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This story is a sequel to Rainbows and music


This is a sequel to Rainbows and music read it first trust me this story is so much more enjoyable if you read it first.

This story will tell what Thunderlane was doing during the events of Rainbows and music. also this story will tell what happened before Rainbows and music and what happenned after it. Also some of the characters from Rainbows and music are given more development in this story.

SEQUEL TO THIS STORY IS CALLED RAINBOWS AND LOVE LETTERS

(Rated teen because of mild cursing, occasional violence and some mature themes)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 34 )

HAHAHAHAHAH!!! TAKE THAT, THUNDERLANE!!!!

P.S. You should get an editor. This story would be 50x better.

Great chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

7513014 Thanks:twilightblush: it should be up in 6-9 hours

YOU EVIL IDIOT AND FOALNAPPER!!! WITH CELESTIA AS MY WITNESS, I'M GOING TO MURDER YOU SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY, WHEN I GET MY HAND ON YOUR PATHETIC LITTLE BODY!!!! U DARE TAKE SCOOTALOO, YOU WILL DIE!!! I DON'T FEEL BAD FOR THUNDERLANE AT ALL!!!!!

Also, Thunderlane is really evil.

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What? It wasn't supposed to be funny....

7513815 oh you don't even know what the future holds... *insert evil laughter here*

NOOOO DONT LEAVE ME ON A CLIFFHANGER!!!

Oh no he can't die! There could of been a third choice but, no. I hope he doesn't die:pinkiesad2:

WUT JUST HAPPENED?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!!?

I AM SO CONFUSED.

WAIT. *GASPS* SOARIN DID.... HE DIDN'T... DIE?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WELL, THUNDERLANE, GET READY TO BE MURDERED IN THE MOST SLOWEST AND PAINFULLEST WAY EVER.

I AM COMING TO GET YOU AND MURDER YOUR BUTT!

7516009 i dunno... i guess you will have to wait for the next chapter:trixieshiftleft:(i know... im so evil)

Noooooo I swear one day I'm gonna die waiting :raritydespair:

Nooooo this can't be happening, this isn't right.:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: what's going to happen next what will happen between soarin and dash? Will soarin be alive? Who will save them? Will there be a better way? Will there be a happy ending to this? what will happen next?

OH GOSH OH NO PLEASE TELL ME SHE DIDNT KILL SOARIN PLEASE TELL ME SHE KILLED THUNDERLANE PLEASE PLEASE:raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair:

7516687 i guess next chapter might give some answers...

Oh thank goodness soarin is still alive. Great that thunderlane is dead:pinkiecrazy:

7517951 like the saying goes "you get what you deserve"

*sees new chapter*

*reads new chapter*

*stares at screen*

YAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOARIN ISH STILL ALIVE!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*explodes from happiness*

7518474 well i'm clad that someone is happy:rainbowlaugh:

So wait hold up... did thunderlane just raped dashie?!:pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh:if so SREW YOY THUNDERSHIT!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

7624406 Thunderlane is a bit of an evil guy in this fic... but at least in this fic he doesn't commit a war crime like in my other fic. so that's positive... right?

I feel sort of bad for Thunderlane... even though he did some really bad things.

I can’t believe that two mistakes I made would end up living together one day

Wait what?!?!? Scootaloo is Thunderlane's daughter?


Also Thunderlane raped Dash...Never mind I hate him again.

AAAAAAND I thoroughly want Thunderlane to die in pain.

viewer discretion is advised, this chapter includes gore, violence and homicide.

Please don't tell me you're going to kill Scootaloo.


..... considering there is a sequel... I'm going to assume he's not dead.

That ending was so cheesy I could smell it from here.... AND I LOVE IT!

Damn I think this guy took a lot of haroin before writing this fic, he must have dislike thunderlane a lot in my opinion :rainbowlaugh:

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