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LuneLover


Currently residing in the (literal) World's End. May not be able to respond quickly due to faulty conexion.

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Twilight is a normal unicorn who lives deep in the Everfree Forest, along with some of her friends. Together, they are happy and enjoy each other's company, until Twilight's past resourfaces, along with the reason of her actually living in the forest and faces she doesn't want to remember at all.
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Picture: http://emlan.deviantart.com/art/Everfree-Forest-260818280

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 66 )

"It all started in my brother's wedding..."

:derpyderp2:Ooo...this is going to be interesting.

6799457 I saw your comment just after I hit the publish button :rainbowlaugh:

You know, after reading this chapter, I get the very distinct feeling that Twilight's going to tell a certain group of ponies (and yes, that includes her ex-mentor) to get the Tartarus out of her life, and stay out of it!:twilightangry2:

And I wouldn't blame her one bit for doing so.

Excellent chapter, btw. Can't wait for the next one to see what happens next!

I want to see more.

EDIT:

"We could hide Twilight, and telll her we didn't hear the door." Proposed Lyra.

tell, you added another L.

6799589 That's the original idea, but there is only one who will stay her friend. I won't say more.

6799647 Fixed, thanks for pointing it out.

6800290 Hmmm, okay. Gotcha.
And I don't want you to.
Makes the surprise all the sweeter, amirite?

update soon please

6906111 I'm on holidays. I'll probably update around March.

Great chapter. I am guessing that the one that remains friends is Fluttershy since she apologized. I am guessing that they know Cadence was actually a changeling now. And have been trying to find her since then, but it is now to late. Although Twilight has been living in the Everfree Forest, which is near Ponyville I have a question. Zecora lives in there as well and the Crusaders visit Zecora a lot, do those four know about Twilight? Zecora is trustworthy and you could have the Crusaders remain friends with and side with her and her new friends especially since they are close to Twilight, and did not betray her. Looking forward to the next chapter.

6919172 In this universe, the role of Luna and Twilight got reversed (Luna frees Cadance but gets defeated, and Cadance activates the power of love), so Chrysalis was defeated. This will probably be better explained in future chapters.

As for Zecora, she may appear as a moral support to Twilight, but I doubt it because I suck at rhyming like she does. The Crusaders probably won't appear. I have no roles for them.

The indentity of the friend that stays with her shall remain a secret. *mysterious face*

good story I like it, also be funny to see that twilight's new friend are in fact changeling meant to keep twilight away form everyone.

6963700 That is actually an interesting idea: Twilight's friends being changelings sent to keep her in the forest. I wonder what excuses they will come up with. I love this fimfic! :yay: Keep up with the good work! :pinkiehappy:

7147131 I'm writing the chapter right now. I just hope I don't run out of ideas as soon as I write two more words.

man i'm dying to see more of the story!

I need a little time to organize the ideas in my mind, so It should be up somewhere in May. Anyways, I'm glad you liked it!

7194880 but the current month IS May! lol

7196001...Wait, it is?

*checks calendary*

Oh, great. I suppose I'll get to work. I seriously thought it was still April.

(As a side note, thanks for the follow!)

Any updates on the next chapter?

why i think they come see her because they need hr help with an ennemy

DON'T FORGIVE YOUR FRIENDS THAT EASILY TWILIGHT! Let them stew up their own griefs, old wounds, and regrets a while longer after they didn't listen to you at the wedding. :pinkiecrazy:

7686664 Good thing you didn't read the rejected chapter because she did exactly that.

7686671 when r u gonna make more chapters! :raritydespair: i love it! :raritycry:

7720935

I'm actually starting to write the next chapter, so it'll be out eventually. I would say by the end of this month, but I feel like doing so would ensure that it DOESN'T happen.

oh yes an actuall story were she drops out after the wedding

7727051 However, I feel you have a hole in your chapter. After re-reading your previous chapters, I found myself expecting an explanation from the ponies, or at least have Twilight tell them to get out. It just feels like you're missing something.

7727135 The Canterlot thing was because they want to do the talk in more 'neutral' ground to avoid unncessary conflict, and reunite with her family in hopes that they will calm her down and score some points with her.

So what happened, did the fale Candance get revealed or so?
I take it they managed to beat her bac at the end.
But what of Candance?

7727294 I explained it on another comment, but I'll add it on the next chapter.

7819983 When I get time or my muse suddenly decides to get home from her vacation in the Canarian Islands.

Why is there a huge space of white near the end of your chapters.

Should be interesting with her going to see Shining Armor. Shall wait patiently

Personally, I was think Shining Armor would have spiraled into depression and alcoholism...but that's just me.

7833571 I write the chapter in QuickMemo+ and then copy and paste it here. Sometimes there's a huge space left, but it takes more effort to adjust everything so that it doesn't show than just leaving it be. If it bothers you that much, though, I'll take it off.

7833639 I considered it, but with someone as Cadance in the picture it just didn't fit. Besides, It'd make this story even more dramatic than it already is.

7833973 no no, just I was just wondering why it there.

7833978 Excuse me when that chapter of your comes up?

8009228 I'm writing it on whatever free hours I can spare. I'll try to get it out before the end of the month, though.

8009737 All right, We will waiting when it arrived.

I have a bad feeling about the next chapter.

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