It's Flurry Heart's 1st birthday! Cadence and Shining Armor have invited all of their friends over to the Crystal Empire to celebrate the crystal princess. However, no party is complete without it's share of wackiness. Flurry Heart is acting strangely, and a series of teenaged party games lead to some confessions and awkward moments.
The real drama comes up when Starlight Glimmer's worst nightmares come true when Queen Chrysalis crashes the party to get revenge on her. Overall, this is a party no pony will ever forget.
Rated T for slight adult humor and a bit of cursing.
Chapters (4)
Wouldn't that be an argument Chrysalis will do something like that?
Nice story so far.
I'm curious where it goes.
A few suggestions:
Should be "all".
All the other times you used "love". Is this change intentional?
At first Trixie seems to know about Flurry, but suddenly she asks who Flurry is. Was that intentional?
Last thing: It's Cadance, not Cadence.
Nice first part but is this fanfic just an excuse to slip in a Starlight/Trixie ship cause if so I'm ok with that.
Like how Flurry Heart's birthday is on the same day the season 6 premiere aired. Makes sense.
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It's a semi-ship. I won't spoil anything but things will get complicated at the party.
7994929 Awesome!
I see what you did there.
Nice chapter!
I'm curious what will happen next.
I like that Party Favor, and Cheese Sandwich were in this chapter but will Vinyl be in the next chapter? Also how do the ponies know about humans? Finally I above all like this chapter but now that I think of it, it's kinda weird putting all this effort, all this time, and all these bits for a 1 year olds birthday day party. I never had a birthday party when I was 1. All my family really did was put in front of a cake and started singing to me like they expected me to know what was going on. Anyway like I said good job.
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It's weird pony logic I thought of on my own and Flurry is a princess so Shining Armor anf Cadence go all out for her.
8077929 Well I guess it makes sense since she's an alicorn baby princess.
What do you call a running knee strike?
Party time!
Ex-Queen you meant.
You know what make getting Flurry? A giant mace.
Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
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Just for Starlight's nightmare in chapter 1.
10,000 bits say Spike has a special gift for Flurry.
Wait for it...
Well, what did he expect?
Here it would be the other way around: One would be clapping, all others would be busy taking pictures.
A small suggestion:
I would rather write "caused another Ice Age", since we don't know how many they already had. And it is could up there in the empire.
And maybe instead of scolding the tourist I would rather make Shining chuckling something like "Yeah, and that too... Not her proudest moment." I mean, the tourist is kinda right.
But write whatever you thing is better.
By the way: It's Cadance, not Cadence.
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Like what? Is it something cute?
Please update.
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I will soon, I have several other stories to write too, but I won't forget this one.
K thanks for the info.
Will this story be continued and finished? I am curious.
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I recommend removing the profanity. I hate curse words of all types.
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It will be, I’m really busy with school and my other stories at the moment.
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Thank you much, keep me informed.