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Within his final moments, an inmate of the Rainbow Factory struggles with the reality of his situation. Every single second that ticks before his certain death, the pegasis questions the truth to what is really going on in the facility. Ultimately writing them down in a discovered journal, he talks about those frequent questions and the role he plays in this twisted place.
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Based on the song "Feed The Machine" by Nickelback
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Very cool!
What a great (and unexpectedly deep) short story! I liked it!
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Thank you, guys!
Wow... This was so deep. But amazing at the same time...
Their lyric video reminded you of the rainbow factory as
well!!!???
7925363 Yeah!
It was too perfect.
good story.
Have a blunt review!
This story literally screams for some kind of sequel. This could be a one shot, but it could also very well be a chapter (maybe the breaking point of the character) in a long story.
“Is this oppression just in my mind?
(Just in my mind)
No more questions, get back in line!
(Just get back in line!)
So pay with your life, the duller the knife, the longer it takes
(The longer time takes)
And now it’s your turn, the ashes will burn, and whither away
(Whither away)
Leaving your bones, out on the stones, picking them clean
(Picking them clean)
Carving the truth while harvesting you to feed the machine
(To feed the machine)”
Even people who don’t like Nickelback can admit this is an amazing song, which it truly is!!!