When Twilight Sparkle and her friends are invited to the wedding of her estranged older brother, Shining Armor, it seems like a good opportunity for the siblings to reconnect. But something strange is ahoof in Canterlot, and Twilight is determined to get to the bottom of it. A re-imagining of the Season 2 finale.
A/N: Tags will be added as necessary with new chapters. This story has NO CONNECTION to my previous story, A Lot to Think About.
Ok you have my attention....
for now I only demand more....
interesting unique view upon the story. I like it. Hope you make a lot more.
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Thank you! The next chapter should be posted this weekend.
interesting so far. Keep going!
Hmmm....something's suspicious here...
Very nice so far. I'm keeping an eye on this.
The others are actually helping her... now that's a first
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Ya, it bugged me a bit that Twilight spent most of the wedding 2-parter going it alone on a show called "Friendship is Magic."
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Agreed.
I detect much improvement from the original...
Cue happy theme music and roll credits!
Whoa...bad news! How's Twilight going to get out of this one?
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Magic of friendship? Nah, that never works
IT BEGINS!
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I hope that's a good thing.
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IT IS NEVER A GOOD THING.
IN FACT, OUT OF ALL THE THINGS THAT COULD HAPPEN, IT IS
THE.
WORST.
POSSIBLE.
THING.
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Oh dear. Can I offer you a chaise for collapsing dramatically upon?
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NO, FOR THINGS HAVE BECOME SO TERRIBLE THAT CHAISES NO LONGER EXIST.
IN TRUTH, THEY HAVE BEEN REPLACED BY PORTALS TO UNSPEAKABLE REALMS OF MISERY AND DESPAIR, WHERE MAD GODS MUTTER IN ONLY THE BLACKEST OF TONGUES ON SUBJECTS THAT WOULD UTTERLY DESTROY MORTALS SUCH AS YOU OR I.
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Then there is only one solution: have a Pinkie Pie.
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Finally, I have been freed of my horrible caps-lock induced despair!
OR HAVE I
I can't wait until more chapters come up! The whole time I'm waiting I'm gonna be like,
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*muches on popcorn* This is intense!
Preparing for stuff.
Awesome stuff.
Huh.
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Hmm that doesn't sound good. Care to elaborate? If there's something that doesn't work I'd like to mend it.
807632 No, it's a good 'huh', just surprised by the changeling. It was 2AM, so I'm sorry about the lack of a coherent response.
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Oh I see! Cool
Many apologies for the delay in posting this chapter. A combination of RL, writer's block, and dithering held this part back quite a bit. There will be one more chapter (originally this was to be last, but it started getting a little long compared to the others) which is still in the works at the moment. Hopefully I can get that finished soon!
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it
And that last line shows why Rarity is best pony.
Interesting take on the Changelings.
Could've done without the fourth wall break.
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Which one?
I Can't Believe That The Changelings were Once Ponies.
I'm Starting to Feel Bad for Them.
Nice Story By The Way.
Before I read this I wanna know, does this Fic link with A Lot To Think About?
Okay, now this was a far better story than canon. Chrysalis's plan made sense, the conflict was well thought out, and the resolution felt unforced. Yes, well done.
hey... this says incomplete.... moar? there's moar? YAAAY! and i love how you gave twi a love interest that works with the cannon you've laid about, i count Nox as a love interest, NO MORE FLASH SENTRY!
Ok, you just summarily, - and in order no less - obliterated all of the issues I had with the Canterlot Wedding episodes. And you managed to keep the cast in better characterization than the episodes themselves.
Well. Frigging. Done! I'd send you your choice of cupcakes, cookies or pie but I have no idea where you are.
This is now how I see those episodes - from here on out this is my headcannon. It is now a three parter, has a better plot, better conflict and resolution, and we get to see Luna and Celestia be boss, which is woefully not something we get in the series. I approve whole heartily. Have a mustache.
I swear, if that pony with twilight is Flash im smashing someone.
this story is dead.
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What fourth wall break?
Alright, this is getting interesting. I hope that this Changeling could stay with Twilight. It would be a fun adventure, seeing how they could truly fall in love.
I.
Need.
MORE.
NOW!