Right before Christmas, in the Equestria Girls world, Anon-a-Miss was cyberbullying the students of Canterlot High. Everyone accused Sunset Shimmer of bring the perpetrator. It hurt her so badly that she decided she wanted to take her own life. However, she is saved by hearing a certain holiday song on the radio. This inspires to stay strong during the holidays. Takes place during the Equestria Girls Holiday Comic.
WARNING: Contains spoilers for the comic.
Rated T for swearing and a suicide attempt.
I do not own the song.
The story is good but the chapters are short so maybe you should expand each chapter to give more detail for readers to enjoy
Only Pinkie Pie could have a cookie decorator launcher for these kind of things.
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I could try to
Nice use if the CCDL and at the end with Trixie
i want to see all those kids begging for forgivness to sunset
Two things. One, how the hell did vinyl hear sunset? I don't care how loud she screamed it, there is no way vinyl heard her from INSIDE THE STUDIO! Two, can we have a link to the song when you put it in? I don't remember how it goes or if it's that bad/good
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Vinyl was outside when she heard it and a link to the song will be posted in a future chapter.
7739170 ok didn't know that... Thanks for that
7727079 Presumably it's for bullying a**hole emergencies.
can't wait to see how this turns out
Before I read the story, is the Dark tag jest for the suicide attempt.
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It's for the Sunset's depression and suicide attempt.
That's a Red Flag right there. If they where really her friends they would be at the hospital waiting. Not god knows where texting her an apology!
Twilight ~ "Well, duh! You would too if one of your friends was in hospital!
Twilight ~ "What about my friend's first Christmas with friends ending at the hospital after an attempt at suicide!"
Twilight ~ "Pw-What happened?" "I JUST TOLD YOU WHAT HAPPENED!!" "Sunset Shimmer tried to kill herself after her friends abandoned her!"
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You heard Maud, Sunset will not be accepting visitors.
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Good one pinkfloydpig!
This is gonna be a wild ride.
This has been a great story so far
It's a little rushed in places, and your wording could use some touch up to make it flow better, but you have a fairly solid idea here. I'll keep reading.
This has been one darn fine story.
I actually liked what Vinyl did. Thought it was a kind thing for her to do
hope to see another chapter
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I'll have the final chapter up by Christmas. School and my other stories have taken up my time.
It also figures the human Pinkie Pie is enjoying the event of the cookie launcher and decides a taste.
Sunset Shimmer's blood is upon the hands of everyone at Canterlot High.
A lot of deleted comments here.
Not a bad ending at all.
Sunset is supposed to be Trixie, and that's the only error I spotted but I'll be on the lookout for more!