Even after Trey and Fluttershy marry, some things are still unknown. Trey, luckily, has kept a diary of his life previous to coming to Ponyville, all the way through the current day. What sort of thought processes has Trey had? What sort of events have occurred since the ending of Flutterheart? Only time will tell.
Page generated in 0.131 seconds
Total duration
825 users online
601,108 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Now let me say that this is sort of an idea. I realize Flutterheart was wildly popular, and that the shipping was probably what sparked it. However, this story is more about my OC and what exactly he's thinking through his life with Fluttershy. I want to see how well this style is received before I commence any further with it. I will add that things will pick up. Probably don't want to start on this story, as this one is pretty Flutterheart-dependant.
There's also the feeling that I'm trying to do two stories at once: My diary, which is actually a story of me, personally, with nearly every detail taken from my own irl diary, and Flutterheart's later years, after they have kids. I will say that diary entries will, of course, include the marriage, but the build up must be there. I do feel like the writing after the diaries just isn't up to par. Probably because the diary is my most comfortable writing style. Seeing as I've kept one since 07, I've gotten pretty good at them. if popular enough, I may simply type my entire diary and put it up on the web somewhere for you to read, if you want to understand more about me/ my OC.
But yes, comments are welcome at this point so I can know what exactly I need to do to make this story more successful for my audience. I just want it to be up to par with Flutterheart, so I want you guys to let me know what you think of this thus far. I do have a fairly large portion of chapter II written, also. Anyways, some things have been changed a bit for the sake of story,but everything else is ripped off from my own life. I should sue myself for copyright infringement.
Sincerely,
Trey
Yes. MOARRRR!!!
I told the truth. Very nice, definitely gives a back story on trey (or you as you say in you're comment) i hope that you do keep writing this diary as i have already developed and interest to find more about Trey and everything that happend Prior to Flutterheart.
I'm really glad you decided to carry on the story, keep up the good work.
Well, with that, I might as well finish chapter two, and upload it tomorrow.
Let me add that essentially, what Trey's going through as an OC is what happened to me personally. Some things sound farfetched, but, yes, they happened. Coming up in chapter two, you'll understand our strange development as a couple. Hell, I may get out and write verbatim one of my diary entries during our short tenure. Anyways, I'm hoping future chapters will increase the 4.0 rating. If it ever gets below that, I'm deleting the fic. No pressure
at the beginning i thought a flutterrage moment was gonna happen when the sleep over part
2.6 from 17 ratings...probably shouldn't have left that comment about below a 4.0. I'll give it a few more chapters to clear out parasprites.
I like it. I like it alot. Keep up the great work!
Lol. Heels. xD
Sorry you got parasprited dude, hope it didn't get you too down to keep making these.
Good chapter. I think I got diabetes and depression all in the same chapter. Keep up the great work!
I see Trey and I both tried to suicide, sadly i had to end up going to the phycologist after the fourth try... Keep'em coming this gets more interesting word by word
Loving it! Keep up the awesome work man!
have some faces
Dude... Flutterheart was the first fim fiction, ANY fan fix I ever read ( well, besides cupcakes...)
You are my hero! I have recommended this story in a few comments. I am pretty sure my five star rating was five on this stupid iPad... Anyways, thanks dude. And don't call this quits you YOU will be called quits.
Nah, keep up the good work!
/) BROHOOF!! (\
Trey, you are the best!
Let me say that in chapter 3, everything dated is essentially from my own personal diary. I kid you not. That is what happened to me, IRL. So...don't judge.
Oh, and also, since this was, indeed, ripped straight from my diary, there may be some human names in there. I checked to make sure I got them all but if names like Claire or Colleen come up, let me know where and I'll fix that immediately.
So, Flutterheart was based off of your life? Or the Flutterheart Diaries is based off of it? Or this section? Sorry if it seems a little personal question, just curious. xD
So, Flutterheart was based off of your life? Or the Flutterheart Diaries is based off of it? Or this section? Sorry if it seems a little personal question, just curious. xD
Double post, my bad. >.<
Trey is based off of me. My name's Trey. I was really original with my OC's name, can't you tell?
Anyways, My personality in Flutterheart and some things mentioned in there are from my life. The entire Flutterheart diaries up to this point is based off my life. From here on out is when we get to the overlapping of Flutterheart. Flutterheart itself was a unique story built to cater to my thoughts of romance with the best pony ever. It just got popular for some reason.
And also, I noticed that it didn't get mentioned on the recently added board at the top. Maybe you can't see your own submissions?
Respect for this chapter.
Kudos to you lilinuyasha. Kudos to you indeed.
Somehow I can actually relate to these problems in this fiction about how society has changed so much and how "love" has taken a 180 degree turn from what it used to be. And I find Trey your OC or you have the same kinda thinking like I do. Anywayz bro you keep on writing and your doing a freaking epic job of it. One more question if this story is kind of based on your diary... Did you ever find that girl?
I would like to express my utmost respect for you and your most recent works of fiction of the Flutterheart series. I thoroughly enjoyed reading Flutterheart, the work itself being simply beautiful and heartfelt. I have found your recent work, The Flutterheart Diaries, to be inspirational and humbling.
The Flutterheart series as a whole has a level of depth and vibrancy that is rare to see in fanfiction, yet you have managed to capture this. Even more so impressive is the honesty you are willing to display throughout both works, expressing ideas and views on subjects that are often avoided. At the same time that your character is honest about his feelings and beliefs, he is also honest of his own past mistakes against these ideals, a bold display of courage. I believe it expresses a certain level of realistic beauty to have a character who is so 'human', rather than a perfect idol.
