Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )
Trixie returns to Ponyville to confess her love to Twilight Sparkle, and ask the mare out on a date. However, cold hooves get the best of her, and she realises that she must make a good entrance to impress her. And what better way than to show her amazing talents by wrapping up winter all on her own?
"That’s it! The Great and Powerful Trixie certainly is a genius! This is so great! Twilight Sparkle is sure to fall for Trixie!”
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I can tell just by the synopsis that this is gonna be good.
I approve of this greatly. Twixie is always great
Well, I suppose at least the ponies are upset more because she got it wrong than just that she used magic. Still though, these ponies and Winter Wrap Up. Freaking workaholics, all of them.
...Hold it! Last entry, Trixie and Twilight's relationship was on the rocks, and now she's back again to say she loves Twilight again! Trixie, baby! Either hook the mare or move on!
lol
Sorry, couldn't resist.
Anyway, I'm suffering from a criticism drought of sorts and am in desperate need to know the strengths and weaknesses of my own lil' Trixie story in its current state. I'm not comfortable Moving On with it until I get some overall criticism (sad, but true...).
I haven't reached the real red-meat of the tale as of yet, but as a person who seems thoroughly fixated on Trixie with his stories, I'd really appreciate your input on how I'm handling the story as of yet.
Well that was..........Expected
Oh, Trixie.
Great story! You deserve a Great and Powerful
!
Another masterpiece from the best Twixie writer
Good story, kinda curious on seeing a longer one someday about Trixie and Alicorn Twilight. Not 100% sure on the differences in the relationship compared to regular Twilight, but I can imagine quite a few ways it could go. : )
Not bad.
2543341 Good call, that's a Twixie story I'd like to see too.
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It would be even great if Twilight would introduced Trixie to her family.
huh... didn't expect that to be how it ended.
I expected it to end in them kissing. 
Oh well... can't let everything be true. 
A Twixie fic by Yukito? Instant like.
There we go. That's just the pick-me-up I needed today. Thanks!
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A Twixie story by Yukito? What is this insanity?
Not bad... just wanted to smack the townspeople. *Shakes head*
2543341 yeah i would like to see a twixie with alicorn twilight in it too
Those ponies in Ponyville are friggin insane I swear
. So glad this came out, really needed my Twixie fix!
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Objection! Actually, these stories don't have continuity. If they did, it's quite obvious "A Twixie Divorce" takes place after this! Take that!
2545421
Heh, my head cannon had "A Twixie Love Story", "A Twixie Clop-fic" and "A Twixie Divorce" in the same time-line and this not really anywhere. But to each their own. : )
2545421 You know what I hate about the internet? Even when you're trying to convey a spirit of joking[ness], people still take you seriously and respond as if you're trying to spread the ebonic plague (<- I know what I said and I meant it. :P). You couldn't tell I was kidding around when I said " lol [Line] [Line] Sorry, couldn't resist"?
I'm well aware of the lack of linearity with the one-shots.
Twixie remembers when she did this. Good times... Good times...
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Yeah! Not like it's his shtick or anything!
2546550
*Grins* Very cute and sweet, nice and simple and very fun. I can picture this being an episode (If they allowed shipping
)
2548578 So you're saying that the internet is a small, pink ball who sucks things up and then beats the shit outta you with them?
2550721
I want to say yes for comedy's sake, but I'm too infuriated by the thought that you may have not actually got the joke.
2551637 The internet turns whatever you say "right back at ya."
I get it, sugarcube.
Sweet little Twixie story! I did find two mistakes though. "Fac" should be "face" (somewhere in the first part of the story, on my phone, sorry) and a "tear rolling down her check". Other than that, no complaints! Good job!
Great work
Nice Story. The only thing that hits me by Surprise was that you have made Spike to be a Girl insted of a Boy
It's realy sad that this is only a One Shot, I would love to see a Sequel about how Trixi tryes to "Get" Twilight.
Very nice one-shot. It's always great to see more Twixie
Reminds me that I still have A Twixie Love Story on my read later list (but not for long now that I've remembered it 
)
Also, this makes me eager to see a full-length Trixie x Twilight Princess shipping story. Are there any out there yet?
Anyways, great work once again!
That was super good, one of the best twi/trix's I've read. I was concerned at the 3/4th mark when Trixie was telling Twi how she felt, but you handled it amazingly. And I also wouldn't mind a continuation
Sweetest thing ever though I would of like a sequel maybe.
I agree a sequel would be really nice. I would like to see how things end up playing out for the Great and Powerful Trixie and Princess Twilight.
“So you were the one who did all this?” Twilight asked, to which Trixie nodded with a proud grin on her fac.
.. My only question is, what the fac is a "fac"?
This guy should be called
"The creative and hard working Yukito"
No more chapters? This was too short.
Nice idea but it's really too short.
my ? is where she do with all snow? if was all melt then should there been a large amount of water?!