Rainbows and jealousy

by Flat spin


Chapter 5 This can't be how it ends

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin


viewer discretion is advised, this chapter includes gore, violence and homicide.


”Dash! Help!” Scootaloo cried out of the bag.

“Shut up. no one can help you now.” Thunderlane said and flew towards his house.

“No! Dash will come and kick your ass.” Scootaloo said and tried to kick Thundelane trough the bag.

“No she won’t.” Thunderlane said and laugh. “Now you listen to me you little shit… we’re gonna pick up some things from my place and the go back you Dash’s house. and if you try anything…” He said and landed near his house.

He opened the door and picked up a saddle back from the living room. after that he took flight and flew quickly to Dash’s house.


“Dash what’s wrong.” Soarin said and tried to fight the pain ad stood up.

“He took Scoots and did this to you.” Dash said and cried.

“Who? what are you talking about Dash.” Soarin said and hugged Dash tightly.

“Thunderlane… he is a stallion I used to date… before we met at the club I bumped into him and said some things… I’m sorry this is all my fault.” Dash said while crying against Soarin chest. Her tears dripped into the wounds which made them hurt even more but he didn’t care about them. He cared about Dash.

“It’s ok Dash… he can’t be far.” He tried to make Dash feel better by bringing her into an even tighter hug. “Spitfire could you guys try to find him and Scootaloo. you know that filly who you met earlier.”

“Yeah sure thing… let’s find them.” Spitfire said and the rest of the ‘bolts nodded and flew off.

“Come on Dash it’s gonna be ok… Spitfire is gonna find her in no time.” Soarin said and pulled him away from Dash. “We should get to your place… I really need some rest.” Soarin said and looked at Dash who wasn’t crying so much anymore.

“Your right… Spitfire will find her… but let’s get home your gonna need so rest.” Dash said and looked at all the scars that the lightning caused.

“Ok… you are gonna have to carry me.” Soarin said and un folded his left wing that the medics had but a some sort of cast around it.

“Right broken wing… climb on then and let’s go.” She said and whipped off some tears and let Soarin climb to her back. and two of the were off.


They arrived at Dash’s house Soarin was in bad shape needing Dash’s help to walk to the door. Dash opened the door and walked in to see that all the lights were off... except one and right below it was a chair and on that chair was sitting a dark stallion.

“Well… hello there… it’s so good to see you two.” Thunderlane said and gave them an evil grin. Dash quickly left Soarin at the door and started walking towards Thunderlane. But then Thunderlane picked up a bag and threw the little filly on the chair.

“I wouldn’t come closer Dashie.” Thunderlane said and picked up a knife for his saddle bag and brought it near scootaloo’s neck.
Dash saw it and stopped. Soarin walked next to her ignoring the pain that he felt in his body.

“What do you want” Soarin said and looked daggers into Thunderlane

“Oh look at you… trying to be the knight in shining armour even thou you can hardly stand. you know for a wonderbolt you have some balls.” Thunderlane said and laughed. “Now let’s have a nice talk about relationships and why you should be dead.” Thunderlane said and looked at Soarin.

“You stole her from me… she doesn’t love you she loves me… her future husband.” Thunderlane said and pressed the knife right next to Scootaloo’s neck which made everything different’ one wrong word and she would be dead…

“I did love you Thunderlane… I truly thought that I was going to spend the rest of my life with you…” Dash said and started crying. Soarin quickly put his right wing over her back and tried to calm her. “But you did all of those things to me… you cheated on me… you hit me… you raped me…” She said and cried even harder.

Soarin didn’t know what to say or do… when Dash said that she and Thunderlane used to date he thought that it was… well not like this.

“That wasn’t my fault!” Thundelane said and pressed the knife a bit. it didn’t cut her just yet.

“You know that the deployments were long and lonely… and when you found out I felt terrible… and you hit me first… and you were asking for it" He said and pushed the knife more this time it did cut Scootaloo’s neck a bit. it made a small cut that was slowly bleeding. Scootaloo
tried to not cry but she couldn’t keep it in anymore. she started to cry.

“Shut up you little shit.” Thunderlane said and smacked Scootaloo across the face. “I’ve shouldn’t have listen to your mother and left you at the orphanage. I should have dropped you to the river.”

Scootaloo was crying even more when she realised that her biological father wanted her dead. It made her feel terrible. She always thought that he parents left her because they couldn’t take care of her even thou they wanted to. She felt like no one loved her. not even her own father…

“You mean you had foals before you met me?” Dash asked while crying too. he couldn’t believe that the stallion she told everything hadn’t told her about this.

“Yeah like I wanted to tell you about the biggest mistake of my life.” Thunderlane said and looked at Scootaloo who was still crying and bleeding a bit from her neck. She had crawled a couple of meters away from Thunderlane and was crying in the corner.

“You sick fuck!” Soarin said and charged Thunderlane. he couldn’t take it anymore. he had hurt Dash and Scootaoloo so much. he tackled Thunderlane but Thunderlane quickly over powered Soarin and hit him hard to the gut.

Dash could only watch as the two stallions were exchanging punches. Soarin was already weak from the lighting and his punches either missed or looked like they didn’t have any power behind the. But Thunderlane was trained in combat after all he had served at the air force for years. He dispatched Soarin quite easily and threw his body back at Dash.

Dash walked ran to Soarin and looked at him. He was looking even worse bleeding from his nose and mouth. he looked like he was gone through hell. but Thunderlane didn’t have any major battle wounds and looked at the two of them.

“I’m sorry Dash I tried…” Soarin said and tried to stood up but couldn’t he was broken. every inch of his body felt terrible. the pain was so bad that even Dash could feel it.

“It’s ok Soarin… it’s ok…” Dash said and kissed him while crying.

“Ok… now it time for the grand finale of my own…” Thunderlane said and picked another knife from the saddle bag and throw it near Dash.

“I’m gonna let you pick…” He said and grabbed Scootaloo from the corner where she was still crying. he grabbed her and pushed the knife to her neck. “Who dies Dash… the stallion you love and who loves you or the filly you adopted and rased as your own?” Thunderlane said and started pressing the knife harder at Scootaloo’s neck. “And make it quick or else I will… you have one minute”

“Dash… I love you and have loved you from the moment I saw you at the royal wedding… just make it quick.” Soarin said and looked at Dash who was crying bearly able to stand.

“I Can’t Soarin…” She cried and looked at the knife that was in her hooves.

“You have to... Scoots got her whole life in front of her… I’ve already achieved all most all of my dreams…” Soarin said and dropped a few tears as he guided Dash he hands and the knife near his throat.

“All most all? so there is still something to do… so you can’t die now.” She said and bursted into tears.

“Yeah… I wanted to marry you… and have foals someday… and live the rest of my life with you… but you are the only one that has ever been a parent and a role model for Scootaloo… I don’t want to take you away from her or her away from you… I’m sorry and I love you.”

“I’m sorry Soarin… I love you…”

“It’s ok Dash” He said and put the knife and her hooves near his throat.

They looked each other to the eyes and saw the real love between them… this couldn’t be how it was going to end… right?

“I love you.” They said in unison and Dash quickly did it.... and dropped the bloody knife…

"What have i done..."