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Flat spin


"I want coffee, but not free coffee. I want to pay for my coffee like an American!"

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The cutie mark map call the mane 6 for an adventure. the map show that they need to go to a dark and mysterious part of the Everfree forest that is home to not only home for many monster but also full a ancient dark magic. They thought that the map ordered them to defeat an evil monster or something like that but when they saw why the map called them there they couldn't believe it... Soon after wards their lives are change forever and Equestria is in a civil war... The mane six is slip up on different side and their loved ones are away from them...

This fic is gonna focus on family, loyalty, morality, love and on heroes. Those are the themes of this fic and just a warning there will be shipping.

And those of you who have read my Soarindash trilogy and came here to looking for more of that... don't worry there is gonna be a lot of Soarindash and a couple of other ships in this fic.

(Rated teen because of: mild cursing, occasional violence and some mature themes.)

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 98 )

I like it.

Though some bits don't feel like the character entirely, this is pretty cool.


7571851 Changelings are misunderstood :raritycry: :raritydespair:

7573164 Most of them (Except Thorax) are viewed as monsters. Sureee Chrissy (I call her that.) might be a bit crazy as in impersonating a certain Princess Mi Amore Candenza but what if the changelings were starving... ACK. MY FEELS ARE BROKE.

7573188 Chrissy wasn't truly evil until after her defeat during the wedding. She just cares a lot for her children.

7573192 Mmm. True.

True.



WHY AM I EVEN CRYING... Why...

7573275 Some times I feel sorry for her and her children

7573278 Me too. I mean, being hit by a wall of pure love is one thing, but being thrown across Equestria is just horrible.

7573289 When I think of that I think of Team Rocket yelling "We're Blasting Off Again!!!" as they flew into the distance

The authors notes are getting really funny and this is only chapter two, HA:pinkiehappy:

7575808 i'm gonna be telling a small story with them during this story... trust me "fun" is just about to start.:raritywink:

Seems a tad rushed, pretty good anyways.

7577097 i really want to just get these first few chapter out of the way so that the real story could begin.

7579984 pegasus and pegasi... isn't it:rainbowlaugh: pegasuses sounds bit off you know. Thats not even my worst typo.

Instead of

“oh crap… we need to get out of here fast.”

Try,

OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGISH

Or some other panic attack Twilight.

Also, for words like anybody or nobody, just replace body with pony. No space included.
:twilightsmile:

Pssst, psht, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA. Oh god, that was funny. Fuck Twilight's windows!
"eh hem!"
OH GOD N- (suddenly holds spar windows and required equipment)
"I'll be back in the morning."
... Fuck...

7587991 I know that and still somehow missed it...

7577417 spitfire, soarn, sombra, cloudkicker, flash sentry

No words can describe the beauty I'm seeing right now :pinkiegasp:

Someone neeeeeeds to get rid of cliffhangers

7612466 i have embraced the dark side of the story telling:rainbowlaugh: more cliffhangrs!

7616544 My favorite clone trooper group. They didn't become Vader's Fist until they got they're stormtrooper armor.

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