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Blue Breeze


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Two years after discovering his powers in the Everfree Forest, Blue Breeze starts high school in Cloudsdale, trying to survive the situation like any teenager. Can the blue weather entusiast juggle all the crazy ponies throughout both his new school and around his town? With determination and new friends to help along the way, he may just be able to.

This story is a sequel to 'The Mark of Blue Breeze' and a prequel to 'Continuing the Dream'. The first story I highly recommend reading to help you understand this story. As for the second, it's not necessary, but I would appreciate it, and it will help you get any references to that story I may make throughout this story.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 258 )

419445 oh yeah. i was getting this feeling that i forgot something... DAMMIT!:flutterrage:

Ahh moms eh? Let' see what happens next...

419717 yeah, i actually based quite a bit of raindrop off of my real mom

"*sigh* Besides the fact that I'm going to be completely alone without any friends or Haily to help me survive, nothing much."

"Aw, you're going to miss me." Hail jokes, playfully hugging me.

I push her away. "Shut up."

"Aw, it won't be so bad, Blue. I'm sure you'll make plenty of friends."

"If you say so."
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"Yes, I do." she says.

"But only losers get flown there with their parents!"

She starts hugging me. "Does it really make you a loser to show that you have a loving mother?"
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We go about the rest of the morning simply eating and making small talk. Doesn't this just put you on the edge of your seats?

Once we're all done eating, we put the dishes away and my mom goes over to the front door. "Come on, Blue."

"Just hold up a sec." I say. I rushed back into my room to grab my saddlebags, definitely can't forget those.
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We reacheded the schhol after a bit to see dozens of ponies hanging out at the front.

We landed as mom kisses me on the head. "Bye, sweetie. Have a great first day."

Everypony looks over and started laughing at me as she takes off. Great, school hasn't even started yet and ponies already know me as the mama's colt.


may have missed some stuff but basically, bold means wrong tense, (or right tense if you wanted the current tense), italics mean add, and underline means wrong word (ie: this= that) enjoy :pinkiehappy:

419847 i meant for present tense, so thats not an issue. i appreciate the help

419858 agh, present tense? there were so many words made in the past tense, I think pointing them out would be futile :twilightangry2: anyway, I'll keep that in mind for the next one, anyway, have fun, I'll get on the sequel tomorrow though, I'm sleep deprived as is :rainbowlaugh:

419870 i know that there are times that are past, but thats because certsin types of things in my fic that i write inpast. if i go over a character description or tell something that was meant to have happened in the past, i use past tense. everything else is in present tense. i hope that makes sense. if it doesnt, oh well. just know that if i use past tense, i have a reason behind it

...I would not laugh, I would envy you...

Ice

........................................................................I'm not sure to comment on this I'll just say, HAH ICE DIDN'T HAVE TO GO TO SCHOOL YET STILL HAS THE MENTAL CAPACITIES YOU ALL POSSESS!

well i wanted to say something funny but I got nothing, anyways, awesome so far :pinkiehappy:

Interesting, very interesting.

I can see possible scenarios right now.

So, just write and keep up with the good quality!

Yup, Thats Silent Charge for you, throwing ponies at walls and throwing textbooks from hell at others.
Alot of OC's?
This is going to be one hell of a fic.

421668 yep. blue breeze has 6 periods, a different OC teacher for each of em

421671: Well thats going to be fun.
I wish my OC could be in this, but then it would disrupt the total time frame of your other fic and then everything would be messes up.

421677 yeah, sucks how i really didnt plan things out, but oh well. theres of course still going to be other OC's besides just his regular teachers of course too

421682: Well duh, of course there is.

421695 eeyup. youll see some familiar OC's, but most will be new territory to most viewers

421699: Uh huh.
Those newbie readers........

421700 even you probably wont get most of them, dark

421707: Try me, I accept that challenge.:ajsmug:

Hmmm.... I should make my young-self in the creator.....

Gimme a few minute!

i just thought of something i shoudl have noticed LONG time ago. I deal with plants. Plants grow in the ground. Meaning they can't grow in the sky. aka im a ground pegasus like fluttershy. why havent i noticed this?

421720 i dont know. i realized that if you were to appear in this that your powers would be useless. its pretty obvious

Ice

And that is why my Oc skipped school

421732 not in kill's story. youre still screwed there

Ice

421733 Meh, oh and I read during the ad break so yheah.

421738 alright, but you may want to actually start tracking to stay properly caught up

Ice

421747 Fine I'll track.

421749 you can do what you want man.
p.s. streams still going on later

Ice

421753 When? DAM IT MAN I'M AN ICE GOD NOT A MIND READER!

Ice

421758 This pleases the ice god.

Can't believe I forgot to track this last night, fixed now. Looking forward to all the OCs. *stares into space for a moment* I sense a fight scene before the end of Blue's first day where he shall make a new friend during the fight and his parents are not going to be happy when he gets home. There's my random prediction for the day.

421823
Cute and as fast as hell. At this point I escaped a horde of attacking bullies and a manticore too.

Noone can catch me!

This story is already giving me tingling sensations.

423978 theres gonna be a lot of that. mr charge isnt the only insane faculty member

Jeez they're all nuts... oh that reminds me, I had an idea I'm gonna toss your way in a sec that might help with your picture issue.

Blue sign up for Photobucket. it'll trust me. just export the picture and upload them onto photobucket

Damn you need a proof-reader.

...

The funny thing is that I fell asleep in almost EVERY history lesson.

Seriously.

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