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LuneLover


Currently residing in the (literal) World's End. May not be able to respond quickly due to faulty conexion.

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It was just a normal day for Celestia.
Meetings, paperwork and court.
Well, it was normal, until court happened.
And she got a special visitor with a strange request.

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Well Shining Sun is an idiot for one important reason, he insisted Luna be stripped of her title because her felt most of her jobs could be don by others better, but he forgets his own logic that "thing either change or die" and insists Luna can't change and fails to see how she might be i dunno.. immensely powerful and suitable for more important things? Then again he claims ponies who really know Luna say she's a monster, and I have a feeling he's full of it. I doubt he knows Luna or anyone who knows the real Luna is his claims are bull. But then this guy is a politician and thus too wrapped up in his own life to care about having a valid point so he is written correctly.

industralizated

The word is "industrialized".

Celestia was getting angry. "And the dreams? What about the nightmares that she stops? I can't do it, because I need to be up in the day."
"You could make a special line of unicorns to do so. It's not that hard to solve."

It doesn't work that way. Luna herself says so in the episode Do Princesses Dream of Magic Sheep, "There is nothing my sister can do. She has no power in the realm of sleep. Only I can move from dream to dream." The idea that regular unicorns could do what Celestia can't is ridiculous.

Oh, and your punctuation could use some work.

6711094
True, I forgot that episode. I'll fix it later.

6710529 Yes, that's exactly how I wanted to portray him.

Well this was very sweet. I hope Shinning Sun becomes a villain in a later story .

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Oh I have great plans for Shining Sun.

Welp, sorry Shining Sun, but Luna is an essential part of a complete breakfast. Er, Equestria. I meant Equestria. :twilightsheepish:

6921502 You made my day with that comment :rainbowlaugh:

I have reviewed this HERE.

7794592 I'll go check it out.

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