Midwife Crisis

by starshine_dash

The End

Fluttershy and Derpy awoke Saturday morning with ruffled manes and a smile on their faces. Fluttershy had taken up the role of big spoon as the pregnant mare was getting a little big around the middle to little spoon to. They lay, comfortable and warm in the sheets and with last night still in the air.

The yellow mare giggled a little and tried to untangle herself, "We need a bath."

"No, we need to stay in bed more," replied her wall-eyed lover.

Placing her nose against the grey coat of her mate and nuzzling in, the pegasus made some valid points, "If we go take a bath, we can get muffins."

Derpy tried to get out of bed in a flash, but failed miserably, groaning as she stood slowly, "Muffins, you, and the girls are the only reason to get up at this point..."

"Well, just another two months or so, sweetie."

"I know, I just feel terrible in the mornings."

Fluttershy blushed as she headed for the bath, "Well, we do exercise quite a bit before bed..."

Giggling, the other pegasus followed her into the bathroom and waited while the tub filled, "I guess I should stretch more."

"Stretching is always good, especially for a pregnant mare, I can teach you some wonderful stretches."

"And the innuendo flies right over your head again."

"Oh. OH! I'm sorry. I was never very good at that."

Derpy placed a wing around her mare and smiled, nuzzling her neck, "Don't worry, I love you no matter what."

"I love you too."

The two bathed, and eventually managed to remove themselves from the tub.

The baby shower went off without a hitch and eventually the big day came. After some minor, common complications, Derpy gave birth to a healthy pegasus colt named Summer Breeze and after a whirlwind of madness, mostly on the overly organized Twilight's part, a wedding was held, and everypony involved wished the couple many happy days.

Author's Note:

Yeah, I know, on hiatus forever and then this poor closer, but I lost inspiration for this entire story and it had gotten away from me in general. There was so much I wanted to do, but nothing ever actually worked in my head, and it sat there, on hiatus, mocking me.

It's over now, go home, and I might ship more derpyshy in the future.

Comments

[Dead_Page]

Odd, some off-handed remarks and implications mean the Sex tag is warranted. Good to know, I might need it then. I thought it was only for blatant clop.

Eh, I've seen this happen before. It's alright. Author attrition rate is incredible in the amateur field. Look at me, a fic four months in the making and I've scrapped it so many times it only has two two-thousand word chapters.

[starshine_dash]

1801834
Teen > Sex means hinted at and heavily implied stuff.
Mature > Sex means blatant clop
At least that's what I've come to understand.

[Dead_Page]

1801840

Ooh, I completely forgot the Teen rating. Thanks for clearing that up.

[Black Ptera]

A poor closer is sometimes better than no closer.

[fabianguzman18]

1801840 sequel?

[starshine_dash]

1801907
Involving what? Summer Breeze? the other foals? I got nothin'.

[fabianguzman18]

1801919 Yes and how dinky and sparkler would react to having another mommy and maybe deciding where or not to tell summer breeze about his father

[CBM8]

Sorry to see that this had to end so poorly, but I still think this was good story. Hope to see you endeavor into more DerpyShy in the future, possibly in the same timeline.

[lawldude69]

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[FluttershyFan84]

A wonderful story indeed! I hope you could get back into it and extend on it more. Never the less, 10/10!

[Zenaku Okami]

Ending seemed a bit rushed but aside from that it's amazing

[Carolusrex1]

Please, in the name of Celestia write a sequel

[Lore Horse]

Just finished. It is a good story, the ending was a little rushed, and it definitely needs a sequel.