Rainbows and jealousy

by Flat spin


Chapter 1 It wasn't only my fault

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin


Sun had just set below horizon and luna’s moon had risen to the sky. Thunderlane was in Vinyl’s club just drinking. Until he saw three mares enter the club. One was a with unicorn with a purple mane other was a orange earth pony and the third was a cyan Pegasus with a rainbow mane. Thunderlane watched as they sat in one of the booths and started talking about something.

“I should go and talk to her… She can’t be mad at me forever… right?” Thunderlane thought to himself and just watched as the three talked to each other. But when Dash rose up and started walking towards the bar Thunderlane decided to make his move he finished his drink and started walking through the crowd towards Dash.

“Dashie how you been” Thunderlane said cheerfully with a smile on his face when he walked behind Dash.

“Go away Thunderlane” Dash said angrily but she didn’t even turn around when she said it. Thunderlane felt the anger in her words and asked.

“Are you still mad at me?” She didn’t turn around to answer and just said angrily.

“Am I mad at you? no I’m furious!” Thunderlane felt her anger radiate off her and tried to defuse the situation by saying.

“Come on Dashie… you can’t be mad at me forever.” He said softly but she turned around quickly and Thunderlane saw the anger in her. Her eyes weren’t magenta coloured they were red with anger and it felt like she stared right to his soul when she looked at him.

“Don’t call me that.” She said with anger.

“Why are you still angry at me? Please tell me?” Thunderlane asked her. after all he had said sorry on multiple times and he wanted to fix their relationship but Dash clearly wasn’t willing to fix it after all she was stubborn and annoying… right?

“Well… Firstly you played with my feelings…” When she said that Thunderlane realised that he did play with her feelings…

“Secondly you never thought about me and how I felt you only cared about yourself…” It was true too he had put him and his career before her but he had to…

“And thirdly you cheated on me…” It was also true but the deployments were long and sometimes even soldiers get lonely and wanted to have
some fun… and besides he had already apologized about all of this… she was blaming him for every thing even thou she didn't take any responsibility for her own actions… this was unfair it wasn’t all his fault… it couldn’t have been…

“So please leave me alone and stop bothering me.” As she said that she slapped Thunderlane across his cheeks and at that moment he snapped. he couldn’t believe how she was acting… she was always the one who couldn’t be reasonable… it was her who was wrong and it was her fault…

“Oh that’s it you’ll regret doing that you bitch.” He angrily said and grunted at her but she already left for the bar. Thunderlane kept looking at her with anger in his eyes.

He couldn’t believe how she was acting he wanted to make things right… he was always the one doing the right decisions. she always just blamed him for everything. he felt like the room was slowly collapsing on him. he knew that he needed to get you of the club quickly and talk to somepony. So he quickly started walking through the crowd towards the door. Ponies kept bumping in to him as he walked on and when he got to the door and opened it he crashed in to a Pegasus stallion who was looking at him.

“Watch it jackass!” Thunderlane yelled and gave an angry glare to the baby blue stallion he had bumped in to.

“Sorry… no need to get angry at me dude.” The baby blue stallion with blue mane said to him. he just got up and said angrily.

“Whatever.” And walked off. he could here ponies talk behind him but he couldn’t care more about them.

He walked through Ponyville looking at the closed shops and empty parks. He walked past Sugar cube corner where he had met Dash first time. he could remember it like yesterday…


It was two or three years ago. He had just bought a freshly baked pie and was walking out of the store but when he opened the door he walked straight into a cyan mere with magenta eyes and rainbow mane.

“I’m terribly sorry miss…” Thunderlane started.

“It’s ok… my name is Rainbow Dash. I’m new in town.”

“Oh my name is Thunderlane… Where did you move here from?”

“I lived in Cloudsdale… but I moved here because of the job that I got offered.”

“Would you like to discuss more about this… I just bought a pie so if you want we can share.” Thunderlane said cheerfully and looked it to her
eyes… they were so beautiful.

“Yeah sure thing.” Dash answered back and two of them walked off.


After that memory Thunderlane came to the fountain park that was located near Sugar cube corner. It was where the two them shared their first kiss. right on that bench next to the fountain on a night just like this one the stars were beautiful and it was a warm summer night.


“Rainbow Dash?”

“What is it Thunderlane?”

“I love you”

“I love you too” She said back to him and they kissed not with passion or lust but with care and love…


Now days that care and love are replace by anger and hate… where did it all go wrong he wondered. He knew that he needed to talk to somepony but to who… his parents lived in Cloudsdale and his brother Rumble was too young to understand… Then he realised his best friend since flight school he would understand. He ran through Ponyville in the moon light hoping that he hadn’t yet left. hoping that he could clear his head after all he had helped him always even when everything was going wrong.

He came to a stop near a regular looking house he could still see the lights on and movement inside. the house wasn’t big. it was like all the other houses in Ponyville.

He walked to the door through a small garden and looked at the door. it read "Cpt. F spin." he took a long breath and knocked on the door twice.

“Coming” he could hear a voice from inside the house and the door opened.

“Thunderlane?”