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Awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks
7857126
Thank you my good sir and I sure will
Hey whens the next chapter?
7928612
Well as soon as I get The Fabled Warrior updated to a point I like, I'll come back to this story. But my writing time is taken up by the fact that my college courses are taking a lot more time in my life. But I will return to this story in time, you'll just have to be patient as I find time to write.
7929485 ok that's good to know sorry for seeming like im rushing you I just really like this story and I hope you find time to relax as well
7929940
No worries.
I wonder whether in relationships Solar and Celestia becomes a radical change in their relationship mother-son, not to mention Luna? So becoming lovers ?!
Now that this says 'edited' you need to get away from "he said she said" and use worlds like explained, exclaimed, announced, inquired, squeked, asked, and so on. Just saying the quote then 'Name said', without further detail is repetative and boring. Kind of one of the reasons I am yet to finish this chapter. I kind of expected better styling.
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Thanks for the comment and I'll try to do that for later chapters.
was it ever explained what Art can and can't see?
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Well, Art has a natural magic that emits from her horn that acts as echolocation. She uses that to see. It comes with her talent of art. I haven't explained it yet, but now that you bring it up, it might be a good idea to bring it up. Thanks for that.
8027985 i'm just thinking because it was said she cant read but whether that's knowledge based or sight based. Besides echolocation doesnt give color perception. Perhaps her art sense is literally what it seems, just a strange sense
Not that I'm complaining or anything but how come there are more clop scenes in fabled warrior than in solar son? You don't really have to answer that or put them up if you don't want to just curious.
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Two reasons I don't put as much sex in this story than I do The Fabled Warrior. Reason one, I follow the MLP: FIM story line to create my chapters. And reason two, Twilight's pregnancy. I mentioned a few times that they couldn't completely go crazy in sex as it would hurt the foal Twilight's carrying. I hope that answers your curiosity.
8057150
Sure does. Thanks dude.
8184069 I wasn't talking about the song, but rather the scene.
8184397 it becomes invisible at certain angles, don't worry about it.
8184474 Heh... you never know WHERE I could be!
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Since this followed the source material of an episode that to this day I can't watch too closely this was the worst chapter for me luckily i don't think I get another one for a long while. Personal preference hate sry