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Orangeblossom1212


Hello, every-pony! I'm Orangeblossom1212! Like you, I'm an MLP fan! Love it! Litterly! I can't get enough! Well, welcome to my user page!

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Soarin and Rainbow Dash are in love. They always were, ever since height (high) school. It had always been their dream to become a wonderbolts! Soarin made the cut while, Rainbow's Father said she had to wait and go to collage first! He was forced to leave Rainbow to train and live at the wonderbolts compound. They dated for five years without any complications. They never fought, they were always happy and they were always content with one on other. But soarin never told her! For fear of loosing her. He was a changeling, changlings feed off of love, but what happens when a changling discovers love in a diffrent form? Discovers love with someling or some pony els? He left his hive once he decided he wanted something different in life. Witch he decided when he was very young, but he was still close to his hive. He had communication. Sometimes he brought food to the hive, when he came once a week to get his rations of love. Soarin had promised to himself long ago he would never feed off Rainbow Dash. He loved her and never wanted to hurt her. He didn't look at her as an easy food source, but as a beautiful mare he would give his life for. She was to special to him he loved her. Soarin's best friend (changeling) Tarnix had always supported Soarin and kept his crush a secret. Their hive was peaceful, unlike Queen Chrysalis they never harmed the ponies. some of them had homes and jobs in Equestria. Their queen allowed this as well as to have freedom to choose when they would connect to the hive mind, to get work done. They all had to do their fair share if they lived in the hive or when they came to visit if they were available,of course! However they had the freedom to develop their own characteristics, and witch jobs they would prefer to do. Their Queen was very laid back, but strict when it came to certain topics! And Soarin falling for a pony was not something she would agree with nor take kindly to. So will rainbow dash find out the truth? Will she reject Soarin? Will they get back together? Read on to find out!

Also I don't mind if anyone uses Tarnix's name or him as a character in their story. I actually encourage it if it helps writers to make more changeling romance stories! Just don't take all the credit! Please credit me!
Thank you!
-orangeblossom1212

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Comments ( 69 )

Also please don't expect any updates until my rainbows dark origins story is complete! But maybe I'll update it when I get the chance. :pinkiesmile:

This sounds REALLY interesting and I haven't read it yet, but ONE thing,

Changelings take form of other ponies, I don't think they can just have a pony form of a pony that isn't in that world ^^' Soooo technically there should be another Soarin in that world... I mean, you could always put up a 'Alternative Universe' tag on.

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I know, that's why I wanted to do something a little diffrent. In this story Soarin decided he wanted something more in life than just the hive. This was said in his flashback. However, in this story he supposable made up his own pony to live as. You can say he mashed up several ponies into one, like I've herd some other stories do but this is some what the same concept. Sorta.:rainbowhuh:

Why do so many dislike?:ajsleepy:I

If you dislike please explain why!

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Good story, but... There are capitalisation errors, and you have used their when you should be using there and some words are used in the wrong place and there are commas where there should be a full stop for better effect. There are also 3rd to 1st person jumps in the story.

Sorry for picking this apart and pointing out every error I can find but I just want others stories to be the best they can be.

~Discorded

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Thank for the feed back I'll go through it! Thank you! I never mind positive criticism! Your helping me to improve!

Queen Athnaties also allowed us to be free. To come and go as we please. Needless to say their was in fact a process everyling had to go through before they left, to make sure everything that needed to be done in the hive, had the corresponding job assigned to someling els.

