It was supposed to be amazing, her brother and foalsitter would marry, parties would be had, her and her friends would laugh and joke, and everyone would have a good time.
That was before Twilight was cast out of the wedding.
Now as changelings fill the skies and everyone runs in panic with no help in sight, she remembers a room, deep in the heart of the castle, with just the thing to stop the changelings. The only problem:
Does she want to? Is the price too much, or does she even care?
After all, didn't her teacher say she had a lot to think about?
Seeing as Celestia isn't important after the first chapter her tag is being cut. That is all
Note* the meme which once was here is being replaced because the link decided to break
I may change the name and the descriptions to fit with an idea I got a while ago. So be prepared!!!
so what this story about?
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Well If I told you then what would be the point of insinuating this story was longer in my head? If you want to know then I'll write the next chapter OK?
Oh. Please read it too if you haven't already, it might explain a little
1) Tracking.
2) The only story I could compare to this (Even Vaguely) would be a story where after the attack and just as the cleanup is being completed, Twilight returns to her tree to "Think About Stuff"... And as I stated, this is a vague comparison since it is only about her inner turmoil about the wedding.
2a) Link (Thanks for making me find it...)
3) I really need to neaten up my shelves...
4) I love the similar bar. It gives me good stories to read.
5) I hate the similar bar. It has made my Read It Later shelf get up to like 10-20 pages...
6422187 Your picture...
it reminds me of a story I read once where Twilight was Luna's daughter and her real self was suppressed. Then, Celestia ended up in hell. I can't recall the name though...
6422543 what picture?
6422562 oops... lol, I meant your profile pic
6422572 my what?
6422592 your profile picture y'know, the one that shows half of twilight's head on one side and half of somepony else's head on the other?
6422604 oh that one is instinct by show ghost pony call my little pony: Kaiju rumble.
6422637 ohhhhh... Well it reminded me of the story lord phantom by glassalicorn
6422691 the picture i'm make is twilight turning into Godzilla like ponyform.
6422705 that is actually really cool!!!!
6422705 that's actually really cool!!!!
6422736 thank you, but you still not tell me what this story really about?
Wow, this sounds like some sort of cross between Power Rangers and Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha. Let's see where this is going.
6422743 Well have you read it yet?
6422913 I never thought of that...
truth be told I was going more for a more batman -ish vibe
6423167 I'm did read it and I'm still don't know what is about.
6423167 I'm did read it and I'm still don't know what is about.
6423485 I will send you an explanation but in short:
) + Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha(again...appearently
)
Twilight + batman + Master chief + power rangers(appearently
6423920 o...k...
Since when was this in the accusation files? Nothing like that's gonna happen... well you know, maybe.
*ehem* I meant the accusation fic collection.
Next chapter please?
6479418 sorry,
its getting done but I've had to put it off due to school. FEAR NOT!
This story has been beating around my skull for too long for me to stop. The chapter will be up before next wednesday I promise.
6480100 Sorry I am pressing (Is that the word? I am not english, sorry
) you to continue the story. I just wanted to know If you are going to continue the story or not.
Anyways, I will be looking forward to the next chapter!
6482461 it's all right, and your grammar was perfect in both comments
I have been trying to keep working on it while I work on my schooling. I have the next 3 chapters planned out but as I type I get new ideas to add to the story later, guess that's what I get for listening to so much sylphstorm!
Anyways, I'm glad you like it, I am getting done with the chapter really soon so just hang tight! I hope you'll enjoy the next bit, I have this story planned to have mini-arcs and the first one is what i'm working on!
Something just tells me she just made the wrong choice at the end there.........
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Morning-Rise-stories where is the next chapter for this story
6499334 not even started, I put my computer down and when I picked it back up i accidentally clicked publish on it,
sorry, I'll be working on it pretty much from now until I pass out so expect it soon.
6499362 ok and that ok
Had this story buried in my tabs when I was on a Canterlot Wedding kick. You definitely have my interst, hope there will be more.
6595912 I think it might be a Halo inspired story. Not sure only played Halo 1's story.
6674981 I actually was on a wedding binge when I started this story, and to tell the truth I've been swamped with classes until recently, and the time I've had off was put towards procrastinating.
I will be working on it though, I can't say when I'll get to it, but expect the next chapter by at most new years.
Really? More forgiveness? Ah-ah! I don't think so, I'm out.
6689380 Forgiveness? There's no forgiveness in the forecast, EDITOR!!!! IS THERE ANY FORGIVENESS PLANNED!?!? (enter imaginary editor) Ummm...Not that I know of...(shoves editor back into the fiery hell dimension from whence he came) See? There's no forgiveness here. Not because of any sort of resentment, that will be seen in future actions. She wont have the time to talk forgiveness for a very long while, at which time other events will have happened and the whole forgiveness idea will be rendered moot. I in no way intend there to be any forgiveness, just a lot of repressed emotions and running away from personal problems.
Edit: I do believe I know what you are talking about from the first chapter(assuming you've read it) and she doesn't forgive them, she just doesn't feel like being a jerk to everyone, there's too much happening for her to sink that low. She is taking the route of "You all screwed me over, but I'm gonna be the better mare and do the right thing." She has not, nor will she be forgiving them any time soon.
Buahahahahahaha oh this will be good to read power suit AND magicly powered weapons Hel a proves of this. Let the hunt and genocide comense mehehehehehe.
Great chapter can't wait for the next keep up the great work
6777442 Glad you liked it!
6689942 are we at least gonna see her tell theme off?
6784746 Maybe eventually, but for a good few chapters she's not going to have the opportunity, and when she does she'll be too busy to think about something like that. I don't plan on anyone knowing she's in the suit save for like three ponies and one county where she will be duchess (a duchess in a german monarchical system.) through a very strange set of circumstances involving blueblood. the people in that county however, are going to be the living legacy of the old rangers. Also, of those three ponies we have already met one and potentially another (I haven't decided on him/her). So in short, will they talk about the wedding? Most likely. Will it be any time soon? Probably not, that'll probably be one of the last arcs, she has a lot of things that need to be done in-between now and then. Hope this whole rant helps.
6785285 you better keep writing this
6873667 I am, Finals are due though and i'm working my butt off finishing the semester strong.
Great chapter. Funny infusion of the cake runs, and oven/vault. Is one of the ponies that know she is in the suit a crusader? I think it would be nice but that is just my opinion. Looking forward to the next chapter.
6920056 If by crusader you mean the CMC then I have literally no idea
! I pretty much write as I go with a general guide for how the major events work out (I cant handle a solid framework of ideas without ripping my hair out.) and I hadn't even thought about the CMC when I started writing this. I guess we'll figure out as we go wont we?
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OK thanks.
Tia and Twiley, Cake Thieves Extraordinaire!
ooraaah marine
...I have no words. Well some but you probably don't want to hear them.
7084538 I wish to hear alls the words
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That makes two of us.
For somewhat obvious reasons.
The previous chapter was good, but this one?
I'm gonna go hide til this day is over, 'cause I just have the sinking feeling that we're gonna get more of this kinda thing all day.