Rainbows and jealousy

by Flat spin


Chapter 4 What a show

MLP: FiM
Rainbows and jealousy
By: flat spin


”Dive trough a thundercloud… hehehe…” Thunderlane gave an evil laugh and flew out of Dash’s house to the clear sky.

“I’ll show that show pony why they call me THUNDERlane. and that should teach you to never steal anyone’s mare again you little shit.” Thunderlane said with an evil tone and flew to his house.

He opened his door and took a look around the house. he saw his little brother playing in the living room.

“Thunderlane were where you last night… I thought something bad happened.” The small grey colt said and looked at him.

“sorry Rumble… maybe you should get to mom and pops now… I need to do something.” Thunderlane said and gave the colt some bits.

“Come on Thunderlane… I don’t want to go home just yet.” Rumble said.

“Sorry… now get moving… you know where to go.” Thunderlane said and pointed at the door.

“Fine… see you soon.” Rumble said and flew off south towards Cloudsdale.

The flight to Cloudsdale wasn’t too long but it was a lot easier to go there by train. he knew his little brother could do the trip easily own his own… or was he again just being irresponsible… anyway he had something to plot and not worry about his brother.

He sat down on the couch and started thinking

“The wonderbolts are gonna use clouds that are made in the weather factory… but the finale is gonna be more shocking that ever.” He thought to himself and smiling. “I should wait until night and then go and charge up that cloud… maybe then he understands not to steal my wife.”


The moon rose up slowly and the sun was setting. it was a beautiful sun set but he didn’t care… even thou he and Dash used to look at sunsets like these from the hill near the apple farm.


“Thunderlane?”

“What is it Dash?”

“You know that the wedding is gonna be in a couple of weeks.”

“How could I forget… it gonna be perfect.” He said and kissed his fiancèe.

“I know everything is set… but I was thinking… we have planned it a lot... maybe… it’s time?”

“For what?”

“a foal.” She said and looked straight into his eyes. The sunset was sending out orange rays that where hiting her beautiful magenta eyes… she looked perfect… she made his world feel perfect.

“Maybe after the wedding… I just don’t want anything to get in the way of our future.” He said and pulled his future wife in for a passionate kiss. never he had thought that it would be him that would get in the way of their future…


“Dammit Dash…” He said and tried to forget that it ever happened. the he looked to the mountain range on the distance. he could see two figures far away. he quickly found a cloud where to hide and he saw them again… flying off to the sun set while holding hooves and kissing each other… it was supposed to be him who was kissing his wife and flying off to the sunset… but no... this mare stealer took it from him… but he would learn his place after tomorrows show…

Evening turned to night and Thunderlane made his way to the weather team HQ and opened the doors. He could see a shipment of clouds near the door with a note on it “Wonderbolt’s”

He looked at the clouds trying to found the large thundercloud… and when he saw it…

“Come here my love…” He said and started moving the cloud back and forth. the friction between the floor and the thundercloud started super charging it slowly. he knew how to do this with you any machinery and he also knew how to handle a super charged thundercloud after all these things were banned for being way too dangerous because they were often mixed up with regular thunderclouds. When he finally got the cloud charged up he put it back and flew off.

“That will teach you for never to steal someone’s wife again…” He said and laughed like a madman and flew off to the night.


It was the next morning he woke up early so he could make sure everything was ready for his grand plan. he quickly did his chores and flew out of his home to get something to eat.

“Maybe I’ll get some pie from sugar cube corner.” He said and landed to the door of the bakery. he got in and bought some pie and sat down to the nearest table to the door.

He saw whan the baby-blue stallion walked in with an orange filly which made Thunderlane snap his last string. not only was this stallion stealing his mare but he was also stealing his daughter and his life.

“I knew I should have dropped that little shit into the river… but no her mother wanted to drop her by the orphanage… so that Dash’s could adopt him in a couple of years and the soarin the wondeColt could steal my life…” he thought to himself. He saw how happy Scootaloo was hanging out with Soarin. They were eating pies and laughing… he couldn’t take it and left from the bakery.

“Fuck my life…” He muttered to himself and walked to the stadium. he wanted to get an front row seat for the show.


Ponies filled the stadium quickly. he got a pretty good seat from the second row. he saw his gift for soarin near the ground giving out a few craks and pops. but he could also see the VIP first row seats that Dash and Sootaloo were sitting. Once the show started he couldn’t wait for the finale… he had never been so excited about a wonderbolt show before… he always disliked the wonderbolts but he knew he would enjoy this show… or at least he would enjoy the shocking finale…

The show went on as planned but when he saw that the ‘bolts were staring to set up their finale he felt a large smile grow across his face. He saw how Soarin started his dive towards the cloud and about fifty meters before the cloud he saw how Soarin’s face changed as he realised that it wasn’t a regular thunder cloud but it was too late. he hit the cloud… huge explosion of flames and lightings shocked the stadium he saw how Dash, the ‘bolts and some medics were rushing to the stallion who was crying out in pain on the field. he wanted to watch but he had something more important to do that watch him cry in pain even thou that sounded really entertaining.

He got a bag from his saddle bag and started walking towards the VIP seats. he could see that the only one in there was Scootaloo and he knew what he had to do.

“Hi there you little shit.” he said and crammed the little filly who was screaming for help into the bag. he knew that nopony was paying any attention to them… everyone was looking at the field and tried to figure out what just happened.
he took flight while Scoots was kicking and screaming inside the bag. he knew that his plan’s phase one had worked and that now would be the time to do the sequel for it. he left the stadium behind him and heard a loud scream coming from behind him.

“Scootaloo!”