"had the corresponding job assigned to *something else*." Or did you mean to use the word "someling"as short for "some changeling" or was it just a mistake?:rainbowhuh: Also interesting story, I felt like you repeated how much Soarin didn't like what Chrysalis did but I'm not some fanfic critic that'll be on your but the whole time and other than that everything was great, good job:twilightsmile: ! But poor Rainbow, she lost her dream:applecry::raritydespair: hopefully she'll get it back one day:fluttershysad::fluttershyouch:

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No, it wasn't a mistake. Someling is basically what somepony, someone. Any ways what I meant by corresponding job was that every job was assigned to a changeling. Sorry if I confused everyone.:fluttershyouch:

Okay every pony I have a short and sweet version of this story! Or I have a ponder dramatic version. You guys can do a vote to see witch you like better. Just post long or short! Thx!!
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Also I did my best to review and redo the grammar, let me know if anything els needs fixed! :scootangel:

7427932 ok:twilightsmile:but remember to correct the end of the sentence, you put els instead of *else*

7429243 Hahahahahahahahahahahaha ok thanks! Your wish is my command! :scootangel:

God !! I can not wait for the next chapter!:pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp:

Soarin poor, I wonder what will happen next.

7437845 he didn't know he didn't read her letters.:fluttercry:

P.S. I worked really hard on the grammar! It's okay? Please comment!!!:unsuresweetie:

I haven't read it yet, but I have to point out,

It's okay?

Um thats wrong, you do 'Is it okay?' I know It's means It Is but, depending where you put it in a sentence, it doesn't quite make sense there ^^' It's hard to explain.

Ehm I was sorta joking on this so don't take it seriously XD (Even thou it is wrong but eh)

Comment posted by DashiesYandere deleted Jul 30th, 2016

I like the story!
You have a lot of confidence to post a story I could never do that also...

At the Funeral
Don't worry Dashie you and Soarin are destined to be together and if Anypony interferes DEATH hehe
Slowly ducks behind cloud bushes and plays with Rainbow and Soarin dolls while laughing

7438623 OMG!!! Hahah! You are so funny! Finally someone who puts some character:heart: into their comments!

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7438973 LOL! I don't know how you did that but cool!!!!

7439207 The power of stalking
hehehehehahaHAHA
*chokes/cough*

I don't get it ,is Soarin a vampire in this story or what?
Sorry I had to ask :scootangel:

7445903 no he's a changeling! Sorry didn't mean to yell.:fluttershbad:

7446217 Now I know,thank you and don't worry I know that you didn't mean to yell:twilightsmile:

Why do so many dislike this story? :fluttershysad:

7449659 Ignore them this story is amazing :pinkiehappy:

7451638 thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it:scootangel:

* steals Dashie's Mail and reads letter, put it back in mail box *
Hehe yes it's all going as planed
Hehe

Well this earned an upvote and a track can't wait till it is updated and may I ask what is the name of the other story your talking about so I can give it a read

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What are you referencing to? The story from my blog post? I'm doing another story called Rainbows Dark Origins. I'm thinking now, I'm not going to post any future stories until their complete. That way I don't keep you waiting, what do you think? Also if your talking about the story I mentioned about the Crystal war. I have started planning it. So far it's got 42 chapters, but I probably will change things. That's just the first draft. Thank you for commenting on my story! Let me know what it was your really asking because in confused, anyways let me know and I'll do my best to reply! :scootangel:

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:heart: You like it? I so very much hope you do!

I :moustache: you a question....

Did you like the story? And secondly did you give me thumbs up? And lastly do you think I should work on the next chapter tonight?

LOL! SORRY IF IM BECOMING ANNOYING IM JUST IN A REALLY HAPPY MOOD! XD

A sincerely happy Orangeblossom,

~Orangeblossom1212

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Your story is amazing!!!!!!!:rainbowwild:

Wow! Your writing has improved, and that's awesome! You still have some errors, most of them small ones. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you!!! I've been working super hard to improve my grammar!!! Thank you for noticing that really means a lot to me!! :heart:

Did you like my story?

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It's pweety good so far! :rainbowkiss:

Love it
*finally reading this*

7575243 glad you like it! i have the last chapter the majority done and planed but I just haven't been in the mood lately to write it. I'm sorry! :applecry: please don't be mad at me! I promise to update soon!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT ENDING WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! EXCUSE ME, I HAVE TO GO HAVE A FANGIRLING SESSION IN THE BATHROOM.

7584260 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Does not compute....

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