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Thanks for your comments, I will go back and change it, to make it more pleasant.
7065895 You're welcome.
I know it's your story. But unless your plan was writing some kind of satire fic, with constant use of the word "fuck", a note in the description, as well as a comedy and alternate universe tag, should've been added.
It's just a little hard to take Celestia and her guards seriously when they act and talk like that. It's like you're doing it on purpose just so the kid can curse too when he grows up.
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It was an idea of mine, but I think I might go against it. Thanks for the feed back, I'm still trying to get this story where I want it and comments like yours always help it take form.
If that were true, then so many people wouldn't be vegans nowadays.
Well I decided I really like this story. So I'm going to like and fave this story. Also you just got another follower.
I don't think celestia would say this, in this manner. She is portrayed in the show as a loving pony and monarch, the best I could say is change this sentence to
Soon Solar, you will watch over this land with me.
however I am just spit balling here...
anyone else willing correct me on this one go ahead!
... he's only a few days old. teething doesn't, start until around 6 months of age...
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I think he forgot to put a time skip as well because he said something about crawling as well!
Song for this chapter...
I'll Stand by You.
By.Carrie Underwood.
Wow!!! I am only 3 chapters in and I already know that I will not be able to put this story down unless sleep.forces me to
This 3rd chapter was my favorite so far. Don't get me wrong the previous 2 chapters are amazing too. I was literally shedding tears when Princess Celestia came upon the birth mother and all that happened there. I loved when Soft Bubble first met Prince Solar Flare.
Though the best moment came here in the 3rd chapter. As soon as Princess Celestia said to everypony gathered the name Solar Ignition Flare was incredible. I couldn't read for a couple minutes because I simply couldn't see from the tears.
Now I am just as much a fan of MLP: FiM as the next Brony. Maybe more then some. So I like to think that I'm invested emotionally already in Equis and Equestria including all the inhabitants, canon and noncanon. That being said, I feel that I am even more invested in the characters in this story already. It's refreshing to see when focus is put on the small slice of life aspect at times. Too many times it seems people don't put that much effort into building characters from the ground up. They just go with a template. However it seems like Solar Flare isn't going to be one of those templates.
Keep up the good work