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Thanks, I'm still working with Solar and trying to show his difference. I'm not sure, but I think I'm going to show more of his humanity in the fourth or third season. I'm still working with how to push his humanity or his side of being raised by ponies. Also thanks for the feedback on this chapter.
I don't mind him enjoying his life with his wife, but they start to actually overdo it a bit in this story.
Solar always seems to get a boner whenever he can, like his body. Like he was a desperate teenage boy that would never actually get the change to make love with his wife. I just think he could actually start to get himself under control.
I know it wasn't that often till now, but somehow i is already looking weird.
I had this already once, a story where half of the chapter mostly contained the characters making out with each other. Maybe you should show that they are still able to do other stuff.
I would like some explaining soon, because there is starting to be more and more that looks a bit weird to me, and even if they like each other, I think it doesn't look good in a story if they are only making out.
Solar is cool and all, but he is the most nastiest character in this fanfic. Why? When he was supposedly calming down Twilight, HE DIDN'T WASH HIS HANDS AFTER THAT!?