Another Anon-a-Miss story. After a month of being bullied, Sunset decides to release some pent up frustration and leaves in a blaze of glory.
In this story Twilight is not an alicorn as in the actual Equestria Girls movie. Also, this does not have any connection to either Rainbow Rocks or the Friendship Games
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I like the twist, kr to me it was a twist atleast. The title made me think she was gonna kill herself with an explosion
That was an idea i came up with, but thought against it.
Yeah, sums up how I'd handle it. Although I'd probably cuss so much the censor beep would break.
Ending is a bit rushed, but over all I enjoyed it.
What's that? Another fanfic based on the worst comic related to the EqG universe?
Who could have seen it coming?
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Then why are you wasteing your time comeing here if you dont like the premise?
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And
I found these amusing. Almost like people are getting self-aware. Maybe I will start finding parodies.
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Thank you. Why write what most already know?
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Because the witch isn't dead yet.
Seems to me that everyone who was involved will be emotionally scarred for life, but at least nobody died this time.
Why isn't there a tragedy tag?
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Edited. Thanks for the heads up
The story is written at Mach 6 and took a lot of the enjoyment I would have gotten otherwise if the pace had been slower.
You realize that Twilight was already an alicorn well before the first movie ever happened right? Makes the ending kinda complete and utter nonsense.
Hmm it was rather rushed by DAMN THAT CONFRONTATION
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"Alternate universe"
In this story, Twilight was not an alicorn when she crossed over
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It was never stated that Twilight hadn't ascended yet so it leads people to assume that she already had. Just a few mentions that Twilight was a unicorn before the ascension would have gotten rid of confusion. Still it was a pretty interesting take on these events.
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Which conversation, might i ask? And is that a good or bad thing?
Its decent
Just rushed. Like if you took time to write more chapters it would have been much better
the ending doesn't really seem deserved.
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I wanted it to at least end somewhat happily, but Sunset can't truly forgive them. If I added a third chapter, Twilight would be out of character by actually hating the human counterparts for turning their backs on Sunset.
....................................That was the MOST STUPIDEST ENDING EVER! What the heck man!
It was bad enough you had sci Twi suffer and then had ehr family abandon her, but do they even know now she innocent?
Two you had their memories erased?! So they never learn or ...you know what I'm done.....
I'm sorry but i can't help but say this is one terrible Anon A Miss fic.... I can excuse the rush, excuse the grammar but the BAD STORY Telling i draw a line at.
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The third chapter was optional, if readers want a happy ending. I also wrote that characters would be out of character.
As for why Sci-Twi was bullied, i wanted to include the idea that Anon-a-Miss reached Crystal Prep. I haven't seen anything based on them.
As for the memory removal, i wouldn't think they would want to remember getting attacked by Midnight Sparkle as Sunset willingly let the event transpire.
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Why not, it better they remember they ruined two lives. While i have no problem with the Sci Twi bit, it feels cheap they had the memories removed.
So nobody learned anything, it would been better they remember it because of Anon A Miss they got hurt at least.
and why did Twilight family treat her like garbage still. that stupid. you should had them remember for that as well, so they confess the truth to her ex family.
the realization would been a horrible punishment to them.
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Actually, i had only the recent attack by Twilight removed from their memory. Everything from years ago remains.
8810916 So, Sunset’s really gone? Maybe it was for the best,” Fluttershy said looking at the ashes of the book and this is why Fluttershy must be slapped
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Well, Fluttershy did think they were horrible friends. At least she figured maybe Sunset might be happy by going home
*Punisher shoots the Human Mane 5*
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*Godzilla steps on the Humane 5
Atrocious.
Looks like you decided to Rush B
This story was badly rushed.
If it gets cleaned up to where its readable then I'll give it a thumbs up. But for now. It's a down from me.
Wait, this was the edited chapter? I'm sorry, but I can't buy that. You should really get somebody who knows how to edit, because this was just really, really bad.
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I know man. As it is it's basically unreadable. My God the grammer!
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One agrees. And I thought Wrinkle in Time was the lowest this genre ever got!
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Thank you
...Oof. This was a mess. The pacing was super wack. The opening can best be summarized as:
It happened that quickly, too. There was no time to really process any given event both because it was so briefly mentioned and because we immediately moved to the next thing. There were no brakes on this 100 meter dash. Slow down and let things happen more naturally.
I... Like, Okay. You probably latched onto the Anon-a-miss story because you have a history of being bullied. And for that I'm really sorry. Nothing I'm about to say is intended to attack you, the author, and I truly hope that writing this story gave you some sense of release or solace.
In a vacuum though, this story is everything wrong with the SadSunny genre. It reads like a self-aware parody of all the fics where the drama is so gratuitously over-inflated and ridiculous to the point that it's like an intentional joke. It's like a facetious monument to the cliches and ludicrous nature of all the horrendous attempts at this kind of thing. Everything happens so insanely fast and the dialogue is so stunted and rigid that it's as if all the characters are robots running on low battery.
The way you portray self-harm and suicidal ideation is just... insulting, honestly. It's used as a crutch to imply emotion, and as someone with a long history with both, it's just a slap in the face to read. These are serious issues with horrifyingly damaging consequences, not some cheap way to inject sadness into a fic that can't earn it by its own writing.
Please, please consider learning to write by reading. Read stories by people like Skirts or Fourths and take note of the way they create emotion. What are they doing to make the reader feel, and why is that effective? I'd recommend When I Was Thirty as a great example of how to really develop a sense of isolation and depression.
You can do better than this. You clearly enjoy writing—you published eight stories in a relatively brief period. You owe it to yourself to be better with every chapter you write.
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I can't even......you know this is just fanfic right?
She didn't booby trapped that fraking school, lame
Sci Twi chapter was retarded, I am glad that's optional.
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I would have put bombs in the school and yell, THAT'S RIGHT!!! YOU TURNED ME INTO GOD DAMN FUCKING SOCIOPATH!!!!, while the school explodes in front of me.
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Agreed.
It feels like the bare bones of an idea, and really needs to be fleshed out.
Anon A Miss happens after Battle of the Bands, when Twilight is an alicorn. (Spike also mentions the castle in the film too)
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I am aware. I decided to change the timeline. I literally posted it in the description, and I quote:
Oh boo hoo some one posted badly made clothes grow up
They say a leopard can't change its spots; well a demon can't remove their horns,” Rarity said stressing the word ‘demon’
WOW I didn't expect that from the element of generosity but why am I suprised.
CHS has issues
All of the conversation feels really wooden, like they are reading statements instead of talking with each other.
Well, that escalated quickly. Seriously, Sunset goes from not caring that she's being accused of being anon-a-miss straight to cutting. Even people who cut don't F'ing do that.