are well written and the pacing is good. Looking formward to more!

Only gripe I have is that there are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors that detract quite a bit form the reading experience. Have you had an editor or someone read through it a couple of times to help fix the errors?

(2nd paragraph first word should be It's or It is for example)

2649234 2647706 I have never seen the spike x trixie one, but I have seen a Trixie x Applejack one. Was kinda cute. Had Trixie being all dominating and bossing AJ around, calling her 'little hayseed'. Made me love that nickname.

You have my attention, good writer. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Well, the shipping's original, but the name sure isn't. Anyways, I like.

Rainbow Dash let out a laugh, but stifled it quickly. “Sorry, it’s just, you were so insistent on me leaving you alone earlier and not letting anypony help you out. Why the sudden change of heart?”

Trixie’s face reddened as she suddenly realised how talkative she had just been. “W-Well, Trixie can just see that you’re not a threat, that’s all! If you’re really fine with spending your time with Trixie, then who am I to stop you?”

Aw, Trixie is such a tsundere. :rainbowkiss:

You've got a few missed words here and there, but nothing terribly distracting. Also needs a better title: "A TrixDash Love Story" is really more of a description.

Over-all, though, this is pretty cute, and I like how you play their histories and personalities against each other. Will be keeping an eye on this fic.

Holy crap I have been waiting for a story like this, I can't wait to give it a read.\

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This story holds a lot of promise, I am looking forward to the next chapter.

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That could make for a great (or stupid) comeback when people say your fic is garbage.
"It's not garbage! It's TrAsh!"

the first was a yellow Earth Pony mare with a curly purple and yellow man

Humans!!:twilightoops:
Otherwise, carry on!

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