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Still have some grammer issues but nothing too bad. It will be interesting when twilight shows up.
Sword Master i love your avatar. very clever.
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Thanks for the grammar corrections. I'll make the changes very soon.
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Why thank you good sir.
Interesting how will this affect twily?
Do you think that the ponies will like me?
I am/I'm ready Captain Stonewall.
Gentle
You don't need had
Don't need also
BTW: There are more mistakes, but I'm lazy to find them
your gonna wanna change a lot of "adopting" to "adapting" in Pulse's explanation
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I really like it, but sometimes I just get really impatient with reading or all that work stuff, however I managed to take a break for a few days, and actually rested pretty well.
Like I said a nice chapter, I hope that he is actually able to get older, I somehow always didn't liked it if some storys made the ponys in general older than Humans, which would always result into them dying before any of their partners.
sorry bro but i cant read any more of this story. it is not that it is a bad story content wise but the grammar is really hurting it. i cant really get into this story because every time it gets a bit of flow going there is a typo or miss spelled word that breaks me out of the action. And this was reading the edited chapters and don't even want to think about trying to read the unedited ones. God help your editor if this is what they looked like edited, that or you need a better editor. so sorry but i am done and a thumbs down for un-readability
So many grammar mistakes and missing periods. Also I'm not too fond of the idea of setting up for him to be a Mary Sue so early.
What's with the whole fingers and hands thing? I thought these are PONIES.
7811469 That's kinda-sorta what the "Anthro" tag means.
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out of all the places I have been around I find you here!
good to see we share similar interest in said story
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