well that was a very nice resolution. I'm just glad they made up because those two are just too sweet for it to end badly for them and that ending with Rarity was just perfect.

"I'm so happy to hear it!" Rarity said. "So how does the spanking figure into all of this?" she asked casually.

My reaction

This was an excellent story.

was pretty awful, but it made me realise

There's this big space here...

wow just wow! Again you have proven to me that your one of the best writers on this site! Amazing Story, iam realy looking forward to more awesome stories in the future.

Well this was veeeery weird but the end was lovely. I hope some epilouge will be for this story.

7058225 This was the epilogue to Dominant Ideal.

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Well then I guess it's fair enough.

Rarity just quietly being awesome. That was the highlight really.

7089747 I don't usually like to write her, because I've never found her character to be interesting. This time I wanted to try something different and I think I hit the spot. The idea came from "From whom the belle toils" episode, where Rarity was working indirectly behind the scenes to make sure that things would go well for Sweetie. I'm happy you liked it too.

Ahhhhhhh! This was amazing. I'm surprised that you did anything more with this story but I'm really glad you did. Seeing such a cute, happy, sexy ending to it was really great.

Thanks for the wonderful read yet again. :)

Deep emotion beautiful and makes one think. Presenting oneself in such a veritable position to earn ones trust is so deep well to cop out here I can't adequately describe it but these stories shed a light on BDMS practices in a way I rather enjoyed

Yes, this was good. I particularly liked the psychological sweetie waiting for punishment aspect, but I found the transition to having sex again to be a bit rushed after the massive emotional rollercoaster. Plus the ew post enema aspect seems a bit overdone given the horror that preceeded it. I would love a follow up with the fillies talking to Rarity or scootaloo's mom. That would be an awkward conversation. Sweetie is going to have some serious bruising.

All in all i give it a thumbs up and you get +1 internet.

More of this might be fun, maybe six months or year later?

7826673 What a deep and insightful critique of this fic. What would I have done without it!

For future reference, the "thumbs up" button covers saying you like a fic or think it's good. You don't have to repeat it in the comments.

8021692 Told you. There's a lot of this kinky stuff here!