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Ssendam the Masked


My mask protects me from gas and Internet gnomes. What's your mask?

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This story is a sequel to Casting a Shadow


Nothing is constant, everything is in flux.

I try to stay as constant as I can, but in these changing times, all I can be sure of is that I am still good.

What people tend to forget is that good is not necessarily nice.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 45 )

... I translated it, and I'll put a spoiler over what I got.
Wubba Lubba Dub Dub?
Unless I translated it wrong, or its a joke, I'm concerned.

The return of the Makuta!!!

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Teridax is only going to get more and more dickish.

He's a vindictive bastard who is going to severely fuck over anything.

I don't get the middle finger to Umbra part. Can you explain please?

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Umbra is a character who was on a vastly different power scale to Teridax. So they continued to try to one-up each other. This culminated in Teridax destroying his copy of the Mask of Time, thus destroying time in Equestria to the point that stable time loops and random time acceleration/deceleration are the norm.

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Okay, that makes sense now, thanks!

… Well, this is a fascinating little tale I found out about. So, just to clarify, because I am a tad bit thick… (Spoilered, just in case)

-The Makuta from the last story has triggered a multiverse-wide plan using his alternates?
-The focus of this story is basically about a morally inverted version of said Makuta, only he drops the hammer rather than use a sinister scythe?
-He's made everything timey wimey wobbly wobbly?
-He may or may not be a bit of a troll?

I got that about right?

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Old Teridax fucked everything up in his Equestria.

And it's only going to get worse. Thanks to Undertale, I will plumb new depths of dickishness.

6492492 … You didn't answer my other questions. Thanks, mate.

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6490886 in the language of the bird people, it means "help me, for I am in great pain"

Why, I hear you ask? Well, it's simply because the balance of the multiverse must be maintained. Good and evil, light and dark, ...

It is concerning when someone claims the absence of light is opposite rather than what happens when light is not around, even more so when someone says there is a need for evil. Still, I do hope this turns out well, though I have a few reservations given the inclusion of what has been deemed "Understanding".

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Well, there isn't really a better word for the opposite of light.

And besides, in order for there to be good then evil must be around. Otherwise stories would just be rational discourse.

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Would defer on the previous, but disagree on the latter for the simple thought experiment of:

In a world of no evil, were you to come across someone on the street who was thirsty it would be good to give them a spare bottle of water, but were this person in the hospital and in dire need of a kidney transplant, it would be a greater good to give him your spare kidney. So it is logically false to say their would be no good without evil. There would just be good and greater good.

Now, of course I'm not saying that a story should remain in such a realm where there is only good, just that it sets a questionable tone when a character is supposed to have "understanding" of all things in the universe but whose narrative is set up stating that there is a need for evil to exist rather than sticking closer to the point that all people are sinful and could do with a bit of cleaning up their act so to speak.

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Fair enough. You make a good point.

Well, best of luck as you continue this story.

Teridax is only going to get worse from here on out.

Do you feel bad?

You probably should.

The level of sheer cruelty and sadism will rise.

Wait, do you mean more bodies? Cause the world of the beyond is gonna get overflowed at some point between this and the War of Understanding.......so many Zerglings *shutters* so many............


I all seriousness though, I can't wait to see where this goes. Teridax is now mind fucking everybody.

... Now you know you gotta have scenes with him killing other 'famous' displaced...

… Well, shiitake. Teridax Prime pulled a fast one? On a Death? Then again, I suppose anything that Understands like he does might be able to be a bit more… creative.

By the way, can we come up with a better name than 'Teridax 2.0?' Maybe 'White Teridax?' Or 'Teridax Omega?'

I dunno, you come up with something… f*ck it.

6498851 Or, since this is about alternate Teridaxes then have him go against alternate versions of other Displaced (Oh god, an evil Gilgamesh...)

Comment posted by Northern Desert deleted Oct 7th, 2015

6499610 *Rub hand manically* All of the possibilities.....all of the crossovers

6502326 indeed..... the possibilities are endless

And why am I able to read the Matoran language so easily?

I mean, I loved the toys to death, but I haven't really gotten into the new ones. And now I'm finding my self reading "I am so alone and scared. somebody please help me. Everything hurts" in Matoran like it was English.

Wot de fock ish going on... I must see more.

If you wanted a translation,
If there is something that I hate more than anything it is a lack of ambition. I also loath people who say, "Ambition is a sin."

No, Ambition is not a sin. Ambition is the purest form of three-dimensional superiority over the fifth. Sys-admins don't really know what it feels like- they have to be neutered so that they don't rise above their station. They don't know what it means to hunger after the impossible or highly improbable.

Luddites like the sys-admins will not exist in my multiverse. I would rather a mortal depose than a sys-admin. Mortals have hunger, determination and ambition on their side. The admins have no respect for. They do their job, but they stifle those of great ambition. 1st chapter of Teridax manifesto.

Wait.....wat?
HE LIVES?!
Well, figuratively speaking, that is.
BUT HIS SOUL SURVIVES!
GLORY TO THE EMPEROR OF SHADOWS!

Here's a quiet little interlude, nothing too heavy.

Too heavy?
You, old friend, have torn my heart asunder!

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Same as what these two said...The feels! :fluttercry:

I pledge my undying loyalty to Teridax! Long may he reign!

All hail Teridax!

That hit all the feelz real hard and heavy, but I loved it all the same please continue your beautiful work.

It was YOU! YOU WHO CREATED THE RICKROLL!

… I think I love you.

6495203 Hi, Here is A Private Message Regarding 8 MLP Displaced Stories That I Highly Recommend for you to make...http://www.fimfiction.net/manage_user/messages/9163041
...Nuff Said.
with thanks and Hopes Up,
From Your Biggest #1 Fan of all time,
Shane W.L. Nokes aka James S.K. Plasma aka Dark-Pulse/Darkimus-Primal

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There is no good without evil, but evil must not be allowed to flourish.
-an excerpt from one version of the Grey Jedi Code.

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Ah, so that's where that fictitious notion came from. Thank you.

6490824

Wubba Lubba Dub Dub is correct

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