Spectrum Blaze's therapy is going well, and he is starting to make a mends in his relationship with his daughter. Rainbow Dash has now fully mastered her powers and uses them frequently. After all, raising a rapidly growing Cloud Chaser is NOT an easy task. But like all families they have their ups and downs. Rainbow Dash and Soarin learn how to be parents, but is the stress on top of other personal issues that Rainbow Dash keeps to herself to much for her to bare?! What really happened to Rainbow Dash's mother?!?! Why does she have the powers she has? And just who and what is this shape shifting shadow creature? What is he planning on doing to her family? And will she be able to stop him once and for all? And last but not least, where's Spitfire? Will she even show her face in this story? Or is this all trickery!? 
Stay tuned!
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Orangeblossom1212
Hello, every-pony! I'm Orangeblossom1212! Like you, I'm an MLP fan! Love it! Litterly! I can't get enough! Well, welcome to my user page!
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Cool story so far!!!!!
7610305 Thank you!!!!
You should really link to the previous story. Where can I read it, anyway?
7610520 Just klick my stories tab on my page you should see it.
Just read this THANK YOU FOR ACEPTING ME AS YOUR EDITOOORRR and I'm free now so you can send it to ne but so far I've seen no mistakes.
7610568 Ok, but if there aren't any mistakes it's probably fine. I'm going to go back through it soon. I'll let you know when the next chapters ready!
k srsly ty
You do know that the average time a baby can walk or talk is 11-13 months, right?
7611208 Yes, but I was trying to make this fit into the episodes of mlp. You'll see what I mean in the end. Anyway, Pumpkin Cake and Pound Cake could walk, fly, use magic, and are starting to talk at one month old. Go back through the episodes, and check it out!
Im cringing over the fact that Cloudchaser is her little brother and oml I cant but thats completely all me ehhe...
Okay I got around to this. Funny how the only time I could read this was before the school bus picked me up. Okay so a few things I wan't to point out.
I think you meant to say flying was his strength.
Next is I feel like you're story could better benefit from longer chapters. I could help you with these if you want! PM me if you still want my help!
Also if I'm correct MLP ponies age like humans do so I don't think he would be that talkative or that mobile at that age.
I just read the whole prequel for the first time and then I saw this and I died
I need more
7614464 Remember pound and pumkin cake you'll fly and talk, and rainbow was an early bloomer!
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I guess you're right. Although I found pound and pumpkin to be evil in my opinion.
7617073 hahaha!!!
Hiatus rlly I have a condition which kills me when I see that word I've already died 7 times
7629701 Sorry! But I have some other stories I want to work on. I'll got on those soon, then I'll finish This story. I'll private message you once I decide to update this, okay?
Never before have I met such a nice person
7629737 Thank you! I think your a nice person too!
Hmm.... so far what I got from this story was; RD has been having visions, she is incredibly stressed out. The nurse is basically worse than Squidward. And some mysterious pony has a revenge planned for RD. My verdict for this chapter: A-. The chapter progressed very well, the characters are believable (Especially Cloud Chaser), and you had a few spelling errors. As for who this pony is.... I can only think of Firefly but there are a few holes in that theory so I'll need more information.
I loved this chapter the only thing wrong with it was the spelling. You shouldn't feel sorry for this story being late life happens. Please don't cancel this story I'm very interested in were this will be going. If people have a problem then they can speak to me about it I'm the one who is helping you with this story. Also you spelled my name wrong, but it's fine not the first time it's happened. Keep doing what you are doing. You're doing fine.
I think you did preety well so just you know I'm always available AND CONTINUE THIS STORY SOOOOO ADORBS!!!!!!
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Thank you for understanding. I will do my best to fix the grammar. I'm sorry I spelled your name wrong.
Phoenix Nebula, did I get it right this time? Anyway I would like to thank you for your nice comments, and just so you know, the mysterious pony is not Lightning Dust. Hahahahahahaahahahhaha! 
