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After Twilight Sparkle finds a locked book within her new crystal library, she tries to open it.
Warning: This fiction depicts cruelty to both Twilight Sparkle and a book... but mostly to a book.
Thank you to The Dragon Club for accepting the story.
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I read irony.
Pique her interest.
'Purge' would mean the opposite.
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Hm. Problem with slapstick is it's visual comedy, and without the visual element, there's really not much to make it funny..
Plus, the moral felt flat to me. Oh well.
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4910361 Thank you!
Although I wasn't really aiming for slapstick, but more implied action with all the "BAMS" and "SLAMS."
Somehow, I can't help but be reminded of the story about perfection.
Oh Celeastia Such a troll
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If you procrastinate procrastination, have you procrastinated?
4912368 I think the short answer would be no because you would be doing something. Therefore, you aren't procrastinating.
Great story.
Man, I sure do love invisible ink!
From the description:
Do you mean 'accepting' perhaps?
4914322 yes...
(The real combination was 1,2,3,4,5 The same that was used on her baggage . .)
Twilight unrolled the fuse to the twelve sticks of dynamite she had tapped to the book.
Spike called out as he exited the castle "I think I hear Rarity calling me 'Spikey Spikey', Something about cleaning out a sink trap, See ya latter"
*big inhale* ... Ehh, I'll comment later.
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I am quite confused about this comment... Can you please elaborate your points since I am not understanding your criticism. 
4915218 A full review!
Please?
With 2,712 words devoted entirely to the simple concept of Twilight Sparkle opening a book, this story will either be amazing or a disappointment.
Just a little fun, The exploration of Twilights obsessions is a target rich environment.
, You can never go too far
.. Nice read lots of fun.
Like a Loonie Toons cartoon
Bamm ping ping BAMM ping BAM BAM , Sizzle SSSSSSSSsssssSSsssssssssssss >)BOOM(<
As the smoke cleared Spike returned with Rarity,, "Gosh like I told ya, she at it again"
CLANK Krumble Tinkle tinkle.. ,,
I'll be honest, it wasn't funny. It was kind of disappointing.
Let's start with the beginning. You know, for a comedy, I'd expect to actually get into the action rather than start off with a three paragraph's worth of exposition.
Second, like Frission said, slapstick is usually visual, and not literary. Often times it feels as if this wasn't meant to be funny.
Finally, the ending. Again, like Frission said, the moral feels flat. It looks like it has better use if Twilight screwed up in something rather than spent all day trying to unlock a book.
So, to be honest, this story was not that good. It wasn't terrible, but it needs improvement.
4919596 I thought so too. Thank you.
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You're Welcome, my friend.
LOL!!!
but OMG that poor book
but I SO WISH I HAD SEEN TWILIGHT'S FACE!!
oh yeah i loved that one!
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thats the point too. and she didn't learn it. 'ot to get worked up over nothign'
I liked it, because, just as with the perfume story, one of the mane six went mad, very mad. It's so over the top that it's funny.