The fact that The Flutterheart Diaries is based on your own personal life is simply beyond commendable. I can not imagine that writing the current chapters to the story was easy for you. Clearly the events of the story are not only highly personal to you, but are expressions of the inner most 'you' that you are willing to share with the world. You are willing to open up your wounds, share your burdens with a community in a way that is simply beautiful. I would like to thank your for having the courage to not only write this story, but to be so open about its origins in your own life. Bravo, sir.
This story not only communicates your own personal emotions and ideals, but also drives the reader to review their own life, acknowledge their own past mistakes, and drive themselves forward to become a better person. As I said earlier, inspirational.
I look forward to you future writings and am eagerly awaiting the next chapters in The Flutterheart Diaries.
50703 Fleur is my ex gf, by a different name. Essentially, I did. After this chapter is when my diary stops, and the book continues on based off Flutterheart. The book's diaries continue, but my personal ones stop.
50891 Well, thank you! No, it wasn't truly easy, but I felt that this was a community that could accept me regardless. I'm just writing from my heart. I'm glad that my stories can touch ponies in a personal way. Somehow I feel like everypony, regardless of what they want to admit, can find some correlations with this story, Flutterheart, or their own lives.
Wow, all I can say is... I'm sorry. I can see what you mean, in this day of age, most women are nothing like I wish they were. It's all about drugs, alcohol, and most of all, sex with people. Sex is about love, and shouldn't be fooled around with. I'm a hopeless romantic at heart as well. I always wish I could find the perfect girl, but I usually just give up all together. You and me have a whole lot in common. We both see ourselves as inferior and we both feel like we have never done enough, and that everything we do isn't good enough, or it's mediocre. Also, we both admire people or things that we adore, and sometimes we admire to much. We even like the same type of women. The person who barely sticks out in the crowd. I think personality is way more important in a person than looks, but looks do help. We always wish for the perfect girl, but all we ever do is dream, and we always wish we could live a life of fantasy. Another thing we have in common is that we feel uncomfortable touching people. I would honestly feel extremely guilty taking any girl's virginity, mostly because it makes me think like I have defiled her, and stealing something that doesn't belong to me. "Taking something that isn't mine" is how you put it. But anyway, great chapter, Trey. I honestly like reading these, I feel like I am learning more about you. (I'm not trying to be creepy, I swear!
)
By the way, it was fun talking to you on Xbox Live today!
52067 Not finding you creepy, don't worry. Honestly, I'm glad there's ponies out there that can agree. I put this out there for people to learn a little about me. Here on out is where Flutterheart overlaps though. That's the end of my actual private journal entries. Maybe I'll type them all up one day. Maybe I'll post them on the internet. Maybe I'll make a book out of it. All I know is that somepony out there might be able to benefit.
52265
Either way, I'll be looking forward to it!
52265 I know that I probably sound like those people who say they are like someone when they really aren't, but trust me, I'm not. I'm a hopeless romantic, chivalrous in an age where chivalry is thought of as bad. Opening doors for women, not hitting them, and I'm met with "I WANT TO BE TREATED LIKE EVERYONE ELSE!!!
" I just want whoever I'll end up with to be happy, which gets me used a lot.
But meh. I'm happy with what I've got at the moment. I've got my own story where I can write about me, my own character that is essentially an exact copy of me, I've got an author (you) who writes incredibly awesome stories
, I've got books I'm writing, I've got music that brightens my day when I feel sad (often)... so despite the fact that I'm falling into the pit of a pointless life, I've come to terms and am making the best with what I've got.
Love the stories, Trey. Keep 'em coming.
I know how you felt (and feel) about sex, the term is so lost in todays society, its hard to be (im gonna regret this) the only virgin (well at least in my class room) but todays generation just force it to much, like if it were a game and not a special bond between two people.
53132 I honestly wish I was still a virgin.
53108 It's always nice to meet somepony else who feels the same.
This is actually really brave writing. So you have my respect. Well done, keep up the good work.
Trey, broski I can relate to whats said here man. I'm old fashoned as well and women of today are lost upon me as perfectly balanced with all the qualities I seek in many I too can't seem to find one that fits. Its for that reason I drown my sorrow under the hood or behind the wheel. Its liberating really. The ideal distraction, women get me down I pick up a wrench.
Whatchu know 'bout bein' a college-boy greasemonkey?
54337 Absolutely nothing. But I know all about drowning sorrows with great literary ability! If that counts...But you know, um, whatever you want to do is fine...
You, my good sir, have given me the most wonderful story if have read in a very long time. Thank you so much for writing such a superb piece of fiction and i look forward to any potential future stories that you write! Have you any future pairing romances planned in your mind or is this the only ship you plan on writing?
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Us hopeless romantics need to unite and take charge! Counting you and all the hopeless romantics that read this fic, we could form a small army!
What we do after we group up, I have no clue. 
54637 This is my mane project for now. If you want something even better than this, you should read Flutterheart. That's the prequel to this, so to speak.
54976 Yeah, i read that before coming here (I was in fact referring to the whole project together because they are so alike, splitting them apart from one another felt somehow wrong. Besides, reading this without the other wouldn't have made much sense ^^)
Forgot to comment on this before when it was mentioned in "Flutterheart", but kudos on the King of the Hill reference.
Also: D'awww as always
55859 I must be some sort of genius, because I honestly didn't try to make a King of the Hill reference. But uh...yeah.
"She didn’t say much, other than that if I needed apples or apple accessories, she was my go-to pony." I assumed it was a reference of Hank Hill's catchphrase of "I sell propane and propane accessories."
yet another good chapter! cant wait for the next!
55868 Oh. I didn't know exactly where that phrase was from, but I guess it was a reference, yeah.
Sldjnd.
Daww.