YOU WILL NEVER DISCOVER ME EVIL PLANS! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha! Rubs hoofs together while planning something evil. I'm kidding! Anyways thank you all for boosting my confidence in this story, I'll try to get back to you soon on what my plans are. I don't know when I'll have the next chapter but thank you for understanding.
~Orangeblossom1212
Just kidding!
P.S.
I'm sorry if I came off as rude for yelling with the caps, I kinda went overboard.
P.P.S.
Do you like my new profile pic? Also if you have any questions just leave a comment or PM me!
7728603 TOTES!!!
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No problem. It's also not Lightning Dust because this is pre-Nightmare Moon's return right?
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Wow a clift hanger
oh and FIRST
WTH????
But this is seriously amazing!
7764720 Thank you so much!
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You're welcome!
I thunk its fire fly to get revenge OR spitfire because she has a really Big crush in soarin!! P.S I'm glad you are back to writing( Not saying you weren't, I mean on story we can see)
7728603 Is the Mystery pony Spitfire? Since fire fly is in jail, and what if the pony in RD's visions is her dead mom?
7767233 Yes, Spitfire was the pony watching them through the window.
Hmm.... There are still a few errors and the sentence structure needs some work. There are a lot of run-on sentences and grammar is lacking a bit. Other than that I'd say it's good!
7888371 Thanks!
*reads authors note* Why your certainly most welcome my dear *curtsies* As I said before happy to be of service
So evrey error in this story I take full responsibility 
I wish I was just better in grammar
Should have paid more attention to grammar lessons
7888371 Yeah I just now noticed it
7890587 Don't worry about it. I told you, effort is what counts.
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Took me a while to learn proper grammar in writing. Even now I have trouble, but I've gotten better. Since I'll be editing the next chapter take note of how I fix and structure the sentences. Also If you need an example of intermediate writing I can give you a link to the first chapter of a story I'm writing.
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You too!
Also don't feel discouraged! It takes time to be a good writer.
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I'm the editor of this chap and it is my Duty to make this chap to have little to no errors and I know you might think that I'm putting myself way to high
lt fully mine.
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I thank you kindly for your words but I still feel that evrey mustake in this chap is my responsibility my mistake I feel like I failed you Orange
but that's how I feel really and I hope I can do better next time again I take full responibility with all the errors in this chap. Do not blame OrangeBlossom balme me. Non of it was her fau
7893150 Hey! Don't blame yourself like that! If you think I'm good at grammar, your seeing things. Seriously! I wanted you to help with this project, that's why I let you do it. Editing RD's Dark Origins is supposed to be a fun way to help and work on stories in the fimfiction community! Don't EVER let anyone get you down! If people have a problem with it then they can deal with me. I was the one who was ultimately in charge of the story to begin with, so it's my responsibility. Don't look at Phoenix like he's trying to get you down, instead look at it as advice he's giving you to help you improve.
7893186 You got me all wrong Orange I do see his word as something that will help me grow and do better and I do enjoy editing this story it's just I'm a perfectionist in these kinds of things so you know why I push myself this hard because I want it to be perfect
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I'm a perfectionist when it comes to art. And I was horrible at art. I failed most of my assignments. Eventually, my perfectionist side made me good at art. Now I have some of the best art in my school. Just keep practicing.
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It's nobodies fault. Do you want to know why I'm better at this than you two? It's because I've read hundreds of stories and have practiced for hours on end. If you two keep practicing you will surpass me in no time. I know you will surpass me because you two have a passion for this that I do not.
Both of you need to stop putting yourselves down. I'm here to help and before long you two will be masters at writing. Just keep at it. Every mistake is a new opportunity to get better. Don't let it get you down!
7893440 Wow that's good to know and thank you again for your word it really inspireing
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Sure!
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7890743 Hey if u need an artist I can help, but it's not digital
7901778 Thank! I'll definitely keep that in mind.