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Bouquet is how you spell the group of flower solar gave twilight. Bo-ca would be a mispelled city.
We'll
Please not now I'm
Well the Wonderbolts will never let in a pegasus that can't even keep the sky clear.
She
She's
Then
Seriously, get an editor before posting anymore chapters.
I thought Applebloom was lemon yellow
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Thanks
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No, she wasn't and isn't.
Is she talking to herself?................................................................AGAIN?!?!
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Sorry, for those all. I can't seem to leave on name behind. Well I kind of do type them while dealing with other stuff. But I can assure you that it will stop, well hopefully
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Nah, I like finding such mistakes, but not 3 times in a row XD
Damn! Dat cliffhanger!
It is still weird that they probably want more then well 5 children, I nearly said twenty.
Sorry if I mix something up, but how fast does everything happen here? it sounds like they were just back from the vacation.
I would liked it if he would have been angry with rainbow dash because of her endangering his child, even with his protection which I never saw that he did it, it was nothing he should be so calm about. This would have also been a problem that you could have used to create some tension between Rainbow and him, where Rainbow would have to apologize to him. (I think this would have been an interessting fill for the chapter.
Well that was nice too.
while I can feel with some movies or situations, sometimes they are even a bit well....., let's just say I didn't really needed the music here, honestly I think I haven't listen to one till now.
well why not, it's not like everyone could show up since they haven't really mooved in till now.
This is what I have been waiting for. Finally some action. Anyways love the story!
The pegasus squealed and leaped into the air, and her birds ran off.
And her birds ran off
Birds ran off
Ran off
Bruh what the fuck that makes no sense and what pisses me off is I'm laughing my ass off at this very moment.